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Chapter Twenty-Two How Valuable is Your Trust in Milan? Rory sat in history class answering questions on the surprise history quiz by their teacher. He knew most of the answers, thanks to hanging out with Milan after school. Reading with Milan pushed him, got him to read chapters ahead in all his classes. Rory wrote in the last answer and glanced up at the clock on the wall. There were five minutes left to the bell. Luckily, he could leave after finishing his quiz. The perks of being
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Chapter Twenty-One Expect the unexpected Milan watched emotions war on his mother’s face. He knew how hard it would be for her to accept Rory in his life the way he wanted. She had sat up with him through countless hours on very bad days and nights, worried to death. That kind of commitment...the bond forged, it was sacred. It needed discussion and everything Milan could give. Letting go of Rory’s hand, Milan got up and went to kneel before his mother, taking her hands in his. “
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Please, can’t you help me hold on to this? Dinner in the Takeda house was at seven o’clock. The time never changed, unless Marie was occupied, or the family was otherwise occupied. It was only around six thirty when Milan took the bag Rory brought in to his room with him. The bag held the cookies and herbs from Jet’s farm. He had forgotten about them. He paused at the second floor to make sure his parents were still locked in the master bedroom together. He couldn’t hear them talking, so
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Yay, you recognized it! I love that particular line from that song, its been stuck in my head this past week. Thank you!! I feel vindicated, hahaha. I'll see what I can do about an early post this coming week.
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Hope dangles on a string, like slow spinning redemption Rory picked up Milan from the armchair, and took him to the couch. Asta brought him a cushion for Milan’s head, and Rory helped him get comfortable. “He’s not opening his eyes,” Rory said, sitting on the edge of the wide couch. He held Milan’s hands between his. “Stop worrying and answer my question.” Asta perched on the coffee table her gaze on Milan. “He’ll wake up, Little Morgan. Trust me.” Rory let out a sigh, and squeez
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Yes, every intention! I will finish it. Thanks for finding it!
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My two cents: The villain is coming, he's coming over, next chapter.
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This series has always been like a practice story for me. There is a chunk of continuation in my drive, that I haven't yet gotten the courage to post. Dan and Harry do talk about this in that chunk, I'll post it when I feel it's ready to share. Thank you for reading Dan and Jae's story. I really love this pair.
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Kiyo is quite a character to write. I love how everyone has this ideas about him already, it makes it exciting when writing ahead. He's straddling being a villain in a way. So much fun. This...hahaha...gosh I loved this. I wasn't even thinking it when naming this character. Still, I love it!! Rory is going to head this town soon, so yes you're right, there are a lot of people who want to project on him what they hope a perfect Alpha should look like. He has a lot to stand up to. Yep, the council is always watching....dadada...lol.
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Chapter 18 Let the die be cast Rory’s gaze stayed rooted to the ground, lest he betray his emotions. Anger brewed beneath the surface. Lechter moved much faster than he could. He still had three leaves on his bond with Milan, and he had no full understanding of Kiyo’s work. Still, three truths remained. Milan was his mate, he was human and the Goddess was never wrong. He directed his question to June. ‘May I ask the nature of the summons?’ ‘You are to provide evidence on
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Isn't that the best! Hmmmm.... .....Milan, better keep that under wraps for now..meanwhile the Council is on Rory's back..so, he might just...(coughs) 'til next time.
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Kiyo Takeda, are you the Villain? Rory held Milan’s hand on their way down the stairs. Milan vibrating with infectious excitement. Rory couldn’t help mirroring his smile. His heart reveled in this unexpected freedom to express a small percentage of what he felt for Milan. When they got to the ground floor, Milan wrapped his arm around Rory’s waist. “You’ll call me, right?” Milan asked. “You don’t use your phone very much, do you?” Living in a town of wolves almost made cellphones obs
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Thank you @Mac McNeill for reading! This was also one of my favorites to write!
