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Well, looks like I have found another good story to read. This looks great Krista. On to the next chapter.
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Great, but very emotional chapter. The remark about Scott being hot, could be just human nature with some people, not really meaning any disrespect. It would kind of be like someone telling Scott what a handsome man his partner was. Can't wait to read more.
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Well, i am a sucker for happy endings, and you came through, success in business, marriage, and the implication of a " happily ever after". Great story, and hope you post something else soon.
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Wow,talk about a drug sweep. It is sad that this really runs rampant today in our country and many others. Though authorities are catching people everyday buying and selling drugs, laundering money, and extorting money from different sources, most of what is being done is just a drop in the bucker. Our youth are becoming their own manufacurer, and that is even sadder. Thanks for a great read, that I thoroughly enjoyed! Going to read epilogue.
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Well, Libby stepped up, and played her trump card. Don't mess with the Lib. She has folks in high places. Computers are and insight to a lot that none of us know about. Dean has a reason to be cautious.
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I feel like I am watching an enthralling tv show, knowing I can watch the rest online, but keep watching anyway. Buying a new laptop was a good move, now lets see is it works
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Well first of all, your details on the food made me hungry as hell, but I love little things like that in writing. It get pretty boring when some write," They had their usual morning fare", and both headed off to work. That does not get it with me. I am very much a detail and imagery person, and the imagery in the clothing was great. Sean is a very comical person, but I am so glad you gave him someone in this chapter. Drugs in drinks huh? Was is just a club regular trying to get lucky, or someone watching them? Still loving this. Also, John's mom is not a lady to be screwed with.
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I promised myself that I was going to save the rest of this story until tomorrow, but I could not stand it. I have read lots and lots of stories here, and reviewed them, and this one is definitely in the top ten. This chapter is probably one of my favorite chapters of all the stories that i have read. I am a holiday person, and I love all the small details of the meals, drinks, especially the gifts. The cinnabuns were priceless. I love them myself, and ironically, a couple of years ago, my hubby bought some for us to have on Christmas EVE since our daughter and our grandson would not be home until the next morning. We actually had them with our drinks. Also, the familiarity that the two families felt with each other was very profound. Loved it
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WEll, got all excited about snow, Christmas decorations, and John and Dean being together, and then the dreaded phone call. Sounds as if John's mother is on the ball, and has the money to make many do her bidding. That is a good thing though when it comes to protecting the boys. Keyring huh? A chip or tracking device? Guess I will have to read to see.
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Sean sounds like a hoot, that has a heart of gold. Well, at least Dean does not have to worry about his mom,all the neighbors have taken her in as their own. Still wondering who is lurking around just waiting for the chance to pounce!
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Dean has got a rich boyfriend, and doesn't seem too impressed, more like uncomfortable around the money part. John is into Dean no matter what, and cares about Debbie also. I like that John encouraged Dean to talk to his mom, and set her mind at rest about his being gay, and being safe. I loved the idea of having the neighbor's for Thanksgiving Dinner. People do not do enough of that now days. Great chapter.
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WEll, spontaneous sex is always the best in my book :0 So, Dean is still in danger, and all he could think about was looking at porn on his computer. What a youngster he is still in his mind. Interesting to see what is found of REAL importance on the computer.
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Ummm, hope John is not the jealous type, because I know Dean is going to be honest with him about Ty, and him being gay also. The roomies seem very nice, and a lot of fun. Still, who is the dang shooter? Great chapter
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Wow, eleven more chapters? I can't wait. For some stupid reason, I thought you were fixing to end this abruptly. Feel a little sad for John and Dean being separated, but anxious to meet Dean's roomie. So, still no i.d. on the shooter. That's ok. I am enjoying the hell out of this story.
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Sheesh, for some reason I thought this was the left chapter and you were going to leave me hanging with my mouth wide open. But I see another chapter. Sadie is a perfect female dog's name. I was a little sad for the one left behind though. Still trying to wrap my head around who the hell the shooter is going to be. On to the next chapter
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Wondering if Sean could be the shooter. Worst case scenario is that their neighbor was not actually killed, and fired the first shot into the books for the info it contained, and now they are saying he is dead to lure the killer out that was trying to get the info from him. Just thinking.
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Poor Dean, being outed, or being killed. That is not a very good choice. At least he has his mom and John for support, but they can't protect him.
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Well, the shooter is very brave or stupid one. Wonder if the shooter killed the lady who rented the car or what. Lot of mystery here.
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Dean was so funny with the " I'm easy remark". I think they are both pretty damn easy if you ask me. Great chapter
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Indiana University (IU), Bloomington, IN
joann414 commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Indiana University (IU), Bloomington, IN
Well, I may be late in finding and starting this story, but I am so absorbed in Dean's story that I love to review, and just relised that I have not reviewed as of yet. First, the neighbor across the street has me a little more than curious, and the law firm sure is taking an interest in Dean. Makes me wonder if there is a little protection involved here. Your characters all seem to have an interesting side. Enjoying this immensely. -
Awwwwww, this was so friggin cute. Max, the hero, but damn what a wake up call!
