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I hope Ogre lives up to his promise, because I don't think Little Man could take another betrayal of any kind. I love the kind of friendship where Little Man knows for a fact that Eric would not forgive Ogre if he found out had bad he had hurt him. I still feel like things are going to change between Eric and Little Man, don't really know how they are going to change, I just think they might. Maybe ,I am wrong though.
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Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
The after date make-out session was wonderful! Poor Alec. He wanted Heath to stay to bad, but I like that he did not angry, just frustrated. lol Nina is playing with fire, and does not know it. I think she will regret visiting Alec, when Heath finds out, but I hope that she does not cause Alec to doubt Heath's affection for him. Simon seems to be evil wrapped in a pretty package. I hope the history between him and Heath is not very personal. Great chapter -
Absolutely great story, but so damn sad. Poor guys.
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Young Jae is so a disappointment. but I don't think he is liking what he is doing. Min is not the lightweight that they all thought. Good for him. The angst between him and Young Jae is already showing. Can't wait for a real showdown between the two, and see what sparks ignite. Great writinig girl!
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Still have the gut feeling that the financial shortfalls are going to lead back to Adrian. So glad Joshua took the initiative and kissed Alexi. It got the feeling stirring to the point that Alexi wanted more, and that is what he needs, not Adrian. Both boys seem to have baggage, but I think as their relationship strengthens, they will share, and help each other work through their problems. Very productive chapter here. Hope to see the mystery about the money revealed soon.
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Ogre could have not done anything more damaging, but physically rip LM's heart out, and stomp on it. I could smack him into tomorrow, and then smack him again. Why do I feel that Eric is more than meets the eye at this point, or is that my wishful thinking? How can you hurt someone that not only cares so much about you, but also protects you? Interesting chapter. Looking forward to the next.( like now!) lol
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Corbin is so self assured in just about every aspect of his is life, except for his relationship with Pete. I hope he gets to the point to where he can at least speak enough about his feeings to Pete, to where Pete will give him some indication if he is genuinely interested in Corbin as more than a friend. So proud of Corbin for not being a slut when it came to David. The pie was there for the taking, but he resisted, because of Pete, only to feel like crap when he went to see and talk to Pete. Hopefully things will get sorted out when Dakota comes to visit. Great Chapters
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I have read this several times Cailen, never commented, but it always picks me up, makes life feel a little more uplifting. thank you
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It is always sad to be separted from friends, but ten times harder when you are young. Min seems very determined, so I see quite a ride starting here. Great job!
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I just happened upon this, and started reading. What a bizarre read. Brother fearing that his own blood will betray him, and it takes on a completely twist? I have to say. Once I started reading, I could not stop. It was like something you watch on televison at three o'clock in the morning and say, " Why don't they show things like this during decent hours." I loved it
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Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
joann414 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 Something's In The Air Tonight...
First of all, the text were too cute.! Made me smile. Heath's guilt is eating him alive, and putting both of them in a very dangerous position. I found it eerie that someone knew Heath's favorite place, or I guess maybe they followed them. Alex is so shy, and that makes him even more special, and I hate to see him hurt, mentally, or physically. You description of Lulu's and the food was excellent. I am starving now. lol Can't wait for the next chapter to see who is trailing them, and how the night ends. -
Like the others said, this is you best chapter so far. I always like a badass girl in the midst of a m/m love story . Great writing, and the story seems to be moving a little faster now.Great Job~
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I'm with Conner on the getting caught fear. I was waiting for the door to open any moment while they were going at it in the kitchen. There is nothing more to be said about this chapter except it was HOT! OH, and btw,"The big bad wolf was about to blow my house down"., gets my vote for "best line in a story for today". Great work
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Boy, Lee turned out to be a little twit. Can't wait to see how Corbin teaches him a lesson. Corbin does what he has to for recognition on the campus no matter who it pisses off, even other houses. Oh well. It seems like Pete is interested, but wanting Corbin to make all the moves, and Corbin is unsure if Pete knows what he wants. You are making me pull my hair out, btw. lol.. LOve this.
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You are quite the storyteller girl! Beautiful story, had the romance, the angst, and the happy ending. Doesn't get much better than that. I am so glad I waited until you finished before I read. Great job
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Love Tibian remembering Chad working on his own truck when he was taking Tib to his house for their first night together, that changed both of their lives. Great job.
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Isn't it crazy how a human will hurt ones self to avoid taking a chance of hurt. Both of these guys are so unhappy, and need someone to love them, and take care of them. On to next chapter.
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There's a lot a difference that five years can make, and I think it has been a good thing for both of the guys. Tibial now has the two girls, and if Mia is out of the picture in some way, Chad needs to know that a life with Tib will include the girls. The girls sound so precious. Thanks for another great chapter
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Chad thinks he is doing the right thing. Tib can't shun his responsibilities no, and Mia sees Tib's obvious hurt and rejection. What a bunch of sadness. Can't wait to see how you smooth all of these wrinkles:)
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Sheesh, you piled it on in a very short chapter. I don't blame Mia or Chad for not letting Tib in their bed, but someone should have thrown him a blanket. A lot of work to fix this situation, I'm afraid. Great chapter!
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Mia is my heroine. Who would have thought of her breaking the guys out of jail, and doing the planning along the way about appearances, etc. She is not the little dumb blond, but obviously a force to be reckoned with when someone is going to hurt her man, and evidently his man also. lol. Loving this story so much
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Well, the only hope I see in sight is for the bitch Tessa to come up pregnant, but she probably would not even come forward now, and if she did, I don't know what would be worse for Chad, death, or being bound to her. Chad's love knows no boundaries, and it seems the same for Tib. Great chapter.
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What an unholy mess! Only small bit of solstice that Tib gets is that his father still loves him. He is going to have to face so much alone, and the whole time be pining and fearing for his lover.
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I am hoping this is a bad dream, but something tells me that it really happened. Poor Tib and Chad. Intense chapter!
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" You are sweetly morbid." Now that is true love. Go with one in death, rather than live life without them.. Tib definitely knows what he wants, and went after it regardless of the consequences. On to more of this great story.
