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What would you prefer?
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Your observations were spot on and what I need to make my work more enjoyable to read. I assume you are interested by your post. As I posted, I use goggle documents program to write and give my beta and editor total access to the chapters at their convenience. I can e-mail you the link to my documents and then give you access.
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Sorry it's been so long, but life has a way of changing one's priorities, but here I am attempting to finish both The Field of Love and Trials and Tribulations; however I am seeking both a beta reader and an editor. Here is a post I left in the writer's corner. Due to the length of time between posting. I've lost contact with my beta reader and editor, one to death. I've authored Trail and Tribulations, 2011 Readers Choice award winner. and beginning to restart The Field of Love story. I begun work on chapter 9. Therefore, I am seeking both an experienced beta reader and an editor to assist me in this endeavor. Send me any questions you may have. Here is what I am working on now. After Sammy had been hastily ushered into the surgical waiting room by one of the nurses, he glanced around the room and noted a 40 inch flat screen TV tuned to the Weather Channel with the sound turned off. A family of three sat across the room from Sammy with the woman, whom he assumed was the mother, whispering to her small child. The little girl looked to be around the age of four and clearly didn’t like what she heard, as evidenced by the frown she wore. The father’s eyes were red and his face wet from what Sammy thought had been from crying. He stared out the windows behind Sammy with a sad expression. His eyes osculated between hope and despair as he searched for answers. Sammy looked down at his blood covered hands and leapt to his feet. He had an urgent need to wash Tony’s blood from his hands.The little girl was staring at him wild eyes and opened mouth when she noticed Sammy for the first time. Sammy felt guilty for shocking the child. Quickly muttering an apology to the girl’s mother, he turned to exit the room as fast as he could. But the father of the little girl blocked his way. “Are you okay son?” the father asked with concern noticeable in his voice. Sammy looked into the father’s eyes and saw that the man had a good spirit. “Yes, sir. A friend was hurt and I need to wash up. I want to feel that my beta or editor likes the story's characters almost as much as I do and wants to protect them even from the author. For sure there is room for open discussion. I use google documents so that at anytime my beta/editor can make suggestions/edits as they see fit. There is as much time as needed within reason and given life situations we all have to navigate. As for story reviews, Trails and Tribulations was written prior to GA up grades. You are free to look at the reviews and comments left at the time.
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Thank you. I'm ready to write again. And it looks like you're practicing to edit 😉
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Due to the length of time between posting. I've lost contact with my beta reader and editor, one to death. I've authored Trail and Tribulations, 2011 Readers Choice award winner. and beginning to restart The Field of Love story. I begun work on chapter 9. Therefore, I am seeking both an experienced beta reader and an editor to assist me in this endeavor. Send me any questions you may have.
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Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
Enoch commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Paw Patrol Returns
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You have started a very good and interesting story. One i look forward to reading daily.
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I find myself in complete agreement with you, Philippe.
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I believe the ideal for a girls academy and the reasons Adam gave for it are both proper and noble.
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Crow doesn't taste THAT bad 🤢
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Thank you for another heart warming chapter.
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Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
Enoch commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 23: Mastering Manipulation
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Time never really stands still, even though it may seem it at times. Case in point, we are rapidly moving through Adam's love-filled life. Yet, we are allowed to experience the important parts that makes this an amazing story.
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I will never forget working with Wayne on my Trials and Tribulations story. He was my beta reader and mentor. Through it all, he was kind, encouraging, instructing, and a friend. I'm a better person for having known him and the world was a better place having him in it. I will miss him,
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Another wonderful chapter.
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Always a pleasure to find a new posting on this story. Thanks for keeping it going!
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It's getting hot in the proverbial kitchen
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I agree, another sweet chapter; however, I'm fine with the overall output of the story's chapters. Yes some people's chapters are longer, I myself had a few chapters 8,000 or more long, BUT, mine and other's came out once a week or longer in between. CL Jobe is averaging 2,000 words a day or 14,000 a week. I can live with that. That's for sure.
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I'm always pleased to see another chapter of this wonderful story posted.
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I did not see this coming, at all.
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I want to comment, but I fear I would be too politically incorrect for this site. However, I will say it's easy to know this is a small community by how people there react to injustice.
