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Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Nahrung commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Pinemoor, Here We Come?
Headstall wrote 'The Malaise' and that story was also built around a romance between two shifter males. -
I think it would be really cool if Jack just slept with Nick and sucked him off.
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I'm getting the sense that the condom breaking and/or Ryder somehow 'breeding' Danny would awaken something in Danny to reveal that he, Danny, is Ryker's intended mate. I'm still puzzled that nobody asked, nor has Ryker said, why he's so certain that Pembroke is his fated mate... 😐
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Laura, this is so cool... I've been reading you on Nifty (Sunny Hill saga) and have been frustrated at not being able to give you feedback, ask questions, etc. And now I find you on GA! How cool... You're right, GA is like a family even for those who don't come home very often
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Beyond all Misunderstandings
Nahrung commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Beyond all Misunderstandings
I just remembered another werewolf story by Headstall where the betrothed wolf couple have a rather violent mating ritual that involves the alpha biting his mate to 'mark' them as their own. Maybe that's what the violent interaction between Ryder and Pembroke was about. After all, Pembroke seemed to recognize Ryder and allowed him to come to his office after telling him on the phone that he was his mate. -
Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
Nahrung commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
Great chapter, as usual. I can't remember, was there an encounter between Lucas and Boone in Larkspur in one of the previous stories or did you write something about it in this story? I know Lucas said it was bittersweet when we went to Larkspur to find Boone and found out he was with Coy. Alas, another Sheriff to find a lover for... -
But he did! 'If you put your fingers on the underside of his wrist, you can feel his pulse. It might take you a bit to find one, but be patient and calm and you’ll feel it… and that should help you relax, which is what you really need to do.” '
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Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
Nahrung commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
I thought I missed something and reread Ch. 12. Thanks for clarifying... story now makes more sense. So sorry to hear of your losses. honestly, I don't know how you can even write chapters like this in a story while grieving big losses in your person life. Then again, maybe it was a welcome break for you. Take care, my friend... Neal- 54 comments
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Hey, Carlos... Do you mean to be sending out story outlines? This is the third one we've received, but no chapters...
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I have played in 'best-ball' tournaments... it's great fun! Good chapter...
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Nice chapter... I can't wait to read the boat's chef's interactions with and reactions to these kids! I'm sure that the kids understand the loving hostility between the Abello family members...
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WOW! Akuzio... Jacob killed Q... I never saw that coming... Sad... very sad for both of them.
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Damn nice story! I read all four chapters in one day and very glad I did! So, I guess we're headed back to Larkspur... COOL!
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OK... I get it... it hasn't posted yet... Sorry...
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Are you posting the sequel on GA? I can't find it...
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Yeah... sorry... I don't specifically remember why apparently lost interest. it very well may not have been because of 'incredibly slow posting'. Sorry if I got this wrong.
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I think I must have stopped reading this story at some point because I really don't remember anything from the last several chapters. I totally loved the story and I'm looking forward to the sequel. I started reading it again because you started posting it again on Nifty in preparation for the upcoming sequel or Part 2. From the comments I'm reading from way back, I'm guessing that I may have lost interest because of incredibly SLOW posting. So... Is it worth my time reading the sequel or are you planning to continue incredibly SLOW posting? Thanks!
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Excellent story with an excellent Epilogue and I've learned to expect nothing less from Carlos Hazday!
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Wonderful story! I read it all in one sitting... I found it when checking your author page after making a comment about the lack of progress on Sacrum. Then I found out that Sacrum is on 'Temporary Hold'. There are a couple of your other stories I'm going to check out. Thanks for writing!
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Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
Nahrung commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
OK... I've read the last chapter three times just to remember what's going on. PLEASE? -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Nahrung commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I think that Dani has something that the Carandini's want but neither Dani nor the Carandinis know what that is. Is this story already written or are you writing and posting as you go? In any case, I would really appreciate more frequent or at least larger postings. I love the story but, damn... -
Chapter 26: A Lovers’ Quarrel
Nahrung commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 26: A Lovers’ Quarrel
I'm loving the story... I'm glad that you posted again as I was starting to worry that the story would become another story that just faded away unfinished... I reread the last chapter and think I've figured out all the character connections... It now makes sense where this is going. -
Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
Nahrung commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
Looking forward to, and getting a little impatient with, getting on with telling Boone and Coy the good news! I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter... again... I'm a little surprised that Coy is seen as being the 'enlightened one' when it was Boone who lead the way... Hmmm... -
Wonderful beginning to a continuation of one of my favorite stories! Thank you so much for bringing Boone and Coy back to life! I'm curious as hell to find out what the old Sheriff has going on... It seems ominous, but then, he was a bit cryptic back at the old town too... lots of cryptic hints, tips, winks and nods. I wonder what he's up to.
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Cadet Third Class • III
Nahrung commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
I'm glad to hear that Rich and his friend are okay but, damn, I hope you don't spend too much time on their sexual prowling and exploits. It's getting a little tiring. You didn't spend this much narrative on CJ's sexual details... 😐
