Nahrung
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Nice chapter... I can't wait to read the boat's chef's interactions with and reactions to these kids! I'm sure that the kids understand the loving hostility between the Abello family members...
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WOW! Akuzio... Jacob killed Q... I never saw that coming... Sad... very sad for both of them.
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Damn nice story! I read all four chapters in one day and very glad I did! So, I guess we're headed back to Larkspur... COOL!
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OK... I get it... it hasn't posted yet... Sorry...
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Are you posting the sequel on GA? I can't find it...
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Yeah... sorry... I don't specifically remember why apparently lost interest. it very well may not have been because of 'incredibly slow posting'. Sorry if I got this wrong.
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I think I must have stopped reading this story at some point because I really don't remember anything from the last several chapters. I totally loved the story and I'm looking forward to the sequel. I started reading it again because you started posting it again on Nifty in preparation for the upcoming sequel or Part 2. From the comments I'm reading from way back, I'm guessing that I may have lost interest because of incredibly SLOW posting. So... Is it worth my time reading the sequel or are you planning to continue incredibly SLOW posting? Thanks!
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Excellent story with an excellent Epilogue and I've learned to expect nothing less from Carlos Hazday!
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Wonderful story! I read it all in one sitting... I found it when checking your author page after making a comment about the lack of progress on Sacrum. Then I found out that Sacrum is on 'Temporary Hold'. There are a couple of your other stories I'm going to check out. Thanks for writing!
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Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
Nahrung commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 34: The Danish Gambit – Part I
OK... I've read the last chapter three times just to remember what's going on. PLEASE? -
Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
Nahrung commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 30: The Assassin’s Bullets
I think that Dani has something that the Carandini's want but neither Dani nor the Carandinis know what that is. Is this story already written or are you writing and posting as you go? In any case, I would really appreciate more frequent or at least larger postings. I love the story but, damn... -
Chapter 26: A Lovers’ Quarrel
Nahrung commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 26: A Lovers’ Quarrel
I'm loving the story... I'm glad that you posted again as I was starting to worry that the story would become another story that just faded away unfinished... I reread the last chapter and think I've figured out all the character connections... It now makes sense where this is going. -
Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
Nahrung commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
Looking forward to, and getting a little impatient with, getting on with telling Boone and Coy the good news! I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter... again... I'm a little surprised that Coy is seen as being the 'enlightened one' when it was Boone who lead the way... Hmmm... -
Wonderful beginning to a continuation of one of my favorite stories! Thank you so much for bringing Boone and Coy back to life! I'm curious as hell to find out what the old Sheriff has going on... It seems ominous, but then, he was a bit cryptic back at the old town too... lots of cryptic hints, tips, winks and nods. I wonder what he's up to.
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Cadet Third Class • III
Nahrung commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Third Class • III
I'm glad to hear that Rich and his friend are okay but, damn, I hope you don't spend too much time on their sexual prowling and exploits. It's getting a little tiring. You didn't spend this much narrative on CJ's sexual details... 😐 -
Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Nahrung commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
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Hmmm... It's my understanding that Freshman Year involves a lot of the same discipline and training as in Basic training... lots of harassment from upper-classmen, having to eat at attention, etc... I may have been misinformed but I don't think the BS is over for Richie...
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Nothing new... nothing to see here, folks. The Wills of the world have always been there and are still among us today. The only difference now is that we know them and recognize them. Still doesn't change the damage they have done and will continue to do. We have to change our approach to all these haters. Fighting with them only makes them angrier and stronger. Instead of 'calling them out' we have to figure out a way to 'call them in'. I heard an interesting piece on NPR about this the other day... interesting concept...
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I sure hope that Rick soon grows a couple and tells Rita McKee to back off and stop pretending that she has a thing going on with Rick. I get that it's a small town and that Rick has a pretty high-profile job but, jeez, this is getting really tedious.
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Chapter 12 Confessions and Commandments
Nahrung commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 12 Confessions and Commandments
I was getting tired of the flashbacks and now I understand... I did a bit of dream work back in the day. I saw where this was going but I didn't know if you would go there or not. Good for Coy to call Boone out! Good for Boone for taking the risk of being honest with Coy. I can't imagine a better way for a couple of cowboys to get it all out and, speaking of getting 'out', nice touch with them going to bed and 'sharing the warmth' with one another... :) Would you mind describing Boone and Coy again? -
So many loose ends and questions... Why don't Rick and Gus exchange phone numbers? Could Gus be 'Mr. Sexy Hunk' on 'X-Pants.com'? Why won't Rick call Rita out on her lack of payment of bills and standing him up when she told him that there would be a check at her office for him? And why won't Rick make it clear to Rita (and his dad) that he has NO interest in anything other than a business relationship with her. The story seems to be getting overwhelmed by unanswered questions.
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Loved the story and sorry that it came to an end... I've known people like Armie and even befriended a few. They're tough nuts because they have to be. They only accepted my friendship because they figured out that I truly liked them and wanted nothing from them other than friendship. It's a tough life sometimes.
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Loved the story... I've met people like Armie... Is the story over?
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You might want to consult with Headstall about this... He is the master of shape-shifting! :)
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I'm 'kinda' liking how you time shift and flip-flop the story of CJ. Obviously 'Hail To The Chief' was not the end of the CJ story. Anyway... Really liking this story...
