Aditus
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I'm glad you didn't choose the much hated 'read it' . A comedy of errors. Oh, I love it. It's the perfect word for their situation. I agree with your analysis wholeheartedly, Tim. Two more to go.
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Thank YOU, mfa607! Tristan needs to pull his head out of his backside I can't help to picture this, with or without Santa hat.
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Perfect analysis, spike. Should they have a future together? I have no idea. Me neither.
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Tristan agrees with you. I'm sure he drinks lots of coffee while he percolates the new facts. I like you understand Peter. He needs someone on his side. Or not. Thank you dugh.
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Would it bad when I said good? I like to do unexpected things. Thank you, Caramel.
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I fucked everything up Now I know it was a stupid plan. I don’t have an excuse for that, maybe some kind of defensive reflex or whatever. Or being a petty idiot again. I miscalculated, and I lost you because I didn’t realize what was important in my life. I didn’t tell you this as an excuse. What I did was wrong. I was a fucking coward. Peter knows he fucked up royally, that he is at fault. One thing we might be able to agree is that he regrets his mistakes and wouldn't do this again. If this could lead to Tristan's forgiveness... I don't know. Thank you for your comment/rant, Jay.
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In a way, I think, Tristan is trying to do this. He actively avoids making a snap decision by going home. He might think about all the new facts he learned. Thank you for your detailed comment, nix. I loved that you compared your experience with Tristan's decision. Kinda like a reality check.
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You made me sniffle in my tea. Gah! Well done.
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I loved this story, from the minute I began to read. A perfect Secret Santa story.
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Man, I feel so bad now!
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Chapter Four Peter is standing in front of the window, staring outside, his hands shoved deep in his jeans pockets, when I come back to my room . He hasn’t noticed me yet, which is why I startle him when I say, "Two shots of espresso, cream, no sugar, right?" “You still remember how…." He smiles wistfully. "Of course. It’s been six years, not sixty." "Okay. I'm just glad …shit!" He runs his hand through his hair almost desperately. I settle myself on the desk chair, swive
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Yes, please. On the way...
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Featured Story: Our Christmas Cookbook
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Very sneaky, you two! -
Featured Story: Our Christmas Cookbook
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
What a pleasant surprise to wake up to! Thank you for the great review @Timothy M. Yes, tell us which recipes you liked the most or share your favorite? -
Glare at him, grab a cab , get on the train and that is that. That's how I felt.
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I hope so. Thank you for reading and commenting Dr. John NYC To the other part of your comment.....
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I wanted to write that, but then the story would have been over. I totally understand your reaction.
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I forgot something, huh? I always forget something.
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Thank you for telling me, Wesley. I'm glad you like the story. One week.
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I'm bad, I know. I can't think without coffee, or at least holding a cup in my hand.
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What? You already know my brand of writing. Next Wednesday, promise.
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Yes, yes, almost there.
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LOL. Raise the stakes, will you? I agree with you, Peter messed up epically. There is no excuse. It looks grim.
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LOL, dughlas! It's the time of anticipation. so, first coffee, yes.
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(But Tristan, he definitely needs this talk, so he can finally move on from the past. ) Exactly. I had to force myself to write this. Personally, I would have stepped into that elevator and ignored Peter in the lobby. Hey, you sacrificed part of your beauty sleep! Thank you! Next chapter will be a decision-making chapter.
