ninecila
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Oh boy.... Somehow I think Tharyn should have noticed something, but on the other Hand I can't be truely Mad at him, because he is going to beat himself up enough as it is. And Deoran seems like an interesting follow with a deep past
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I am so happy about this new chapter Thank you for continuing
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Wow, really intense chapter!
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Aw, I just love it
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I simply love it! I Wasserfälle surprised when I realized this is only the third chapter - it feels as if I has known Tahryn and Kurt much longer. It's written so well!
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Wow, what an intense chapter! Looking forward to the next one )
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I love this story! It's so interesting and the dyslexia is adding spice I lecke the alpha, he seems like a sensible an compassionate man. I get the feeling that his Rapport to Kurt and his influence on him are far geraten to that of Kurts parents. And why haven't we met Jene earlier? Is she quite a bit Older than Kurt? Because I had the Impression that he had no friends in his Age group. And how old is the alpha? Looking forward to the next chapter
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Love it
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Part IV - The Heart Decides. Chapter 27
ninecila commented on Graeme's story chapter in Part IV - The Heart Decides. Chapter 27
I just loved, how Vince surprised Dave - his Face Must have been priceless And I like the scheme to Save the tree - quite a plan to think of. Can't wait to see how this progresses -
An Almost Ordinary Schoolday
ninecila commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in An Almost Ordinary Schoolday
And the resamblence to Erich Kästner gets even more pronounced Imthink I will have to read the other book you mentioned and compare the two. (Btw: I know Erich Kästner, because I am from Germany, Nuremberg to be exact) I really like the story and am curious how it will progress -
Their idea to Trade lives sometimes reminds me of the book "Das doppelte Lottchen". I am looking forward to getting to read more
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Part I - Who is The Heart? Chapter 8
ninecila commented on Graeme's story chapter in Part I - Who is The Heart? Chapter 8
There is some humour in that last line, despite the akward Situation -
Wow, hat an intense chapter ....
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Love it already
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Dramatic, but really good I hope there is coming more soon
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The last sentence is so sweet
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Awwww, so cute! Can't wait for Zander to see the ring
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I can't believe he killed the cat! An inmocemt being just to hirt his son - how despicable can someone get... I am disgusted with his father! The poor cat and the poor boy... So cruel. I don't think I like this chapter, even though it is written well.
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I started to read this with high expectations and let me say: you didn't disappoint me! A great beginning, which has me looking forward to more!
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Polite Dinner Conversation
ninecila commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Polite Dinner Conversation
So sweet and cute! Love it -
Nice chapter! I am curious how this is going to continue
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Lol! Your comment about computers and STDs - that's a nice way of describing malware! I liked this view into Ashers thoughtsand his state of mind.
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Confusion and Education
ninecila commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Confusion and Education
I love Bay's last sentence! And Bay really matured fast...
