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Chapter 22 Cole couldn’t take the separation anymore. Two weeks of not seeing Savan was driving him insane and he’d had enough. The over-friendly receptionist at Bovian Image grinned like a Cheshire cat when he saw him. Rushing around his desk, Richie took his hand. “What are you doing here? I thought you might have gone with Boss man. My goodness, you smell so good.” “Wore it just for you,” Cole smiled at Richie’s enthusiasm and looked around the packed reception area. “Is Liang around
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I'm glad you. Thanks for the praise, I'm working hard on it.
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Thanks Stephen for your excitement, it makes my day.
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I love Tifa. She's super cool.
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Chapter 21 Cole sat in his living room drinking. It had been a longtime since he’d sat on a couch drinking. Ever since Danny’s death, he thought sullenly. He wasn’t sure why every time he considered making a commitment to another person, it all ended up a mess. A complete mess, he thought in disgust. It didn’t matter that Savan had lied to him about his name, his family and everything that mattered. All he knew was that he loved the man. The man he’d had in his bed for countless hours, t
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I like the jump, gives Tibial a time to grow up, know what he wants with life, and also get that strength to be a good daddy and make hard choices. I'm excited to see what happens from here, and the chemistry between Tib and Chad is so awesome, even after five years, they can't resist it.
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Thanks Lisa, you're the best, I'll check that out now. Yes, chapter two is coming working on it.
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Hi, Stephen, Lily is awesome isn't she. I'll think about that fight scene... I'm glad you love her. She's really fun to write for. Thanks for reading. Look forward to more.
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Hi, Sid, Put it up for you coz I know you love Cole from B.I. Figured I better see what you think of Joshua. He'll show up soon, I promise. Thanks for reading.
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Hi Lisa. I'm glad you love it. Can't wait to see what you think of Adrian. On the little confusion, I worked with it. When you have time, please read through and tell me if it's better. Their locations and all that. Please Thanks.
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One “Sign here.” His agent, Peter Wilson, indicated with a finger. “Breathe, Alexi, it’s just six months.” Alexi wondered if the devil told his subordinates the same words in hell. Don’t worry it’s only forever. He signed his name on the appropriate lines and sat back in his chair to look at Peter. “Are you sure this is the right thing? I can’t tell anymore.” Peter gathered the documents on the desk, checking the signatures before he returned them to his briefcase. He leaned on the des
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Alexi, a music composer and pianist, heads to New York to work on a new project, while he sorts out his issues with public appearances and stage fright. The only true relationship he's ever had is with his best friend Adrian who is constantly walking out on him when things get too intense. When he meets Joshua Randolph, he finds himself wanting to find out if there is more to life than music and bad relationships.
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Happy Birthday Cia!!! You're Awesome!!
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Chapter 20 After endless hours of being in the dark, the hood came off and his captors dragged him out of the van. His legs were stiff; the two mercenaries getting him out had to support him. Once he could stand on his own, they pushed him forward and he blinked looking around. It was morning again, Savan didn’t know what day it was but the sky was lighting up. He was standing in a parking lot of a high-rise building. Looking around, he frowned when he saw the sign on the door. It read As
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This was beautifully written, I have to say the fact that the word Driver, or Car is not in there is extremely awesome. You are skilled, Yettie. I loved the story, mixing his love for the race and his love for the racer, I had a good time reading this.
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Chad is beyond a beating. He's a coward for running without talking to Tib. I mean,Tib actually made the choice, and here it was for nothing, I can't believe this. I don't care what Mia says, no one can heal wounds from true love. I doubt Tib will be able to give her any kind of love. Can't wait for the next part.
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Chapter 19 Ahmon drove to the Metropolitan police building fast. Ahmon looked unhinged, his concerns spilling into his driving. Cole couldn’t help wincing each time his car braked hard only to set off into a faster speed. On his lap were the documents they had pulled out from the locked box in Savan’s office. He was getting over the fact that his boyfriend was hiding weapons in the floor. Weapons that were now in Ahmon’s car back at the Bovian Image parking lot. “What did you mean when yo
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I want to hate Mia, but I can't. She's justified. I want to beat Chad. Tib is in a bad way here, these two are just going to make things worse for him. Wonder what will happen next.
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Chapter 18 His ribs were killing him. Sitting on the cold stone floor, bare feet braced against the wall, Savan wrapped his arms around the metal chain lodged into the wall and pulled with all his strength. Fighting through the pain coursing through his chest, he closed his eyes, his teeth gritted and pulled harder. Jerking the chain, trying to force it out of the wall. The exercise was futile yet, he kept trying. He lay back on the floor, his muscles aching. Staring at ceiling of his ten
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This was so much fun to read, I like how Mathew got mad after he was punched. Mistletoe became the evil thing on the door that he has to avoid, that was so cute. I'm glad that Brax finally gave him that kiss. He'd been wanting it for so long. I love your story.
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Chapter 17 Ahmon woke up to chaos at the Hitoiro club. Security had found an unconscious man in the dumpster. Scratching his unshaven jaw, he walked into the security room in a bad mood having not had any coffee. “What do we have on the security footage that you need to wake me? It better be good, this is six o’clock in the morning people.” Ahmon frowned when the screen filled with Liang hitting an unknown man on the head with a metal rod and then dragging the man to the dumpster behind th
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very exciting, I was hoping for a jail break, i'm so happy! I can't wait for the next chapter, wonder how Mia is going to deal with this now. Two daddies and a mummy, on the run, fun.
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Deliciously pleased that you loved it, thanks for another review, and wait for more.
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Oh Podga, you know you love me I'll go back and take it slowly, fix those typos and issues. Promise.
