lilansui
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Chapter eighteen was a conundrum, so much to go through that for a moment I was afraid I might have lost the reader, but...it worked out well, i don't think there's much I could have changed. Zun was in trouble and Jiro was fighting like hell to survive this, and SarEr was definitely in need of rescue..fun times...
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This story was fun for suspense, I think I had moments sitting around in the lair, laughing with my little finger at the corner of my mouth. lol...gosh, this is fun going back. So the tangle continues.
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Went for the wicked taking over the world in this chapter...lol
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Cole and Savan are going to have a difficult time ahead here. Nothing is easy anymore.
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Calm before a storm was right...
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Savan's trust issues are way beyond the average scale on the negative side...lol...deep down inside, Cole would have realized all wasn't as it seemed.
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Isn't Baggage fun? in the end it always rears its ugly head, but...romance is so sweet we can't let baggage stop us... I think SarEr was just reaching his limit
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A kiss in time...lol I considered the slug to the face...but then Cole was my romantic what can I say...
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The struggle to remain indifferent to the people around them was really hard to write. Zun and SarEr trying to fit in, and not grow roots, very hard to do..
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Thank you so much for reading through this one too. This one was short, but I think it was just right. Young Jae's and Min's love was the ultimate goal and having Min become the head of a family worked out. It's always good to come back and see some of the things I might have added, but also it's the best to read your thoughts. Thank you so much...
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Thanks Layla, I think that Shin might have worked out if he stayed, but if he had, then Young Jae and Min wouldn't be right...lol. Thank you for your reviews.
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I just saw this, wow, is bad to say I loved that you cried. lol. Thanks so much for your reviews Lisa.
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Young Jae was being a knight, makes him so easy to love right...lol. You're absolutely right about Young Jae putting his faith in Min. Truth might have spared him this moment...
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Lara is grown up beyond her years.
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I love the fountain scene in this chapter, it was really a lot of fun to write and of course the kiss. Favorite chapter in this story.
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You summed up Min's predicament beautifully. His mom was pushy, in an annoying way, but she was going after what she wanted. I love your thoughts on Min's situation.
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Young Jae could be considered stuck in a between a rock and a hard place. A lot to change for him...
