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and loving it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

There is nothing more vibrant and alive than the crowded dance floor in a gay club. It's been a while since I've been lured by the flashing lights,thumping bass line,scent of sweat,cologne and testosterone......but you captured the night beautifully. It's also good to see that Barry and Dave can both be honest with each other as well as respectful of their feelings. Attraction is something that either happens or it doesn't..........It's definitely happening here!!!!!! Great chapter..........thanks for the memory.................Mike Think I wanna go dancin'

Just a quick acknowledgement..........LOVE THIS STORY..........On to chapter 6 Mike

I wondered why this chapter was named Kiss of Hope, what with all the emotional drama of Jackie's funeral, attempted killing of F/B by the cabbie. It makes sense now Excellent chapter Robert...........Mike

Although I'm late for the party I'm glad I made it ! This sounds compelling..........On to chapter 2 Mike

I've often wondered just how different my own life would be today if circumstances and actions taken at that time were different. Unfortunately ( or maybe fortunately), I was one of those young teens who was invited to get the hell out and never return. I remember the utter fear and hurt to this very day. I remember being taken advantae of by older manipulative preditors. I remember being introduced to drugs,alcohol,sex.....and at the time, I thought my life was perfect. At least I wasn't sleeping in boxes and eating from trash bins. Reading so far, I can only fantasize as to what CJ must be feeling, he is truly blessed with his dads and a group of supportive friends. I have taken control of my life, and have the personal satisfaction of being proud of myself,and my accomplishments in life.....Just wish that I could have had a Cesar and Brett in my corner. I'm really enjoying this story, Carlos.......on to the next chapter Mike

Carlos, I just ran across your story and thought I would give it a read to see if I would be interested. Well, I am and really enjoyed the first chapter. Acceptance of your sexuality is hard and approval is a concept that is beyond scary;especially approval from your family and close friends. CJ is truly blessed to have a father that accepts him,we should all be so lucky....to hell with the "family" in Miami...he's better off without them........even tho' he probably deosn't realize that just now. On to next chapter Mike

I'm really glad that I happened upon your story....it was frustrating at times with all the drama, but that makes for good storytelling. My only regret was that Jonah didn't have a gloves off confrontation with Eric, that would have been delicious !!!! Overall , I am delighted to have a happy ending and you did a remarkable job in making us FEEL the characters,Thanks for the journey.....Mike

Very romantic. I could smell the sea in light breezes and even the fragence of flowers from the garden below. Watching the stars and talking and touching and kissing. Damn, I'm getting hot just thinking about it!!! Bravo Addy. Love the scene you painted with your words......Mike

I fully understand the "hair" references. I too have taken my frustrations out on my hair when things get intolerable..........I call them mental health breaks..........Ha.........Not so funny when you finally realize just how ridiculous you look........and he you have to live with the results for quite a while.........Go Jonah!!!!!!!!Mike

They say, 2 wrongs don't make a right.......but what about 3 or 4?.........Loving it Addy....................Mike

Excellent............love the drama..................Mike

I gave him my most saccharine smile. "Yes, I love you too, dear. Close the door firmly, will you? From the outside? Please?” After reading this line, I am reminded of a past love who, when being dismisive of me or my smart ass would always end a "request" by saying..."Please.......and Thank You" It used to really piss me off to be shut down like that.........Great chapter!!! Mike

Recently came across this story and instantly became intrigued...great job!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

Tony and Marcus are truly blessed; they not only love each other, but are very aware of this blessing. In a perfect world, this or any love would be celebrated for what it is.....a blessing. I keep using the word blessing.....maybe it's a theme, but we should all be so lucky..........Anyway, loving the story; waiting for more!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

Who's the pussy now? Sasha...you da' man!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

Perfect........as usual..........thanks,Rob Mike

Marcus needs to tell his mother to just shut the f*** up. Both he and Tony are well above the legal age to marry and if she doesn't want to share in their union that is her right....but she should keep her opinions to herself..and o back toFloridaand stay there!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

i CANNOT FOR THE LIFE OF ME UNDERSTAND HOW ANYONE CAN BE SO COMPLETELY EVIL TO ANOTHER PERSON. THAT CONCEPT IS JUST BEYOND MY COMPREHENSION, YOU HAVE EXPERTLY CREATED THIS HELL FOR SACHA AND JAMES.....READING IT WAS HORRIFIC........BUT A GREAT JOB.......WAITING TO SEE HOW THIS ALL UNFOLDS.... I CAN'T REALLY EXPRESS HOW DEEPLY THIS CHAPTER HAS AFFECTED ME..............MIKE

Beautifully written; I'm already drawn in to the dynamic of Roy and Kendra and am eagerly waiting for a connection for Roy and Chad.....This is so promising and I KNOW you WILL deliver !!!!!!!! Mike

After rereading Colorago Game, I just wanted to let you know that it is still one of my favorite stories...the characters and plotlines are written perfectly. This story makes me feel good while reading and the effect stays with me long after completing it....it's my go to for a mood enhancer.......Thanks, Mike

I've often wondered....just why is it so important to anyone as to what anyone's sexuality has to do with them as a person. Frankly, most people spend very little time having sex...sure we all think aout it during our day but really it is not the only thing that defines us...gay or straight or anything in the middle. It makes me upset that a grown man, Chad, felt that he had to leave his home, family and friends in order to find himself. Shame on those who make it intolerable for Chad, making him feel that he must leave everything in order to find himself and happiness. Ok, I'm off my soapbox now....LOL...eagerly awaiting the next chapter and hoping that we get to ultimately see the butterfly emerge from his cocoon....Great beginning............Mike

KC, I just "found" your story and read it without stopping; well I did have bathroom breaks but beyond that I was determined to absorb every word as quickly as I possily could. The story was very entertaining, characters compelling and I was blissfully snarled in this world hoping that everything would work out, knowing that it probably wouldn't.....maybe it will...hoping....hoping.....finally !!!!! I really enjoyed Pour Me Another from beginning to end...it must have been maddening to your readers to follow in real time; I feel like I've cheated ...but I don't feel the least bit guilty. You have been added to my listed of authors to follow....what pressure for you....LOL Thanks for sharing; I'm going to read your other works now................Mike

It's funny how real life sometimes mirrors fiction...I had the duty of showing my underage son's girlfriend how to use an at home pregnancy test. As I remember, it was very bonding for my future daughter inlaw....I somehow was able to focus on the baby (my grandchild ) she was carrying and not get overly crazy as was the custom of my parents. You have made me laugh and cry at times as well as remember those times both good and bad; thanks for the ride......your friend, Mike

At times your phrasing within a sentence transports me back to another place, a memory, safely filed away....not never really forgotten. This chapter prompted me to relive the death of my twin brother and all the emotion and feelings that I had of that horrible period of my life. I can relate to Brent's feelings of hurt . anger and unending despair.....this chapter was written with love, I can feel it with every sentence...........Thank you so much for Button and for letting me visit with Matt after all these years.....................Mike