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Why do I feel like Levin spoke to Vincent about his and Haje's relationship. Wondering if that's why Vincent wouldn't tell Haje. At least Haje trusts Vincent now. Sad thing about Zen. Sounds like Shin cared a lot about her. Had to laugh when Haje's mom hugged Vincent. Someone's going to get past that rough exterior and I've a feeling it's going to be Haje.. Can't believe I missed this chapter. Now I have another to read. Yay!!!!!
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How damn funny, and well written! Imaginative, aren't you?
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You'll get spanked in chat next time You're a very good writer and storyteller even tho Blake didn't get a happy ending. Good job!
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Definitely interesting, and a great start, but I agree with Carrie. Another format would be great. You weave a great story!
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Dang it! I was trying not to start reading anymore new stories, and you post one. so much for that. When things start going wrong, the domino effect dances in glee. Poor Carl. I know you'll give him a good new beginning. I have faith in you. Love this Podga!
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Your epilogue was like sitting in front of a fireplace with my fav drink, staring into the fire, and crying over memories that I couldn't change, but would always treasure. This journey of love and fear should be read by all who have any doubts about the all consuming power of love. Thank you for the time and effort you put into this beautiful story. Jo Ann
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My throat hurt througout the last few paragraphs. Your emotions made me want to cry like a baby.
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So excited to see things begin to come into perspective in a comfortable and accepted way for the guys. I know it took a lot for Julie to give them her blessing. You're quite the storyteller!
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Sometimes, there's no right or wrong in a situation, and this is one of them. When you commit like Matt has, nothing can cract the wall of love he feels for Andy, no matter what. Great chapter.
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Damn, I feel like the walls are beginning to close in on Matt and Andy, and they can't do anything about it. It's all about life, and goals. I'm so curious as to where you story will end. Andy has walked a long road, and not always a nice walk.
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Torrents of heartache and hurt washed away by their tears and love and you wrote it like a master.
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Angie has to be the one admired here. I'm genuinely glad that Matt and Andy are going to talk, but the results could be a beginning, or be a bitch for all of them. But, a beginning for who, and in what way? Friendship, romance, heartbreak? Reading this story makes life seem so real for me. My hubby was Angie once upon a time, and I guess in some ways he still is. We've been married thirty years in a few days, and I still wonder what he is thinking at times, and I know he wonders what I'm thinking and feeling, even after all these years. You as a person never changer. Your heart makes a choice, hoping you've the strength to live with it, and make a life with your spouse in a loving and respectful way. Thoughts don't kill love, actions do!
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So sad at this point. Andy is moving forward, but with both? someone is going to be sad with the outcome. Still, addicted to Andy and Matt's story.
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Sweet dedication, sweet chapter, but the guys are still struggling. It's funny that life really throws this crap at you, and you feel like you are drowning in the past, and when you come to surface, wonder what the hell you're going to do in the future. Great writing.
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I want to hate Andy, but he reminds me of a female me at his age. I had a lot of issues with my sexuality, and hurt many, and myself. It's hard to get past this point in your life. I know. Great chapter
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Sometimes you can't get things back, no matter how hard you try. Andy doesn't know how to make amends for the past. you would think at some point he would.
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Glad someone showed Any what he missed with Matt. Maybe one day, Andy will be able to make up for lost time with Matt. Loved this chapter so much! The bedroom scene was wayyyyyyy up there for me.
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This was a little humorous, but very eye opening to some of these college kids. It's not about what turns you on, it's about who, whether male, female or both.
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I certainly hope Matt isn't this miserable on the inside. Sex doesn't fix everything. I'm so glad Brad was such a gentle and considerate lover. I would hate to see Andy's self-esteem take a lick at this point.
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Great sex scene, but you make me tear up with Andy's memories everytime. I keep wondering if they'll meet again soon. Love the chapter.
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Maybe Andy is getting his head out of his ass. Hopefully he will continue to grow and he and Kyle will become fast friends.
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The Unbearable Heaviness of Being
joann414 commented on Menzoberranzen's story chapter in The Unbearable Heaviness of Being
Powerful writing, with heartwrenching results. How sad for James to be a victim of hell. I know you find it odd that I say this, but he has no idea what he just did. Like lighting a scented candle that you could only smell the scent of, but it's going to overpower you now, and you'll be burned in it's flame. -
Chapter 4 Trouble is Brewing
joann414 commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 4 Trouble is Brewing
Cliffhanger? What does Butch know, and who's out there lying in wait for Hunter? Great writing, and just enough detail in this chapter. Love it!
