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What a heartbreaking emotion story Louis, but I have to say, beautiful writing. I am caught up in it now, no matter how sad the storyline. Great writing!

Alexi is such a kind and considerate person and Joshua and his lovely family are a perfect foil for him. I was scared he was leaving because he thought Joshua belonged with Shane and not him, but when you showed his thoughts of wanting to see Joshua before the meeting the next day, I felt that he was ok with how the day had turned out. So funny catching Lily and Taka together. I hope that Joshua and Alexi figure out a way to be together since Alexi will have to leave soon. Another great chapter!

Awww, a sweet chapter all the way through. That is the upside of being behind in my reading, so much good stuff to read at one time:)

This is one of those chapters that make you want to jump up and down and clap. Great job!!

Kudos! Reactions, and in a sense what you could call a public display of affection. But, I have to say, the cadets public display was a lot more positive than the Brit's reaction and the fallout. Wow, what a closet case Pete is. Makes me wonder what is in his past or what is holding him back as much chemistry that you can feel between him and Corbin. Have to say, as much as I have been rooting for Pete, seeint the cadet make the move on Corbin and kiss him would be like a blot of lightning for poor Corbin. If I were Corbin, I would probably beating my head against the wall and screaming a four letter word as loud as I could possibly scream it. lol I can see right now it is going to be a long week!!!!!

First of all, I love Amanda. She is the perfect friend and beard for Corbin and seems to understand him and that his reason for seeing the cadet is to get Pet's attention. Roberto seems pretty protective, but in a good way. I kind of wonder about Mike. In my little mind, he seems more into Corbin than what he is actually showing. There was almost a naturalness with him and Corbin, the only puzzling thing was the "no kissing" though. Go figure. Wep, Pete was there and saw the caded. I wonder if Corbin will get as much satisfaction out of that as he seems to think he will. The Brit may not live up to the green eyed monster pic that Corbin seems to have of him in his mind. Guess that remains to be seen. On to the next chapter. Great Chapter btw:P

Well, at least West can say he has had a little bit of experience now. lol. I love the little sister and I think she will be very supportive if West decides to come out to her. Another great chapter

Wow, I would not even have known you had posted if not for your status! Ooooooh, a new man. Good luck. HOpe he brings you happiness and contentment. Great chapter. Simon is a well versed liar isn't he and the kind of users as far as Heath and Alex are concerned, and I am sure many more. Poor Alec thought he had misread the person once again, but thank goodness Heath convinced him otherwise. The truth from Heath was not a pretty story but I am glad he was completely honest with Alex because now I feel that between the two of them they will bring Simon down! Good work. Btw sure hope you have another story up your sleeve since you are getting ready to wrap this one up:P

Uh oh. West is going to find it hard to keep the game up if he starts having feelings for Sean. This is getting pretty intense. Can't wait for more!

I can't decide if West is just curious or really interested in Sean. He keeps getting in deeper and deeper. Wondering what will happen if they form a friendship or more doing the project? Then, West will be in really hot water!

Seems pretty interesting. West is playing with fire tho, and it might burn him and Sean.

What a bitch! She ruined Soubi and Ryo's night together and on top of that once more Ryo believes that Soubi is using again. Poor Soubi. It is hard to make anyone believe you are innocent after being guilty of something before and having the evidence on you. I hope Soubi does not leave before morning and taking the drug test for Ryo. Good job girl!

OOOOH, such a sweet chapter. Ryo being so protective and Soubi dyeing his hair for Ryo. Gave me a warm tingly feeling. Great work!

First of all, congratulations for you story being one of the top ten most reviewed storied. (thanks to me) lol jk Second,( smacks the hell out of you for such a back and forth chapter) I did not know whether to slap the boys or hug them, I can't help to think that Pete is not the asshole he is being made out to be. Maybe I am wrong and just want them to kiss already or something. Sheesh! I love this story and it will definitely get one of my noms for the best stories. Great work!

Myself, I am waiting on some sober Corbin and Pete togetherness and see how honest they can be when they are not into the booze. Dakota made a lot of sense in one way, but in another I think she was a little off the mark. In my opinion I don't think Pete kissed her after a year because he wanted her, I think it was more a kiss of " told you I am not gay". She realises that in some ways, but in others she is still the best friend first and feels like she has "dibs" on him even though she does not mean it in a malicious way. Corbin is going to have to step up on his own and do it sober and seriously without all the rough housing and joking. A fun relationship is great, but serious feelings have to be put out there and dealt with. My rant is over, I am caught up now, and ummmm, I think you promised another chapter! ;P

Refreshing and catching up! I genuinely feel sorry for Corbin, which I thought I would never do. He is so confused and enamored with Pete. Dakota seems to be the one that might get the hardheaded Brit to come to his "gay senses". Great chapter. I seem to be a couple of chapters behind, but that is a good thing. Loving it!!!

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Wow, glad I went on and read this before heading home from work. This was a hot chapter!!LOL. GReat writing girl!

Soubi is going to have to come clean now, and I have a feeling that some personal feelings are fixing to come to light for both guys. Off to catch up on your other stories:)

I am so glad that Soubi went with Ryo. Rin is a total asshat. He needed to be bruised. Trying to catch up with all my reading girl. This is a great chapter!

What a beautiful story Renee. Thank you so much for sharing:)

I can't believe this wonderful story is over. It is such a great read and honestly, I would love to know about our boys in the future. Thanks for a wonderful read!

I am so glad that Dale is making his own professional impressions and being very successful. Cole will be even more prouder of him than what he is already. The Glen and Jeremy is proving to be pretty interesting with Cole's mom not even trusting Glen. Makes me wonder if Jeremy might tame the wild guy! Loving this story!!

How funny! Glen turned out to be quite the comedian here. lol It's about time Cole came clean with Dale about how he felt. On to next chapter!

I would suggest getting a beta but this is definitely a cute story and you should continue. As you said, this is your first attempt, and I think you have done a damn good job:P