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  1. Enoch
    Thank you Nephylim. Your advice is dead on as always. *hug*
  2. Enoch
    I'm looking for feed-back here concerning a scene in chapter 12. The scene takes place in church. Without giving too much away, the pastor is giving his Sunday morning service sermon. The whole sermon is NOT quoted, but a couple of verses and a small story is a part of the dialogue. The message is positive towards gays and a positive stance is take by some. My question is this: Is this too much religion, even though it will play an important part in later chapters? I really need your opinion on this. ~Billy~
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    Valentine's Day

    Enoch commented on comicfan's blog entry in Wayne's Updates

    I hope you had an enjoyable day Mine, well, it sucked.
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    Chapter 4

    Enoch commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I'm looking forward to his first day at work. It should be an eye opener Good chapter Wayne. But more please
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    Thank you Time for another review. I'm glad you're all caught up now. Chapter 12 should be published soon I think you're right about the average teen, but maybe our Andy isn't so average. One thing is for sure, he is an all in or all out kind of boy. I think one of the problems with the way I'm writing this story, is the time line. Chapter 1 through chapter 11 covers only six days Sometimes we forget that, the first week of school.
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    Hey Tim! Thanks for the review! You're right! JT wasn't allowed on school ground and that's why the principal turned him away from the game. But some people think they can do anything they want. As for the camp out, there's not much I can say about it since it hasn't happened yet Stay tune, there's plenty of drama coming
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    I really liked this chapter and the story. I looked forward to reading more and more.
  8. Enoch
    Of all the stories here on GA, which one would you like to see on the big screen and why?
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    Just One Word

    Enoch commented on Roan's story chapter in Just One Word

    Roan, thank you for sharing a part of yourself. I felt the emotions in it and that takes talent. I look forward to reading more of you work in the near future.
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    I don't see it as a victory either. I'm sad as well that love isn't free from being characterized as either straight or LBGT. Love is Love.
  11. Enoch
    Ahhh I didnt know that
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    member title?
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    Thank you Lisa! It's awesome that you liked the chapter. That really brings a smile to my face and makes writing it well worth while This week (time-line not the week of Feb 5th - Feb 11th) will answer a lot of questions, but will cause more questions. I hope you will enjoy!
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    Thank you Wayne. Good luck to you too!!! You certainly deserve it!
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    Thank you so much Conner! I was kind of worried about that Pastor's chat with the boys that it might come across wrong to some people as preachy. But, I felt there was a good message in there.
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    Chapter 3

    Enoch commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Okay, more please I love it! I really look forward to chapter 4! As always, good job Wayne!
  17. Enoch
    Thank you Wayne. I was hoping you'd like it. And you were right. It made a huge difference!
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    It's always been JT for James Thomas, in the first chapter couple of chapters I did have it both ways which I did correct Thanks for you kind words and support as always Benji. I kind of liked the Pastor myself And All for One and One for All.
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    Thanks Tom, I'm looking forward to see what part the pastor plays in the story. I liked him too. God does work in mysterious ways. As for TJ, I see more trouble from him in the near future.
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    Chapter 11 Keeping the Faith I felt the sun on my face the next morning, as it came through my window. Its warmth on my body didn’t compare to the warmth I felt in my soul, from Joey. The sun’s rays highlighted Joey’s golden hair, almost making it look, as if he was wearing a crown of gold, or better yet, had a halo encircling his head like an angel. I knew there were many obstacles we would have to overcome in life, but I was certa
  21. Enoch
    I like this story and the main character, Jacob. I look forward to finding out more about him and the boy that has stolen his heart.
  22. Enoch
    Thanks Daddy. I agree its really really hard to choose between the nominees. I like all of them and recommend each of them, even the offsite ones. Two of them are a couple of my all time favorites - The Fall by Mike Arram and Sentennial Mountain by Sequoyah
  23. Enoch
    Well Nephylim, I do like my story, but I like the others as well.
  24. Enoch
    LOL I said what I meant
  25. Enoch
    Thank you KC. But you are the one full of it.... amazing talent
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