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    Chapter 7

    Hi Dark, thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it. I'll check that out with my editor. Thanks for the review.
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    Chapter 7

    I think i'm going to start a Lily fan club Everyone loves her!! I might steal the pretty poison analogy. Thanks for reading, Joann and the review.
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    Chapter 7

    I had fun with the scene at Nobu.I'm so glad you loved it. I can't wait to see what you think of Adrian in the coming chapters. He's such a bad boy.Here's to hoping Alexi takes your advice. Thanks for another review Lisa.
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    Chapter 7

    The credit card is me gearing up to shake the calm up. hehe, I love that you get Alexi so well. Thanks for another review Stephen.
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    Chapter 7

    Everyone does need a Lily Adrian is being a meanie, he might need a kick soon. Thanks for another review Carrie.
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    Chapter 7

    I know right, everyone does need a Lily. I hear you on Adrian, he's being a meanie. Hopefully, sweet Joshua will Zap him into acting right.
  7. Chapter Seven is now up.
  8. After leaving Adrian’s office, Alexi found that he couldn’t return to the studio. The thought of the promise he’d given Adrian weighed on him. He was just beginning to get used to being comfortable in his own skin. Walking aimlessly down Park Avenue, he wondered what kind of embarrassment he’d just set himself up for. His stomach rumbled and he sighed. Glancing at his watch, it was already one o’clock. Lunch sounded good, but he hated eating alone. Calling Lily was going to earn him a lecture o
  9. Min Ho Jun hates everything about Young Jae. It doesn't help that the man practically lives in the same house with him, so he has to put up with him every single minute. When Min Ho's best friends leave the country for a year, he is left with no one to talk to.Life takes an unexpected turn when he finds love in the most unlikely place.
  10. It still holds true that man Is most uniquely human when He turns obstacles into opportunities. " -Eric Hoffer 1 He ran down the street, weaving through the crowds as if the authorities were after him. Jumping over a dustbin, he grinned when the owner yelled at him but he didn’t stop. Crossing the traffic-ridden street, Jun Min Ho marveled at the extremes he had to go through to enjoy a couple of hours with his friends. Adjusting the straps of the bag at his back, he pulled off the rea
  11. Thank you for a more detailed explanation. It works well with the story arc I'm following a few adjustments,here and there, but hopefully it will all come together. Thank you also for letting me know about your thoughts on Adrian and catnip. That's really important, and not mentioning it outright is so difficult I keep deleting entire paragraphs to work it in. I hope you continue reading, i value your insight on this, and thanks for the wonderful detailed review. Look forward to more. Sui
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 16

    This was excellent! I love the ending. Thank you for this story, it was a pleasure, reading through the ups and downs of Tibs and Chad. There were times I didn't think they were going to prevail, others that were really beautiful, and memorable ones like the ending, I loved them all, so great write. Here's to looking forward to your next story.
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    Chapter 6

    Take-out,got it I'll check that out. I love, love your reaction to Josh's ex. She is a complete mess isn't she. And Adrian is getting it from you guys, I think he's in trouble. As for Alexi working at Josh's college, coming up next chapter, wait for it. Thanks for the review Lisa. and for the little advice on Take-out and take-away.
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    Chapter 6

    Debi Mazar is really cool. Loved her on entourage. I'm glad you like the story, thank you so much for the review.
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    Chapter 6

    Joann, you always call it right, Adrian is a user. I like the way you believe in Lily. I can't wait to see what you think of her situation in the next chapter.
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    Chapter 6

    Adrian is a go getter, he likes to push people and take advantage even of his friends. We'll see what his thoughts are soon enough. Thanks for the review ninecila
  17. Chapter Six is up, read it, tell me what you think. Cheers.
  18. Joshua let himself into his quiet dark house at eleven o’clock at night. Heading to the kitchen, he turned on the light and headed straight for the steel fridge. Alexi had insisted on packing him up some leftovers insisting that they, he and Lily, couldn’t finish them. Placing the plastic Ziploc container in the fridge, he grabbed a water bottle and closed the fridge. Leaning on the wooden kitchen table, he drank thirstily from the bottle, his gaze moving critically over the kitchen. Herbs grew
  19. My drink is a malibu coconut rum mixed with apricot juice. Really good stuff, especially during hot summer evenings, out in the backyard with friends having a barbecue. Fun times. Don't like beers and I can't do Vodka, I get sick within hours.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Cassie Can't wait to hear your thoughts.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    Thank you for catching the strawberry thing, Joann. Who knows, Alexi just might share them very soon.
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    Chapter 5

    Sexy feet...hmmm...I think that might just become Joshua's nickname. I really think Adrian is in trouble with you. Wonder what you'll think of him soon. Thanks Sid.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    Thought I should let Lily give those two a chance to talk. Look forward to more.
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    Chapter 4

    I think Adrian should watch out for you, Sid. You seem to have it in for him.
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    Chapter 3

    I love complicated, it's awesome, painful, but awesome
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