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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Joann really loves Lily!! Adrian wanted to destroy the dinner, but I talked to him.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Lily is a spitfire. Joshua is really cool. He does get jealous, working on that very hard.
  3. Thank you Sid for an enthusiastic review and for Renee for featuring my story. It was a very lovely surprise. Thanks. You're awesome!! I will make sure to check out Skylights.
  4. Five I should go down to that office and talk to him, Alexi thought. Tipping the bottle, he filled his glass with white wine set the bottle down. He braced his hands on the table and stared into the clear liquid with a sigh. He should just quit hiding in this empty house and go down to Rosen Models to talk to Adrian. They needed to talk. He knew that. Picking up the glass, his right hand trembling slightly, he sipped the wine. Getting off the stool, he paced around the island table, and
  5. Wow!! Such a small word to use to describe how awesome this story is. It was a refreshing change from your other stories, and I think you have done extraordinarily well with the fantasy/scifi genre. Bastian and Devin made my days, I practically couldn't wait to read more about them each week. As with all your stories, the ending was so heartwarming leaving me asking for more. Don't wait too long for another story, alright, withdrawal symptoms suffered waiting for your stories are very hard to deal. So,here's to looking forward to your next story. Cheers.
  6. I just read through this in one sitting, I just couldn't stop. Brad, Drake and Max were exquisite, I love their bond. It was so real, that the pain of Brad's death became such an important part of the story. Drake is such a noble kind of guy, he loved Max, but he never did anything about it when Brad was alive. That's real friendship and love. It felt natural that Max and Drake should end up together after all the turmoil. An honorable mention to Cody, because he had insane strength. Being in love with someone who is in love with someone else, that's always a cauldron of pain waiting to happen. I'm glad he had the strength to walk away. All in all, this is a very beautiful story, and I'm glad I read it. Cheers, lilansui
  7. Four His fingers moved delicately over the black and white keys on the black baby grand that stood in the living room. Eyes closed, Alexi allowed the notes to flow over him like sparkling liquid, soothing his aching head. He’d tried sleeping, but it was too lovely a day to spend in bed. After his visit to the doctor with Lily, he’d insisted on going for the staff meeting at the studio. The meeting had gone on longer than expected, and was probably the reason why the headache persisted. He’
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 14

    Oh beautiful Angst! I feel Tib's pain and resolve. He's grown up so much, I'm really proud. Of course, Chad is now the one on the other end of the rejection line. Can't wait to see what will happen between them. The scene with Jenna was so cute. She is so adorable.
  9. lilansui

    Bovian Image

    Thanks so much Podga, for reading through to the end, and your kind comments.
  10. lilansui

    Dumped For...

    Jace and Merry get cuter with every chapter. I have to say that Jace's room is pretty exciting, I can just imagine him on the hammock lost in the pages of a favorite book. That was a very awesome scene.
  11. This is awesome, I've read both these stories and I'm glad to see them on your author showcase. I loved Traveling Home, and, as CassieQ knows, I hound her every week for updates on Reach, I love, love her story.. Perfect reviews.
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Thanks
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 23

    Thanks,Ninecila. Glad you loved it.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Getting to the grinding stone right away... lol. Glad you love Lily. She's growing on me here.As for Mr. Right...you'll just have to wait and see...
  15. Three It was a perfect day for a wedding in the park, Joshua thought, as he walked along the neat rows of white chairs. The sun was cooperating, it was bright and clear, and his little sister was going to get the day she had been hoping for her wedding. Carrying a set of chairs to the back of the neat rows, he arranged them carefully making sure they were stable in the grass. “Professor, you have a call.” He looked up to find his teaching assistant coming toward him holding out a cell phone
  16. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    He just might
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Lily is getting golden stars, think I might make a story line for her personally in here. . Thank you for the review.
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    He is handsome, maybe that's why Alexi passed out. Coz he was so handsome. We'll have to see next chapter.
  19. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Inquiring minds might have to wait...hmm...maybe a week, i'll see. Thanks Lisa for the review.
  20. Two Adrian met them at the airport. Alexi drank in the sight of him like a starved animal. Adrian stood out in the small waiting crowd. He was handsome as always in black boots, long legs encased in sexy fit dark denim, and those broad shoulders looked inviting in a fitting black blazer. Adrian’s full smile showed off perfect teeth. Alexi met his deep green eyes and a fraction of the world righted itself. “It looks like he’s taken up art,” Lily noted beside him. Her comment brought atten
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    That's a really nice compliment. I hope you keep reading on.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 23

    The bald headed man is all seeing, hehe. Thanks for reading through Conner. I'm glad you loved the ending.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 23

    I thought you might catch that arrival's thing. Thanks Stephen, for reading to the end. You're awesome too.
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 22

    Thanks Conner, you made my day. It all ends in Chapter 23, thank you again for reading, hope you like the ending.
  25. lilansui

    Chapter 23

    Chapter 23 The traffic was a nightmare. Cole found himself wishing for Ahmon’s mad driving skills when the forty-minute mark he’d given Savan passed and he still had about halfway to go. One speeding ticket and an angry series of honks for cutting people off in traffic, he finally made it to the bloody airport. It was already seven o’clock in the evening. It seemed as though the entire nation was traveling at night. How frustrating. Parking in the short-term lot, Cole rushed into the arri
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