Aditus
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You dare to say/write the s-word and even post a picture! Ew. I just saw a beautiful red and orange sun rise on my way to the bakery, ask @Valkyrie.
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Yes, they are the personification of evil.
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Enough with that! Write chapter two.
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What can I say? They're mates, one isn't complete without the other.
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Take heart and read on.
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What!? Who has to give whom another chance? I need another coffee, or a Valerian tea? Or both? Chocolate? More? Okay, I try to wait patiently for chapter 2 and walk the er.. cat.
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So, I finally got to read this and I'm not disappointed, so glad there is a chapter 1 next. And yes I stopped confused at the double Ash and had to read that part again, but I have an excuse-- I didn't have my first coffee.
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I'm trying to envision (with my mind's ears, of course) a double snort.
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You have to ask? or did she find some honor and actually lead the fight? I hate that they lost India; Yes that was difficult to write. she was able to sense something in Kavan, Yes, and I can't wait to reveal what...maybe next book. Or you guys can guess it earlier, not that I would tell you, ( insert evil laugh here). A great chapter; well written and it flowed really wonderfully. *bows* thank you, centex, for the compliment and the great comment.
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PT #83 It’s a matter of common knowledge among friends and family that the protagonist of your story despises a certain person. Ironically, this very person dies in a freak accident at their house. As no one would believe this, they have to hide the body. Help them. PT#84 In order to avoid the pesky marriage-soon-trigger, Ash doesn’t date, officially. Find the most outrageous excuses to tell the family or — just tell them a truth of your choice, preferably all nicely boxed up in a short story.
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Because it does? Or because your an empathetic reader?
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Yess! Thank you for this! enjoying this very much! I'm glad to hear this.
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Yes, yes, look me in the eyes.
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It works both ways and I absolutely love one-sided obsession. Tell a shifter they're obsessed with their mate. Perfect!
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@VBlew Lots of layers in this chapter. Thank you. Hopefully Konstantin and Katherine are not setup to where they have to fight each other. Fingers crossed. The vampire-One Childe-bloodsong is very complicated.
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I don't think so. Everyone who was involved has to be present and Joseph is gone. And would she do this? Wouldn't she be illoyal to her bloodsong?
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@drsawzall How long before a more powerful clan comes a calling for the Night Clan, or the lord of their city Caspian to dispense some punishment/justice??? A valid question I'm going to answer next chapter. Mother is an idiot, and if the lessons of human mediocre management apply to the vampire world, Warren is about to become a freaking rockstar!!! Simone met her just reward/just deserts!! Yes, yes and yess! just wo will make Mommy Dearest responsible for the deaths of so many??? Guesses are very welcome. *rubs hands* Thank you for this great comment.
