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My condolences on your loss. Don;t remember if I commented before this, but I have been enjoying this story. This was some chapter, I hope Carson gets what's coming to him. I think Brody, with our guys' help, will come through this.
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Just like you said, a fun short story. It put a smile on my face. Thank you.
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I agree with Mann. Awwww. As to no CJ and company for six months, UGH. How do we survive the withdrawal? Maybe you could throw us a short one-chapter story every once in a while? In any case, Carlos, thank you for giving us these men and these stories. They are absorbing, entertaining and educational and one of my true Friday pleasures. I guess I'll have to start rereading the stories - again - from the beginning, one chapter a week. **Sigh**
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Great wedding. I loved it all. I'm also waiting for Christina to wise up. I guess she wants something different and sees something in that idiot that others don't.
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A beautifully moving story that left me with tears in my eyes. Alan will always love and miss Eric but he's not so isolated anymore. He now has Jake and Colin as, perhaps. surrogate grandsons. Thank you.
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What a wonderful wedding. It perfectly reflected CJ and Owen. I look forward to the reception. And thank you for including the link to the song; I love that version.
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The First Day of School, The Last Day of Fear
avidreadr commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The First Day of School, The Last Day of Fear
An excellent chapter. Lots of ups and downs to keep us going. And it is awful how common gun violence has become that we're not shocked so much anymore. -
As always, a great way to start a Friday. A great chapter. It was a lot of fun and nice to see old friends and catch up a little. I find myself looking forward more to this wedding than some others I've attended. Happy Friday!
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Fun chapter. I enjoyed it. I have one unrelated question. At the end of the last story, you mentioned Liz had a final request that our boys were unsure about but I don't remember reading yet what that request was. Did I miss it or has it not come up yet? I've been curious. Thank you.
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Good chapter. I like how the guys look. Oh, it's not only guys who look forward to Friday! Some of us are gals of a certain age!
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I enjoyed this chapter. Lots to mull over. If more people adopted Chance's definition of Christian, the world would be a lot better. Have a nice weekend. See you next Friday.
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The Boyfriend, The Girlfriend, The Brother
avidreadr commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Boyfriend, The Girlfriend, The Brother
I knew Noah was going to break up with her and she will try to get even. Racist, homophobic egotists like that never realize that others don't think like them and that their rantings will eventually get them in trouble. There might be a rocky time ahead but I have faith it will all straighten out in the end. Great chapter. -
A Wednesday to Remember
avidreadr commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Wednesday to Remember
Just started reading this and binge-read it A great story. We saw so little of Hannah, it's hard to make a judgement on her. She could just be a reserved person. My feeling, though, that the story is going too smooth and your comments on her made me think there is more to come. I'm not concerned because I don't think Noah would tolerate anyone being nasty to Nick, even a girlfriend, or future ex-girlfriend. -
A well-written, thoughtful chapter on a tough issue. I remember going through all the same emotions when I lost loved ones. I also sympathize a lot with Olga as I lost my husband 15 years ago to cancer. It was great how the Abellos took care of things for her; it gives her some time to decide what she wants to do. A visit to DC might be a good idea. Thanks for making my Friday.
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Chapter 22 - Looking Into The Future
avidreadr commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Chapter 22 - Looking Into The Future
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The house sounds great. I love how Owen negotiated the deals so our boys got exactly what they wanted. Have a nice weekend.
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Good chapter. I am so looking forward to Hawaii and more of the kids.
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Loved it. Very satisfying to see Ray get his.
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So much for the truth coming out! Nothing like a kid to just tell it all. I'm enjoying this story and look forward to more.
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Although I have been waiting eagerly, I somehow missed chapter 1. CJ has always interacted on a level above his age, but I feel there's a difference now; it seems to me as if the teenager inside him is rapidly retreating. It is a normal part of life but it is interesting to observe. I have always loved the way the characters in this story interact and have always thought it was one of this series' strengths. I am looking forward to seeing where the story heads. Cesar quitting his job was a surprise, but it makes perfect sense and I think Brett will enjoy having his husband around more. It's nice to have this to look forward to on Fridays. Thank you.
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Loved it. I'd also love to see more of this, even if it just in the form of occasional prompts. I loved Dee.
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I'm glad things seem to be working out for Daniel. As for Jones, it seems to me he got what he deserve. As for who did it, I suspect it was arranged by someone from his side in order to make sure he wouldn't take anyone else down with him. While Mr. Crowder was suggested, I don't think he could jeopardize his second chance with his son.
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It sounds a butler is a great solution for this family and Robert seems to be the perfect candidate. I look forward to more.
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Promising beginning. Well written with a nice cast of characters and a premise that can go many places. I look forward to more
