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If I actually heard these conversations, I totally hope I'd be an angel in disguise, no fear of these crazies Very vicious, but interesting take on the theme. Great job!
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Sheesh. Don't want to think about this!
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First thing I'm going to say is "Rustle, you need to write more." I absolutely love your take on this. It was romantic, heartwarming, and had a touch of sadness. Great job!
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Now that was a helluva partyLOL
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So glad you had several chapters written before I found this story. It is great. I know I keep saying this, but you have moved it along, developed your characters, and fed your plot steadily, and I love it. Now, I can't wait for a Dan and Jae moment
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Hmmmm. Dan is quite an interesting character. Why do I have a feeling that Jae is going to have to give a little more than the other two in the partnership. Seeing Rebellion back on stage, but in another country? You definitely have my attention now. Seems Dan has a lot up his sleeve, and also has a lot of faith in his lawyer. Gotta see how this unfolds girl!
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Betrayal by your Management is bad, but your lover betraying you makes it all the more sad. I think I'd go home for awhile also to get my head straight. I'm glad Jae has his Mother's support. It's going to be interesting to see what develops from the meeting, and I feel that Jaeson is not out of the picture yet. Loving this!
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I can identify with so much of this poem. Life has no mercy when it comes to moving along, and our thoughts and actions along the way matter not. Lovely writing, Sam.
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GREat story Andy. Grumpy the Ghost. This was very entertaining
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Darren and Jacob are both in a bad spot. Jacob has already slept with Will and Darren has also slept with Jacob. Jacob is taking a chance here, and Darren is pretty arrogant to assume he can keep both men. Something is going to have to give sooner or later!
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Wonder what the maid will think when she goes to clean the windows. Stick white stuff? Hmmm. Asher had a great time and did not remember, but MIkie did As long as someone is happy Can't wait to see what Mike has in store for Asher's birthday. Great chapter. Take care of yourself!!!!
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I don't see any way that you could end this story satisfactorily at this point without rushing an ending with a lot of loose ends. I want to know about Michael, especially if he was ever married. Don't think I"ve seen that yet. I also would like to see what happens in court, and maybe Asher and Michael maybe actually running into the wife of the man who shot Asher. Just a few things I thought of when you mentioned a quick ending. Asher partied hardy, wanting to take Michael in the back of the cab. LOL. Very entertaining chapter.
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Hmmm, seems to me that Asher is getting plenty of physical therapy without the therapist. Michael is very obliging to be very physical The court issues should be interesting. Money is the root of a lot of things, the least of them being evil in some ways. At least Philip is accepting of Michael and Asher. Great work KC!
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Got behind in my reading, and what do I come back to? A jealous Michael! Now, we know his feelings are stronger than he is letting on Sex doesn't seal a relationship, but gut feelings that give you a jolt do. I'm not sure that I would've told Michael about Paul either. It had to be humiliating in some ways. Asher has grown a lot since then though, but that being said, I'm glad it's out in the open now.. I can't decided if Ian is really a friend or an instigator. He doesn't sound too genine to me.
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I read your response to Lisa's review, and you made a lot of good points, but I'm still a little confused as to where Jacob fits as far as being in love. He proclaimed to be in love with Darren when Darren was with his sister, but promptly slept with Will, several times. Then, he has not qualms about making the moves on Darren when Will is helpless. I'm not sure that I see that as love. Maybe he just is in love with the thought of someone loving and needing him besides his sister. I love this story, and I am now caught up. Hope you have the next chapter ready to go
