Scotty

WOW, i luv this i couldnt stop laffing the name calling was awesome (mean girls gay version) gud one i give you that. great chapter really mean cillfhanger but great well wirtten. Pls update soonest cant wait.

Lol Heath has gotten himself into more than he bagained for. Naptowngirl you make reading so much fun, when i was reading this the song of adam lambert close our eyes came to my mind, this is awesome you alway keep me asking for more cant wait to read what happens next.

How could a father be so cruel, wicked and mean to his own son I still don’t get it, what provoked Zack father to be this wicked to him. I wish he can gather courage and tell somebody of these event I really do.. I just stated this story and will really hope it end in favor of Zack and thank GOD Brody in his life because I love it when Brody’s name is been mention. Sam seems to be a cutie love his character he make me laugh. For also can’t wait to see what happened to his asshole of a dad….

I kept repeating the lines in my head: I love you. I do. And if there is something wrong with being in love…” Tibial shook his head. “Then death is preferable. I know what I feel. It’s not wrong. Love is never wrong.” i must say that brought tears to my eyes, love this story and hope they stay stay strong for each other (sighs) feel so sorry for their love but hope they will come out strong….. Love it, can’t wait for the next chapter hope it’s soon…..

Love the couping HOT!!!!!! but i felt so sorry for Tib, hope things will work out for them love their body Chemistry . Nice hope the next chapter come soonest. KEEP IT UP

What can i say this is acting on script,and the story makes me wanna do things i should not be doing, its like watching a movie and imagin its real, Naptowngirl you are really good MY BEST LINES EVER: “Um…” David stammered. “Um, what?” “I needed you and you came. You came to rescue me,You have a way of making me feel safe and I need you to save me now.” Christian’s voice sounded desperate even to his own ears, but he didn’t care. “I need to feel safe, David. I need to feel. I need you. I called and you came when i need. Cant wait for the next chapter. KEEP IT UP

This chapter was cool you refined it all in a was i did nt imagin, i mean i love David and Christan storyline they are cute togerther and loving how Christan is feeling attracted to David....... Cant wait to read wat happen next Great Job and keep it up