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Chapter 16 Unforgivable Violence On a sunny Saturday mid-morning, the snow melting on the ground outside, the scent of Marie’s favorite tomato sauce and basil in the air from their lasagna. Sitting on a chair at the kitchen island table, Milan got his first kiss. Rory’s scent filled his nostrils: clean earth and wood, as though Rory had ran through the rain, in a fragrant field filled with lavender. Rory’s lips on his felt soft, gentle. They caressed his, drawing a soft moan from him
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True, though sometimes the issues can really make things hard to remember the loyalty, at least in some cases. I love your answer though, it places family on such an important perspective. I totally respect this! I respect this too because sometimes family is not blood, but those who find you, bring you up and stick with you through the worst, and the best. You're truly lucky to have a family of your choosing, you feel that way about. There are so many aspects of family...it's kind of mind-blowing. Thank you for answering my questions. They've helped a lot, now, I'm going to get to work writing. Finally have some free time this weekend to get down to it. Cheers.
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A heartbreaking tirade. Rory filled his senses with the lone wolf’s sickening scent, keeping alert as they raced through trees. Paws on cold ground, leaving a perfect trail for June’s team. They were headed away from the pack house, heading toward town. Away from Milan’s house, thank goodness. ‘He’s determined to escape.’ Rory cursed when they crossed a road into the forest that connected to his high school. ‘We catch him and I’m killing him for making me miss dinner,’ Chris jum
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@Howzat that's is such an awesome thing. I love that they can rely on you, and put their trust in you. It's beautiful.
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Chris did not win any points in this chapter for sure, but he has his reasons too. Some experiences leave us quite damaged, that it's hard to see the big picture, or even accept change without a shove in the right direction. I understand, the first reaction Chris had in this chapter was not easy, but it is what it is. As for destiny, sure, destiny cannot be changed, but if what you're presented with is not your normal, then more than likely, you'll be against it, until you have no choice but to take it. Or so I think, still working on the next chapters, I'm looking forward to Milan/Rory scenes, yay...hehehe.
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Chapter 14 La Famiglia = Absolute Loyalty “What do you think? Is it good?” Milan asked Rory on their third lunch period. Marie had made the crostata without much begging. She packed two servings in Milan’s lunchbox. Including a note with a smiley face for Rory for making the request. Now, Milan watched Rory eat his share with the first smile of the day. “It’s good,” Rory said, when he finished the first slice. “Your Marie is a really great cook.” “I’ll tell her you said so,”
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Chapter 13 Portento is Sanctuary: It Calls those in Need. Rory lay on his bed staring at the ceiling, his brain unable to shut down. It was late, he had driven in from Grandma Asta’s at eleven o’clock. Shifting to the right, he took up his cell phone and swiped his thumb over the screen. He couldn’t help smiling at the message from Milan. ‘Hope you got home okay. ‘Night, Rory.’ He had replied over an hour ago, but couldn’t help staring at the message wondering if Milan was asleep
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Glad you love this little look into Yoshi's life. I'll work on posting some more, as I find them.
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Chapter 12 La Stanchezza – The Fatigue Milan did not know when the symptoms of his illness started. He was too young, too small to understand the gravity of the situation as his condition progressed. He did remember the look in his parents’ eyes. The stark fear in Ilaria’s gaze when he burned too hot, and the frustration in Kiyo’s eyes when no medicine would work on him. Week to week, month to month, year to year, he got used to the fight. The illness became part of him, and now, at
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The surprising strange search for a man named Midori Taimeng Jian of Fier lived a dedicated life. He believed in providing the best for his family and the community. His grandfather’s people were originally from Dwind, and some of them remained in Dwind even as Jian’s parents migrated to Fier. When the great strife started in Fier, he moved his family to join his distant relatives in the small town on the outskirts of Dwind. After the war ended, Jian longed for the home he had built in
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First day jitters and wanting to skip ahead already…to the good part A snowstorm kept Rory away from Milan’s house the night before school started. Rory woke up early the next morning determined to reach the office before Milan. He wanted Milan to have an easy first day, and to make sure no one gave him a hard time at school. Grabbing up a jacket from his closet, he wore his boots and left his bedroom heading downstairs. It was five-thirty in the morning, and the house was already buzzin
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