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Master Caspian's Collection
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
Exactly, and the changing of his eye color Gideon & Kaven will be in for a few bumpy rides real soon -
Master Caspian's Collection
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
Well.... Kavan might lose the snark when he knows who he really is. -
Master Caspian's Collection
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Master Caspian's Collection
I think, it's Kavan's way to deal with obstacles. Don't forget, he's very young for a vampire. -
“Kav?” “Hmm.” “Have you ever tried shifter blood?” I briefly looked up from the screen, even though I was fighting a nasty zombie. “Not yet. I tried horse blood once—shit! The fucker just offed me.” While Nathan was happily building the new lab with Doc, Rylan and I were a little bored by now. Sitting in our luxurious full-service apartment playing Dying Light 2 all day was getting old. Rylan scrunched his nose. “Horse blood?” He was coming from his room, scrolling
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Yesterday landed one, ONE on my coat and that's enough. No more!
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I can see the plan worked.
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Erm...both?
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Then write it.
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He had brushed back his golden brown hair, but a few segments defied him and fell over his face. His caramel-hued skin tone surprisingly worked well with the grey, and his copper eyes looked vibrant by comparison. I'm in love! Ash had never felt like a caught rabbit before. Ha! Gotcha!
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I'm always glad when I read 'in process', cos I'm having tons of fun with this story.
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So, why the heck did I give you these random prompts? I helped my nephew to draw all kinds of alien species, that’s why. And because there has always to be a second prompt, I used the next sentence someone said to me as a first line. Val thought I have to explain my randomness. Prompt #89 The newest spaceship is ready to leave the space yard when the main engineer gets a last-minute order: He has to modify the captain’s chair. Due to the new captain’s species, he wouldn’t be able to use the old one comfortably. Explain. Prompt #90 First line: “That’s not my package!”
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Chapter 7- Some Assembly Required
Aditus commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 7- Some Assembly Required
I was totally distracted by assembly required, but oh -well, that's me, always a wandering mind. -
Congratulations, Dodger!
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Around my stories? Always. Kavan is such an emotional, petulant childe. Absolutely, but it looks as if he has time to mature, like a good wine. Kavan and Ry only agreed to a sleepover, right? But the clothes fit better … I think they agreed to stay a little longer.
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Nope, he lives. perhaps she’s taking over Delacour? Now that would be an interesting twist, but with Konstantin being legate of Caspian's clan, wouldn't that be a clash of interests? He must be Kavan’s father, and that’s why he doesn’t hurt him. Or, he is a generous master or he has his own plans.
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She needs to understand Kavan is a constant and very important factor in her bloodsong's life.
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I would say 'loves is taking it way too far. Neither one of them have great social skills. Exactly. I hope it's a one off, Me too. I also like how Doc is treating Nathan.
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exactly. Konstantin needs a wack upside the head, was the starvation he suffered at the hands of Mother, the cause for issues not quite resolved. So, do we wack Konstantin or Kavan? Gideon, an ass personified whose nose is out of joint, someone I would think Warren would aspire to be...if he had any brains... At least he has brains,,,probably. Speaking of Warren...what is his fate. Becoming a vampire rat?
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She seems to have developed lock-picking abilities.... Kavan and Katherine are going to have to find an accommodation if Konstantin is going to thrive and grow; I can see them moving into the Silver Spire. Doc is just the best sire... LOL... Nathan is in good hands. I wholeheartedly agree. Ryland may be in for more of a bumpy ride. You could be right, he's a little Kavan-ish. I wouldn't say likes, maybe tolerates.
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We all agree she should have suffered. Why didn't she? Why did she get an easy way out?
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Yup. I'm feeling a little disorientated with these characters.
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I'm telling him this all the time, but as I said before: He never listens. And for Gideon, that's going to be an interesting relationship! Lots of
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Good! Konstantin with His Bloodsong and Living in the Silver Spire with His Chide seems too good to be true ! You know me all too well. I see what I can do:
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“What happened? Did someone shoot you?” I immediately realized what a stupid question I had just asked while I patted down Konstantin’s arm looking for a bullet hole. If someone had fired a shot during an event hosted by the head vampire of the city, security would be swarming the place by now, and people would panic, trying to flee the premises. Instead, most of them were staring at us, whispering curiously. The more cautious of them looked around anxiously and gave us a wide berth. Konst
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Wow, this is almost poetic...I feel inspired.
