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A great chapter and a great celebration. Loved the toast.
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Chapter 34 - New beginnings
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 34 - New beginnings
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Good chapter. I look forward to seeing more with Max.
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Your story and the junior set is pretty awesome, as is the tattoo. I like Thierry as well.
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As always, a good chapter. The only thing I'm a little bummed out over is that there isn't enough of Cesar and Brett for me. I love the junior set but C & B are my favorites.
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I'm so glad to see D & L again, they are on my list of favorite couples. Though we don't know him as well, I get the feeling Max will fit in with both men well. Yes, there will be some minor and major adjustments to be made - he is a teenager and has been through serious trauma - but I think they can manage. I look forward to reading more. Thank you.
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Whoa, CJ is one busy guy. He has so much going on I'm surprised he has time to breath. I also find myself wondering if he will end up in the State Dept. He has a lot of choices opening up for him. As always, a good chapter.
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Chapter 33 - Is that a no?
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Is that a no?
I'm enjoying these new family members. I look forward to the craziness that will ensue with Gwyn adds her baby to the mix. -
Chapter 32 - Help arrives
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Help arrives
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Enjoyed this chapter. Also. condolences on the loss of your mother. Reclusing yourself was the best thing for you. I've been there and done that. I look forward to more of this story.
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As always, a great way to start the weekend. I'm hoping you'll keep posting on Fridays. Happy to see Owen wasn't more seriously hurt. Hearing updates on all their lives is always interested and, as to Thiago's situation, Whoops. Look forward to more.
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Loved it. Look forward to more.
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Great to have the boys back. I'm also sure Owen will be fine as it seems to me too soon for a major problem. Oh, and I also caught the fight/flight typo and just corrected it in my mind.
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Good to have everyone back. As much as the cat needs declawing, it is considered cruel and can cause a can pain for a long period of time. Either have them investigate training or keep the cat confined. Anyway, a good chapter. I personally think the candy thing is getting a little old. Just get Link a safe already for him to lock his candy in,
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Great story! Thank you for the present. Happy holiday.
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So glad. I thought maybe this was the end. I love epilogues!
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I just binge-read the story and I liked it very much. Nice characters, realistic situations and a smoothness in the writing. I enjoyed how they let their relationship develop naturally without the immediate jump into bed. Thank you for the story.
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At the risk of being brought to task, I see the major result of the second amendment is death, usually of the innocent. I'm not saying repeal it, but it needs MAJOR changes, imho.
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A timely, moving story. Thank you, thank you and thank you once again.
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Nice to see G & D and crew again. Great chapter. Robert is a fun addition.
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What a bitch!!
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Watching K & D handle twins is going to be so much fun. As to Steven, I'm so sorry to see him gone; he was a true asset to the story. I'm wondering how bad the info he found out is if it got him killed. Also, wondering if Nan knew as she is too calm. It could be shock or it could be something she and Steven discussed. Oh, well. I guess it'll all come out soon.
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I like these two. I thought the story had ended.
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First, I am happy to hear your health problems are improving and continue to do so. Second, I love the story and am glad things seems to be working out. I look forward to reading more. Thank you.
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So sad; it brings back memories. I had to do the same thing when my husband was dying of cancer. I would love to just grab the narrator and hold on tight. Life does go on.
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