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  1. Aditus

    Dinner with Gideon

    Kavan needs to understand his reaction to Gideon; it may prove to be very important at some point. I enjoyed writing this part, I'm glad you loved it.
  2. Aditus

    Dinner with Gideon

    Good! Kavan needs to understand his reaction to Gideon; it may prove to be very important at some point. Maybe he'll need some help to figure this out.
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    Dinner with Gideon

    Well, a vampire has nothing but time...
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    Dinner with Gideon

    Perfect! How old was Sina? Imagining a 30-year-old in a see-through nightgown is different from imagining a 70-year-old. Erm...yes. I would say, choose what ever setting you like, but I imagined her to be end twenty too mid thirty. Did Gideon wipe her memory with that last bite? Or was a spell involved after? Is the ability to read minds Gideon’s second ability? My vampires can read a human's mind and or memory when they bite them to give them pleasure or pain. Being a powerful vampire, Gideon can supercharge a mind, which means wipe a memory. Ry has reached that level of fighting ability already?? Rylan has been a police officer, which means he already had certain skills, but yes he seems to be a talented fighter, even more than his brother. Anyways. this is candidate training, which means he tries out for the lowest level. These are candidates who might belong to Caspian's personal guard at some time after years of years of hard training.
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    Dinner with Gideon

    Absolutely loving your comment.
  6. Aditus

    Dinner with Gideon

    That's what I'm aiming at. Yes! Ry's bonding with Ombro was a nice inclusion in the chapter. I'm glad you liked it.
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    Dinner with Gideon

    You want to see Gideon's bejeweled bits, admit it.
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    Dinner with Gideon

    Shush
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    Dinner with Gideon

    Gideon has to push Kavan's limits, he's about to do a dangerous job. Thank you for finding nice words for Kavan. He's a goof by nature. It's way to deal with pressure. Maybe if he feels more confident, he finds a middle ground.
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    Dinner with Gideon

    I'm sure he'll have his moments.
  11. That's cause you did.
  12. When I came home, Rylan was waiting for me; the fire was lit, flickering candles sat on the mantle, and reflections multiplied their number in front of the window. Two large empty wine glasses were ready to be filled. “Holy kale! What happened?” He beamed at me. “Guess.” I ostentatiously looked around. “Something worth a celebration?” He got up from the couch, his eyes sparkling. “You bet!” He spread his arms. “You’re looking at a future candidate’s training group member!”
  13. I always watched the games, but not this year. We watch some old games instead .
  14. Aditus

    Happy Prompt-Day!

    Vielen Dank @Valkyrie! I really, like #92 , maybe next year.
  15. Oh, and
  16. If they behave: no flippant remarks, no condescending quips. And did I detect a frisson of attraction to Gideon? If your seismograph for mutual attraction is extremely sensitiv.
  17. Thankfully I don't have any dragons delivering (or not-delivering) my UPS packages! At least I think I don't.... You mean, a delivery by DPS? Loved this!
  18. Exactly. A very old female vampire met him and decided to change him. Yes, but he is not her One Childe; it was just some kind of challenge for her to turn a witch. I immediately thought of Lestat’s mother in Anne Rice’s vampire series. He made her a vampire and then she became very cold and left him. That's a cool reference. Both made it through exceptional events: one, becoming a vampire the other having to overcome an impossible to win fight against poisoning.
  19. Hopefully he will learn to use some nifty spells. and now having to train together will bring it out. I couldn't resist the fun I'm going to have writing this.
  20. And I do love writing this. I don't think being another shadow melder would be enough to do it Yes, there is definitely more. Caspian just got a whole lot more interesting, not that he was boring to begin with Picture me with a broad smile. Did Konstantin tell Caspian that shadow melder; No, Caspian is able to see other vampire's powers, hence the tattoo Konstantin made him to get to hide is other gift from Caspian. Wonderful chapter, but more more more and faster faster faster... LOL I'm currently swamped with work, quite unexpectedly. I try to uphold the weekly posting.
  21. Just a few more chapters...
  22. Oh yes, it irritates him. Caspian is more laid back. Good observation.
  23. Oh, I think he meant this as a possibility. He might meet a witch vamp in the future.
  24. Oh yes, they will. Their lives may depend eventually on working smoothly as a team in very stressful situations. If Kavan can hold the snark and Gideon the condescension.
  25. What? No. He is something but not a witch. Ooops.
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