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  1. Aditus

    Chapter 15- Moving

    "This isn't how I planned this at all. I swear that dinner and at least some dessert was involved…." Having dinner with rings is overrated anyway. Dessert however.....
  2. We witnessed, (read) about, 'checking' a particular box. Or closing a door? Opening one?
  3. Aditus

    Zugzwang

    For me, it's the highest praise.
  4. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    This was my first (anthology)-story for GA. I'm happy it's still appreciated. But then, what do I know? Well, it's better not to know how it feels.
  5. Aditus

    To Catch a Thief

    Me too. He was an unexpected, spontaneous addition. As I write this story, side characters keep popping up giving me ideas for short or not-so-short stories, but I have to focus on Kavan's story and the entire professions series first. Thank you for your comment and patience.
  6. Some birthday...
  7. Yes, the therapist had some good points and I loved she kept the rug but right now I only think black apron.
  8. Twilight---huh, I mocked those sparkling vampires by naming one of my series Sparkle. In a nutshell, I neither read the books nor saw the movies or wore the t-shirts. But I enjoyed your prompt, especially the descriptive parts. Thank you for this.
  9. Now it's simply jammern.
  10. Think of a favorite book, game, show, or movie. Did you ever want to change something? Be a part of it? PT# 113 Choose a short scene and jump right in, be it as a new/random side character or even one of the MCs. PT # 114 You love a book/game/movie, but you always thought one of the characters chose the wrong love interest. Write a short scene where you hint at a different choice.
  11. I don't know what my parents thought when they named me...a biblical moment???? Maybe parents aren't in their right mind at that moment? He could have named her Hope.
  12. ....he finally heeded his older sister Siena's advice and booked an appointment with his therapist. Finally with a capital F. Still, it's strange to name your firstborn after your ex/love of your life? Maybe they'll get a discount?
  13. As he stood out in the cold, his hand leaning against the top of his car, Ash felt lost. Time to slip back into the burrow?
  14. Well, I noticed it which means I'm a dork too.
  15. Hah!
  16. Siena, Sage, Sandy, Aster, Ash... is that a coincidence? Yes, I'm reading the story again... I didn't want to jump into the middle not knowing wtf is going on.
  17. OMG! A long, long time ago.....I dared to tip my toe in the waters. This was a great help.
  18. Cool interview, great answers, I remember when I waited for one of @Headstall's great comments on RRS, and when he decided to write Cards on the Table, I still love the story. I wish I had more time to read, there are still a few stories of his on top of my list.
  19. I always thought it nadir sounds mysterious or as Gandalf said: End? No, the journey doesn't end here. Death is just another path, one that we all must take. The grey rain-curtain of this world rolls back, and all turns to silver glass, and then you see it. White shores, and beyond, a far green country under a swift sunrise.
  20. Aditus

    To Catch a Thief

    Thank you. It’s clear why he wants this, but not clear how he believes he has the least chance of success. He doesn't think, he's blinded by his vendetta. ....pick up the pieces? or to be blunt sweeping up his remains.
  21. Aditus

    To Catch a Thief

    Yup. I don't think he realizes that by following this track he might burn bridges to a better future.
  22. Aditus

    To Catch a Thief

    That is a very good question. If so, it would make him feeling extremely irritated.
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    To Catch a Thief

  24. Aditus

    To Catch a Thief

    Nope, not yet. *insert evil laugh* I for one don't think that Gideon is aware he is being followed. I think he is too far into his plan to let anything distract him. He would know and sense other vampires; but why suspect they are after him if they are not doing anything to stop him. That makes sense to me. Oh wait... Kavan needs to stay with Gideon and make sure that he protects him from himself. Haha, exactly.
  25. Aditus

    To Catch a Thief

    I'm relieved. I felt bad for not being able to post this earlier.
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