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Welcome to the family. Snowflakes drifted down, covering the windscreen making it difficult to see ahead. Ilaria sprayed antifreeze, and set the wipers to fast. The road was clear of traffic, it always was in this town. Her heart ached. Loving a brilliant man was hard. Loving children she wished to protect from everything in this world, harder. She swiped her right hand over her eyes when the road blurred because of her tears. “Mamma, you should let me drive,” Ayu suggested. “I pref
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Choose me, Milan. Please, choose me. Matt and Topher brought along three snowmobiles from the garage in town, hitched to the back of the SUV on a trailer. They were to use them on their ride through the Swamp Lands. Rory made a mental note to stop by and thank his uncle for all the support he provided without question. Rory’s snowmobile was built for two, so he made sure Milan was settled on the backseat. He bundled Milan tight covering him with blankets and making sure the hood was tied
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I was good today, got 2 for 2. Now, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to hear what you think...lolz. Sure does!!
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Mischief managed!
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Blood Born Right Rory could only remember three instances of an alpha challenge in Portento. Once, when Connor turned eighteen and was about to take over the role of Alpha from his father. Connor’s father insisted Connor take on the challenge to prove that he was ready to take on protection of the town. Connor won the challenge of course, but that meant that he was now acting Alpha, allowing his father to take a step back. The second time was before Rory’s mother died. Rory was too y
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@Will Hawkins I just saw your comments, I changed the sentence and don't mind if you let me know when you see such grammar things on the next chapters...I'm quite open to your thoughts. It helps me out very much. Thank you!
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Chapter Twenty-Four Fear Milan bit his lip hard to keep from screaming. He knew pain, the kind that crept up over a period of time. His usual pain came controlled with high powered meds that kept him in a haze. Never had he felt raw, unfiltered excruciating pain. Tears kept sliding down his cheeks, his gaze on the knife lodged in his shoulder. It looked unreal. Marie touched his left arm and the scream he was holding back broke through. “I’m sorry,” Marie said, she was in tears too,
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Chapter Twenty – Three Get me a wheelbarrow and a shovel for all the answers Kiyo sat in the armchair closest to Milan, his gaze on Rowen who held Milan’s gloved hand. It was strange to imagine Milan forging what seemed like deep bonds with people who were now of scientific interest, if he was to be honest. Werewolves, he couldn’t stop the scoff that escaped his lips. Was this a look into M. Night Shyamalan’s muse? It left him feeling a lot out of his depth. His gaze shifted to Rory
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Chapter Twenty-Two How Valuable is Your Trust in Milan? Rory sat in history class answering questions on the surprise history quiz by their teacher. He knew most of the answers, thanks to hanging out with Milan after school. Reading with Milan pushed him, got him to read chapters ahead in all his classes. Rory wrote in the last answer and glanced up at the clock on the wall. There were five minutes left to the bell. Luckily, he could leave after finishing his quiz. The perks of being
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Chapter Twenty-One Expect the unexpected Milan watched emotions war on his mother’s face. He knew how hard it would be for her to accept Rory in his life the way he wanted. She had sat up with him through countless hours on very bad days and nights, worried to death. That kind of commitment...the bond forged, it was sacred. It needed discussion and everything Milan could give. Letting go of Rory’s hand, Milan got up and went to kneel before his mother, taking her hands in his. “
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Please, can’t you help me hold on to this? Dinner in the Takeda house was at seven o’clock. The time never changed, unless Marie was occupied, or the family was otherwise occupied. It was only around six thirty when Milan took the bag Rory brought in to his room with him. The bag held the cookies and herbs from Jet’s farm. He had forgotten about them. He paused at the second floor to make sure his parents were still locked in the master bedroom together. He couldn’t hear them talking, so
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Yay, you recognized it! I love that particular line from that song, its been stuck in my head this past week. Thank you!! I feel vindicated, hahaha. I'll see what I can do about an early post this coming week.
