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Chapter 6 Safe Haven The sound of his Father’s voice had Joey nearly jumping out of his bruised and battered skin. Dad looked at me with sadness in his eyes, and I looked back at him with flames of hatred in mine. I nodded yes to his unvoiced question, letting him know I had no doubt from the way Joey was reacting that the voice we were hearing did indeed belong to Joey’s Father. Dad looked back at Joey as we began to hear several loud
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Hey to all you new people!!! As you are finding out already there's a lot of super cool people that are very helpful. Don't be shy in asking anyone for help. If they don't know the answer, they'll know which direction to point you. I joined back in August and it feel like home here now. I had several people offer to help me and it really made a difference. One of the first one to offer was Andy, aka Quonus10. Enjoy your time here and I look forward to reading your stories and/or poems. Billy
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Tanner is a sweetie. And I think Richie will play a big role in helping Justin in the end. And my thing about being Justin, is having Taryn for a boyfriend
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I really loved the beginning. I hope to read all of this story wherever I can find it. You really should have received a lot more reviews with positive comment before now. Keep up with the story, because I really feel you have a great tale to tell.
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A very good conclusion to a very good two part story. Although I have told you I hunger for more concerning Jason and Peter; with the way you brought their story to an end, I can happily live with this and use my own imagination to fill in the rest of their lives. I thought the way you handled the sentencing was brilliant. Awesome job Andy. I enjoyed both a lot.
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That's a really nice start. I look forward to the next chapter! Told ya I notice people that notices me, even if I am slow
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Awww Thank you Tim. I promise to tie it all together, But you really don't want me to tell you now do you? Ok, the person that gets murdered is..... Sorry, I can't I promise it won't be a year Thanks again for taking your time to read and leave a review. That means a lot to me.
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I'm really glad it's not from a personal memory. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. It really does mean a lot to me.
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Thank you for your help Wayne. With Trevor finding all my errors and you fattening up the story, I think this was a good chapter. I hope everyone enjoys it!
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Thank you VERY much Tom. I had some good help this chapter putting some more meat on the bones. I learned a lot and I hope it shows in every chapter here on out. Good friends and loyal readers makes it easier to sit down and let my heart pour out the story. And now with my head engaged as well.... time will tell if I have a good story in me.
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Chapter 5 Red Storm Rising Joey just dropped his head, and laid it on his desk. I took a quick glance at Mr. Ison, and saw he was engrossed in something, not paying us any attention. I was kind of in shock. I had never seen anything like this before, and I was afraid where this was going to take me; but I liked Joey, and I was scared for him. I wasn't sure why yet, but I was scared. I got up, and went over to Joey. I leaned over so
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Thank you Joey for taking your time to read the story and for leaving a review. It means a lot to me when people like you leave comments.
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Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
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Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Sorry about making you impatient, but that's probably a good thing Thank you for your kind words. I try to balance everything out and make it fun to read while setting up the characters, Again, thanks for reading and leaving a review. Your comments makes it worth while to continue the story and to write it in a way that's entertaining. -
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Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Yeah, its no tat and its sad as well. But, if the boys will do the right thing in the right way, both can come out on the other side stronger and free from the past. Thank you for your review and editing Trevor. -
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Thank you Conner! Yeah, all the hints are there. Now the question is, how are the boys going to handle it? -
Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon I walked back into my room stunned. I haven't seen anyone that scared since Timmy threw a baseball through the Presbyterian Church’s window back when we were eight years old. I looked over at Roger and he looked almost as concerned as I was. “I reckon he’s in for a whopping from the way he talked on the phone and acted after he hung up.” Roger said. “I don’t know, but he sure acted scared to me.” I said
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Thank you Mike for taking your time to read the story and leave a review. It encourages me to write a better story. Chapter 4 is with the editors.
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Why be sorry when in fact there is a story within the poem. Here, I used the imagery to give you a taste of what was a traumatic time in my life. The story is my fight with my fears and how I was able to overcome them with the help of my family and friends. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a review. It means a lot to me. Again, Thanks!
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Happy Birthday KC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you for reading and taking your time to leave a review. That means a lot to me. Thank you. I can't say exactly what's going to happen, but maybe with a friend like Andy, things will get better. But you're right, no matter how things turn out, it's a sad situation.
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Time tells all tales as I like to say. But Joey did seem upset for some reason. I like to comment on something here that Conner brought up. I really do like to give credit where credit is due and Trevor deserves a lot of credit for taking what I hand him and making me look a lot better at this than I really am. I don't know how Joey feels exactly; but it appears Andy sure likes what he sees when he's looking at Joey. But will he overcome his fears to let Joey know? Again, time tells all tales
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Yup, pay the fiddler! Around here there's a lot of square dancing going on every weekend with the fiddle and banjo as the main instruments. So pay the fiddler here is the same as pay the piper. No fiddler, no square dance. Thanks for reading and your warm comments. They make writing the story worth while in ways a lot of people don't understand.
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Trials and Tribulations Chapter 3 is now posted. A story about the trials and tribulations of Andy Collins and friends as he confronts his sexual orientation in a small mining town of Pine Hills nestled away in the Appalachian Mountains of Eastern Kentucky. Trials and Tribulations
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Chapter 3 New Friendship I figured, sooner or later, we would be called to the office, but I didn’t expect it to be within ten minutes. This was one of those consequences I had said damn to. I guess it was time to pay the piper. I shrugged, threw my arm around Joey’s shoulder, and with more confidence than I really felt, I told Joey, “Let’s go see Mr. Horn and get this over with.” Turning to Roger and Timmy, “Look, I’ll just tell Mr. Horn
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