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The Day After Yesterday
joann414 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The Day After Yesterday
Ben is being the caretaker here, and that's great. But, now all I can see is Mark being a prime candidate for seperation anxiety, and doing something stupid while Ben is gone. Since Ben has confessed that he thinks he is falling in love with Mark, you'd think he'd consider taking mark with him in some capacity. All I can say is that I hope that by the time Ben has to leave that Mark is comfortable enough in their relationship that tabloids and rumors won't faze him. Something tells me that he jus mights have to deal with such things. Oh well, just have to read on I guess! -
The Secret in a Photograph
joann414 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The Secret in a Photograph
I think I would've been a little meaner if I was Mark. He caved too easily Ben sure did take over when he Mark appeared. He's from in the closet to acting like a concerned married man. I'm glad his parents supported him though. Good chapter! -
The House with the Rose Coloured Memories
joann414 commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The House with the Rose Coloured Memories
Wow, looks like I've been missing some good reading. I can understand Ben to a certain point, but I think he was wrong in not talking to Mark. Can't help but wonder who spilled the beans tho. Kinda wondering if it was the doorman or something. Great job -
What a wonderful chapter, and I looooooove nanna. Such a sweet chapter, and you gave both of your characters a positive side. Loved it
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You ass! You could've let us enjoy the afterglow and cuddling Nope, jk. This was a great and sexy scene. I keep trying to imagine Michael. He sounds hot, and Asher can heat him up even more. Can't wait for the aftermath. Certainly hope it is positive. Great writing knothead
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Going to be interested how this pans out. Luce's wedding, Simon's impending romance, and last but not least, I certainly hope the test results are clean. If not, you'll definitely have an unholy mess to unravel. You certainly have the gift of keeping the reader's attention. No too much, but enough detail, great imagery, and character introduction is great. Love this
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Sweet,bittersweett, sad, happy? Not sure, but great writing. I hope you never sit down and write a 50 or 60 thousand word one shot story. I won't get anything done the day it's posted. Your writing is so enjoyable and entertaining. Great job~
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Poor Rock, knowing sad, and happy, but not quite love. Hopefully, Calvin will remember his friend. Love this.
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Why didn't the bitch just put a gun to his head and shoot him. HOw cold and cruel can you be? Poor Archer. Hopefully, something or someone will turn his life around, and she'll rot in hell. I've no time for liars and cheats in any situation. Great story, and I was so excited to see that you'd posted another. The imagery of the trashy city was so realistic. Great writing! So? How often are you going to update?
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So glad you went here. Funny as hell!
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Dylan has a lot of demons to overcome, and I feel that Chuck probably does also. I just hope he doesn't run from Chuck at this point. Chuck is very vulnerable also. Great Work!
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I find your writing so refreshing Andy. It's so easy to relax into it, and just go with the flow. The boys are the perfect example of young men their age, and their personalities. Biggest, toughest, mouthiest, and mediators. Love how they interact!
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After all that sadness and soul cleansing, you left us with a cliffhanger! I'm going to hunt you down. What is the secret, and I want to know now!!! Isaac is a douchebag that hell would kick to the curb. Great writing Cole!
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That was too dang short after having a vacation. YOu should've at least let them get back to the apartment and have a little fun But, I have to hand it to you. It's great writing as always and looking forward to much more! MIchael is quite the tough guy. I like him. HOpe no one bothers Asher in his presenceLOL
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Chapter 6 - The Green-Eyed Monster
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 6 - The Green-Eyed Monster
Looks like there may be a little competition for Chuck Isaac may be wanting Dylan's attention also, and is getting it the only way he can at the momend. He irritates Dylan to get a response. Chuck seems more mature now. Guess that's what love can do for you. -
Chapter 5 "What Kelly Saw"
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 5 "What Kelly Saw"
Kelly and Kelly huh? I was a little confused at first. Then, I saw where you were going. sweet, sweet chapter. -
Chapter 4 - Country Mouse, City Mouse
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Country Mouse, City Mouse
If you don't like your inner voice, do just the opposite. lol. How funny. I smiled throughout this chapter. Opposites attract is an understatement here. Your writing is very engaging, and if flows so smoothly that the end of the chapters catch me by surprise. Quite the storyteller, Cole. -
Chapter 3 - The Willing
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 3 - The Willing
I didn't know who was scaring who the most. Two very insecure men. Hopefully, they might help each other get to a better place. -
Chapter 2 - The Thief in the Night
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The Thief in the Night
I love the reference,"hiding in plain sight". That happens a lot when life starts dealing you bad cards. You can't see what's in front of your face other than the shit being handed to you. You are doing a great job with your story. Glad I waited until you had a few chapters written before reading. -
Poor Dylan. What started out as fun, ended in shame and sadness. Great writing, and looking forward to reading more.
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Your words made me want to curl under a warm blanket and cry for one that missed love because he couldn't convey love. So beautiful!
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Good grief! You have a helluva an imagination. Eerie, and horror isn't the half of it. good writing
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Awwww, Vincent can be a protective Teddy Bear. Sweet, sweet. Loved the chapter:)