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Hope dangles on a string, like slow spinning redemption Rory picked up Milan from the armchair, and took him to the couch. Asta brought him a cushion for Milan’s head, and Rory helped him get comfortable. “He’s not opening his eyes,” Rory said, sitting on the edge of the wide couch. He held Milan’s hands between his. “Stop worrying and answer my question.” Asta perched on the coffee table her gaze on Milan. “He’ll wake up, Little Morgan. Trust me.” Rory let out a sigh, and squeez
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Yes, every intention! I will finish it. Thanks for finding it!
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My two cents: The villain is coming, he's coming over, next chapter.
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This series has always been like a practice story for me. There is a chunk of continuation in my drive, that I haven't yet gotten the courage to post. Dan and Harry do talk about this in that chunk, I'll post it when I feel it's ready to share. Thank you for reading Dan and Jae's story. I really love this pair.
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Kiyo is quite a character to write. I love how everyone has this ideas about him already, it makes it exciting when writing ahead. He's straddling being a villain in a way. So much fun. This...hahaha...gosh I loved this. I wasn't even thinking it when naming this character. Still, I love it!! Rory is going to head this town soon, so yes you're right, there are a lot of people who want to project on him what they hope a perfect Alpha should look like. He has a lot to stand up to. Yep, the council is always watching....dadada...lol.
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Chapter 18 Let the die be cast Rory’s gaze stayed rooted to the ground, lest he betray his emotions. Anger brewed beneath the surface. Lechter moved much faster than he could. He still had three leaves on his bond with Milan, and he had no full understanding of Kiyo’s work. Still, three truths remained. Milan was his mate, he was human and the Goddess was never wrong. He directed his question to June. ‘May I ask the nature of the summons?’ ‘You are to provide evidence on
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Isn't that the best! Hmmmm.... .....Milan, better keep that under wraps for now..meanwhile the Council is on Rory's back..so, he might just...(coughs) 'til next time.
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Kiyo Takeda, are you the Villain? Rory held Milan’s hand on their way down the stairs. Milan vibrating with infectious excitement. Rory couldn’t help mirroring his smile. His heart reveled in this unexpected freedom to express a small percentage of what he felt for Milan. When they got to the ground floor, Milan wrapped his arm around Rory’s waist. “You’ll call me, right?” Milan asked. “You don’t use your phone very much, do you?” Living in a town of wolves almost made cellphones obs
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Thank you @Mac McNeill for reading! This was also one of my favorites to write!
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Chapter 16 Unforgivable Violence On a sunny Saturday mid-morning, the snow melting on the ground outside, the scent of Marie’s favorite tomato sauce and basil in the air from their lasagna. Sitting on a chair at the kitchen island table, Milan got his first kiss. Rory’s scent filled his nostrils: clean earth and wood, as though Rory had ran through the rain, in a fragrant field filled with lavender. Rory’s lips on his felt soft, gentle. They caressed his, drawing a soft moan from him
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True, though sometimes the issues can really make things hard to remember the loyalty, at least in some cases. I love your answer though, it places family on such an important perspective. I totally respect this! I respect this too because sometimes family is not blood, but those who find you, bring you up and stick with you through the worst, and the best. You're truly lucky to have a family of your choosing, you feel that way about. There are so many aspects of family...it's kind of mind-blowing. Thank you for answering my questions. They've helped a lot, now, I'm going to get to work writing. Finally have some free time this weekend to get down to it. Cheers.
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A heartbreaking tirade. Rory filled his senses with the lone wolf’s sickening scent, keeping alert as they raced through trees. Paws on cold ground, leaving a perfect trail for June’s team. They were headed away from the pack house, heading toward town. Away from Milan’s house, thank goodness. ‘He’s determined to escape.’ Rory cursed when they crossed a road into the forest that connected to his high school. ‘We catch him and I’m killing him for making me miss dinner,’ Chris jum
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