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Wow. I can't wait to see how much hotter the next chapters get!
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A lousy week. Hope everyone is better now. The story is going great and I look forward to more.
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I like the way this story is starting out. I'll definitely be checking out the rest.
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i did not see this coming but it all makes sense. It ties everything up in a nice bow. That poor baby; it's the worst thing a parent can go through and my heart goes out to Nash. I now look forward to everything getting together at some point. Great story.
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I am now breathlessly waiting for Nash's story. The work he does with the kids and the horses is good, so I can't see why he didn't mention it so there must be more serious things under it all. Looking forward to it.
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I'm enjoying this story. Good characters and I love J & M's family. Nice to spend some time with the people from Tattoo.
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I like Jarren and really hope he gets himself together. He deserved to be happy. I just hope that Nash can also get his stuff together.
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I didn't read the postscript carefully enough. All my condolences to you and your family.
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So far, so good. I like the people and the story is going smoothly. I look forward to more.
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I've been looking forward to this story since I finished A Tattoo, which I loved. This was a good beginning, the characters are good and hopefully Jarren wll keep talking.
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A perfect ending with HEAs all around; I have a smile on my face I can't get rid of. Thank you for much for all the pleasure this story has given us all since chapter one.
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A good story ending is one of those good/bad situations. i enjoyed this story and visiting with all friends, new and old. Thank you.
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I've read this story from the beginning and it never failed to to entertain, delight or teach me. Thank you for bringing us these wonderful people and I hope tp see more of them and of other writing. I only wish CJ was real as the world needs some people like him.
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Beautiful chapter. Love the name, which was no surprise. We have such a blanket in my family that my mother knit; it's a great legacy. Look forward to seeing everyone interact with Liebe,
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A girl surrounded by all those men? Can we all spell spoiled? At least the title makes some sense now. The apartment sounds great. As to Christina, we all knew Damien was an ass but I never thought he was a violent one. It's terrible that Christina had to learn what he was really like in that manner.
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Thank you for gifting us this story. It's a beautiful story and IMHO is a rousing success. Funny enough, my last comment was going to be that I think they needed a dog and hint about maybe a one-chapter short story with one but now it's not necessary. I will look forward to anything else you might write and best wishes for your future. I think I will be reading this story again as I am a chronic re-reader.
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A wonderful story. I look forward to the epilogue maybe a follow-up involving Jarren? Thank you.
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OMG, the letter. Tears galore.
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Everything is beautiful. The rings, the tattoo, the whole chapter. The wedding will probably make me cry!
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A lot of fun, interesting things in this chapter. Also, a very hot chapter!
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I agree with all the other comments. This reads like a finale but doesn't feel like one. I think there is more to come. In any event, this was a nice interlude from all the action.
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You can see how much Richie has matured. I just hope Lucy will be all right, physically and emotionally. The house sounds great.
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I agree, a perfect name for the foundation. Great chapter and I look forward to more. Sad it has to end at some point but, ah well, that's life.
