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Nahrung

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  1. I am often annoyed when I hear the titles 'Survivor' and 'Hero' tossed around when it often seems that so many of these people just managed to wait out their difficult situation until it changed, until they were rescued or helped out by others and, through no actions on their own, until it changed and/or improved to their benefit. Andy is a true survivor! And Andy is a true hero to anyone who has decided not to give up. When others would just give up, Andy persevered! He wanted LIFE, to LIVE whatever life he could, and DID absolutely everything he could to make his life as good as he could. He never asked for a hand out; never expected anyone to rescue him; never asked for anything he didn't work for. Andy is a true Survivor and a true Hero.
  2. WOW, WOW, WOW! This is the break I have been longing for since the beginning of this story and has kept me coming back! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! Andy FINALLY gets the break in life that he didn't even know he deserved. He finally has the ray of hope in his life that I, and I think all of your readers, have been hoping for 'ad nauseum' since the first chapter. Merry Christmas!
  3. As usual, this chapter is pregnant with anticipation. Something has to give. Andy. although enjoying his newfound freedom is, again, just hanging on the edge of exposure. I'm looking forward to some change in Andy's life... He almost started to run again... Thank that he didn't. C'mon, man! You could carry this on for months and it's on the verge of being annoying. SOMETHING different has to happen, and PLEASE don't have Andy back on the road again. I'm anticipating that either Andy or Zander is going to come out to the other; that Andy will be forced for one reason or another to get honest about his past; that Zander's dad is going to help Andy find out what happened to his miserable, despicable dad; that Andy will finally experience relief from his past. I guess I'm hoping that there will be a few chapters about Andy learning about real life in the modern world, experiencing what normal kids experience, like with the movie and ice-skating. I was amused that Andy never had a Coke before and was surprised by the carbonation and sweetness of the beverage. It reminds me of the stories of kids raised by monkeys.
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    Chapter 1

    Hmmm... I dunno... It was a bit one-sided but I guess it worked out...
  5. Hi Bill... I have been reading this story for the last couple of weeks and finished it just now. What a wonderful, beautiful story! Thanks for writing! Neal
  6. As much as I'm enjoying this adventure, it's also wearing me down. I'm sure that you don't want to give anything away, but would you please give some indication of when Andy might get some relief from his torment, be able to tell someone his story and find redemption in his life?
  7. I'm so sad... I really want Andy to get through this. I'm just on the edge of my seat waiting for SO MUCH to happen... Really, Parker, this is such a painfully and tense long arch in the story... How much can Andy and the rest of his new world endure. How much can your readers endure? PLEASE move this story along...
  8. I just wanted to say HI... I'm following A-Z and Autumn. I can't seem to get into anything else and the stories I'm following aren't showing up in the 'Stories I Follow' section of my Account. HELP!
  9. ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL STORY!!! I started reading this at CJ Summer and got pissed that I thought the story ended. Carlos assured me that the story would continue with 'Autumn' and I asked him if he posted on Gay Authors and he said that he did... His only condition for telling me that he posted on Gay Authors was that if I started reading there, I'd give him positive reviews. ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!! Neal
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    Library Reading

    OK... I finally figured out how this works. I started reading today. I tired to leave a review after Ch. 10, and then again after Ch. 11. So I finally figured this out. i just want to say that i am thoroughly enjoying this story. I almost quit after the first few chapters but I continued on and here I am at Ch. 13... Great story...
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