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Hi Daithi, I'm sorry for the delay before, a few scheduling problems caught up with me that's why I've been so out of the loop. I think I should start an update blog on GA lol...As for Haje and Vincent, their relationship is on the rocks before it ever gets off the ground... so many reasons not to trust each other, but it will come together soon. Thank you for your review as always.

Leshwar, Thanks so much, I'm so happy you loved this story of mine. Yeah, I think there was so much I could have added in and so much I could have left out, but it worked out in the end. I'm so grateful for the positive response to Blu Dream and your remarks, they give me a different perspective and most of all, I'm happy to see you voice the end result I was going for. So thank you again for the review and I hope to post another short soon.

Happy Birthday Tucker!!! :wizard: :wizard: I'm late to the party, but I'm with Kitt, hope you're still celebrating.

Vincent sat in the armchair across the leather couch watching Haje. Peaceful in sleep, dark hair spread on the soft pillow he’d found in Shin’s bedroom, Haje seemed too young to have suffered so much. It couldn’t be easy losing a twin brother. He didn’t have siblings but he had lost friends along the way. Good friends, Vincent thought, memories of his military days flooding him. His teammates were men he’d considered brothers. He’d lost most of those brothers during missions, each death le

thank you Lisa, you made my day, I'll definitely see if there's more Liron and Milo in my head somewhere, for your reviews as always Thanks.

Thank you Cannd, I'll definitely work on that last gesture for Milo and Liron and update this chapter. Thank you so much for your insight, and your reviews, I love reading them. Thank you again.

Thank you vinnyvin, for reading and reviewing.

Thanks Daithi, I'm glad you loved this one too.

Thank you so much Quietman.

I love your wild spirit, lol, Liron should have taken it and run right...I'm with you, but Liron is a stubborn git. Lol.

Liron is a bit stubborn, in a way he's had to prove his own merit for so long, (paying for his school, and working to get through and find a good job) that I think when he's offered such a chance, it's difficult for him to think he could up and leave. You're right about his sister not wanting him to give up the chance, but I think Liron's decision was because he was afraid to trust himself, a little of Milo and just the thought of leaving home. You always get me thinking Cannd, now that I read this reaction, I see a whole lot of other places this story could have gone. I get the itch to twitch it a little, hahaha... thanks so much and I'm happy for your reaction and thoughts and enthusiasm for Milo and Liron.

Thank you Daithi. Liron's dilemma, i wanted that to feel real, like if you were given the chance what would you do kind of moment..lol. I truly appreciate your reviews, thank you.

Wow, I wonder if you ever saw Jamie again!! That's sounds like so much fun though.

You got the catch-22 right, Liron is afraid of the future I guess. Trusting so easily can end up in broken hearts. lol.

He's crazy right!! lol, thanks Lisa.

I think Liron thought he was joking or putting him on, but you're right, Milo wasn't taking no for an answer.

Happy Birthday to you!! :wizard: :wizard:

Chapter 4 I regretted walking off that bus. For love, I probably should have kept sitting on that couch and when Milo asked me if my bags were packed I should have said yes, or made him stop by my apartment to get them. Instead, I’d taken a small folded paper and stuck it into my jeans, given him a chaste kiss on his jaw and walked out. July ended without ceremony. I worked odd jobs in between interviews for a graphic design position. The job market was pretty stiff and I was afraid I migh

Chad and Tib have a special place in my heart, I truly loved reading this story. Ultimately, their relationship wasn't ever going to be accepted in their society, too many traditions and beliefs. There was no crusade to change the laws, just two people who believed in their love even though it led them to the hangman's noose. There was also the complication of Mia who ended up being Tib's wife. Hard thing for him to reconcile, but he ended up doing so, because of the kids they got together. I was upset when Chad decided to leave Tib, abandoning him after they escaped, but it was probably the best solution. Tib grew up, became his own man, one who knew what he wanted out of life, and that was a lovely transition to read. I had many highs and lows reading this story, but that was the best thing about Reach. I anticipated every chapter that was posted, even now, I can still go back and read it from start to finish. That's what makes it a classic.

Wow, I thank you again for the reviews and taking me back to this story. Jiro did deserve a sound lashing, but jail time is reasonable too...there are so many plot bunnies for Liang, Ahmon and Han, I should get right on chasing them...lol. You're awesome, Daithi and thank you again.

Sometimes communications get crossed....

Lol, that's true, there's a whole bunch...

yeah....I did that. Poor Cole...

yeah....I did that. Poor Cole...

Hmm...A lot of truths in this chapter... Han seems to take back his position once Choi Yang gets to Tokyo...I might have dropped the ball on the female bodyguard here...lol.. Editing points once again...