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    Chapter 19

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Honestly, I don't know who I feel the worst for, Kyle, Ryan, or Jeremy. I feel that they are all suffering. Great writing
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    Chapter 16

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Got to get to bed now, but can't wait to read more tomorrow. Great writing and this chapter was so awesome.
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    Chapter 15

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 15

    This was a beautifully written chapter. Nathan was way up there for me in this part. Great job:)
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    This definitely made me think of Alfred Hitchcock. Great story:)
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    Chapter 11

    joann414 commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Girl, when I saw this I felt you posted just for me. what a great addition to a pretty melancholy day. I knew I loved Lily, but I love her even more now. So glad Joshua went to Alexi. Love your wriitng. thanks for a great chapter once again
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    Chapter 10

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 10

    What a beautiful chapter. You captured the emotions in all the right ways!
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    Chapter 7

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 7

    This was a great chapter, but I feel like there is fixing to be a lot of heartache instore for the guys!
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    Chapter 2

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 2

    So, guess we will find out who was spying on the two the night of the party. Another good chapter. Thanx
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on Skylights's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This looks like it is going to be a great read!
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    Oh, poor Alex and Heath, Love can be so complicated and confusing. I really hope Simon does not hurt Heath when Heath confronts him. Well Nina kept on until she fell into the darkness! Simon is certainly a dangerous man. Great chapter, but I wish Heath had taken the time to try to explain to Alex. Guess he is doing right by confronting Simon first tho:)
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    part i

    joann414 commented on xTony's story chapter in part i

    Wow, what a great first part. Waiting eagerly for more:)
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    wow, I missed this one, and it is a great chapter. Ben is quite the puzzle here, but he needs to get his head out of his ass. there are many like Jeff out there that will appreciate Patrick. Sorry I was so late commenting. Glad I found you tho. i love this story.
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    Chapter 2

    joann414 commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 2

    So glad a found. It made my Monday a hundred times better. Love it so much:)
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 1

    HI, Couldn't believe I had not read this. It was showing where you had posted a new story. I could not get to it so I clicked onto your profile and then stories. The new one was not there, but I noticed this one and realised I had not read it. And, of course I love it. It is so sad to me when a young person has felt unwanted for so long only to find out they could have had a fruitful life. Also, the chemistry was started to ping way up there. Great job girl
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    Chapter 1

    joann414 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Oh, what a great feel good story. I love a happy ending!
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    Story

    joann414 commented on A.J.'s story chapter in Story

    This is a great story AJ. I love the reality of the boys not coming to terms with their differences overnight. You and I both know that many times teen years seperate a lot of youth for life. The essays as the outlet for the feelings was a brilliant idea. Well done!!!!
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    EPILOGUE

    joann414 commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in EPILOGUE

    What an absolute beautiful story. The ending gave the reader hope for Big C and Hero, but also let us know that Hero knew he needed time to become the person that Big C deserved. Thanks for a wonderful read!
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    so sad and heartbreaking.
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    Well, after all these chapters, you finally made me cry as much in anger as in sadness. What a sadistic , homophobic son of a bitch to have to call father. No wonder Charlie and Derek are so close! Great chapter.
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    Wow, I don't know who is suffereing the most here, Charlie or Derek. I wish it were LUKE!!!!!!!!!
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    I see Luke has been a busy bastard bee here. He just caused a lot of trouble, and no one has taken the time to figure it out. So glad that Andrew stepped in and was a friend to Derek when he needed one. Great chapter.
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    Ch 25: Spiral

    joann414 commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 25: Spiral

    Derek's mom is freaking me out more than anyone. I hope she is not trying to drive her son crazy for some reason. Charlie's concern is going to get the best of him I think:P
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    Why do I feel that maybe Derek's dad was sexually abusing him, or maybe Charlie. Or maybe Charlie caught hims abusing Derek. That may be why they were not at the last dinner. That's the good thing about a story being finished before you start reading.
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    I love the doc and her technique seems to be working lol. I feel so sorry for Derek. Seems like he is ready to explode.
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    I knew Travis was going to be a big factor as to whether or not Derek and Charlie will reconcile themselves as friends. I just hope Derek gets help, and gets some of the demons he is fighting laid to rest.
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