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Thanks ninecila, I promise this one will end faster than BI. I'm glad you like it.

Kyo Tatsuya is a painter who has refused to see his lover for two months, while he prepares his final exhibition as a student of Geidai. He tries to understand the meaning of love while he does this, trying to define the word itself in relation to his own relationships, especially the one he values the most, his love for Ryuu Shin.

Rock music filled the loft style studio, intense, jagged, and thrilling, Kyo Tatsuya used it to fuel his creative juices. Working a color filled brush over the stretched canvas before him; he continued working on the last piece of his collection. The final scene in an illustration of twenty paintings which he’d been working on for a whole two months, locked up in the loft without seeing anyone but his assistant. This collection would mark the start of his new life, something he was trying to lo

I thought you might catch that three years thing, it felt right to put it there, being on the run, things change and of course you get that point of no return feel in life. Yes, it is significant. And will feature later. Your views raise a lot of ideas for me, the change between chapters 6 , 7 and 8 needs a lot of work, and you're asking the right questions. Thank you again for the review.

Thanks for catching that inconsistency, I will work on it and see what I can do. Your reviews are very insightful and helpful, am glad you like the story. I hope you read more , looking forward to your thoughts.

I know, Momma is a tough one, and I couldn't resist the spider web. You started it. Thanks for another review, look forward to more.

Chapter 15 Han Lao arrived at Narita airport and made his way through customs quickly. He hailed a cab and gave the driver the address Choi Yang Nan’s assistant had given him. Adjusting his dark glasses, he glanced at the bag he carried with him, and for the umpteenth time wondered if he was on the right track. He’d had so many near misses it was difficult to be hopeful. Unable to resist, he reached for the bag, placing it carefully on his lap. He removed the picture he’d gotten in New Cal

Hmm...I can't believe it! Tanis is meeting Dylan! I'm excited about this, and of course, he might be the one who wrote that note. So much to look forward to next chapter. I'm glad the Eden situation is sorted, she might be upset but she was just going to get hurt. Hope Dad actually goes to rehab, looks like mom is breaking apart here. Poor Dylan, home life is getting stressful.

So, it has finally happened, sadly, I was hoping there would be some kind of fluke and Tibial and Chad might get to escape this insane situation, but I can only hope. Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one now. What will happen to Chad, and Tibial is looking so lost without him, are they going to see each other again? Questions, questions...put up next chapter soon.

Finally read the end. Jordan and David are breathtaking. You did justice to their story, it's so real, so fresh, it was so in touch with reality, after all, when we have relationships in real life, all the incredulous scenes and conflicts we read in stories are rarely ever there. It made me hopeful to read your story, and left me with a sense of joy. I guess whatever issues we might carry around, in the end it's about being brave enough to give those issues up and just love. I love your story!

Thanks so much I'm excited to see what you'll think of it.

Chapter 14 After waking up alone in a bed he was sure he’d occupied with Savan, it had felt necessary to drive down to Bovian Image to make sure he hadn’t been hallucinating last night. Savan had felt real, and so perfect. Parking his car, Cole stared at the time on the dashboard and sighed. It was six-thirty in the morning. The salon wasn’t open yet. He got out of the car and stalked to the front door. The glass doors were locked. Great, he sighed. Cole knocked on the glass, searching

There is something so real about this situation. You know when you meet that person you like the second time after being apart, that feeling of being unsure and wondering if the feeling is still there the next time you meet, It was nice reading it with Jordan. That question he asks at the end, whether David will want to think of them in terms of years and a lifetime...very real fear. This story is resonating with me, I like the issues in it, and how you write them. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter.

Oh, what fun couple of chapters. Mom's reaction to gay Dylan was spot on, I knew she would come through, dad however is a douche and I say that with a good heart, really, it's sad really, but this happens in real life and there is not a thing we can do to change such people. My issues are showing up, hehehe, anyway, moving on. I love the way you had Dylan confess to Danika. It was such an inevitable kind of thing, sink or swim, whatever happens. Danika is so me, I love her! You know letters from secret admirers are so such a bitter sweet thing. Mostly because, the sentiment is absolutely wonderful, the racing heart, excitement that someone likes you, the happiness, but then the not knowing, totally kills. I'm half afraid for Dylan, because he is now presented with a whole new dilemma of an infatuated Eden (this can never be of course) Danika is right, Eden gets screwed either way and his love for Tanis, the hotness monster who has our Dylan in torment. Yummy issues, love it all, waiting for next chapter as always.

Wow, I came back for more and loved it. I'm so happy that David is that David, it made it all so special. Jordan is so lovable, I loved it when he was calling David, with a sticky note stuck on the fridge. I know what that's like and I kept going,'I know what that's like!' strange, but it was so real for me I couldn't help but love him more. There is something absolutely beautiful about their relationship. I kept wanting to smack Jordan at the end when he wouldn't go spend those last moments with David. But then David came back and it was all sweet love and murmurs. Needless to say, I love your story, and really waiting for the next part. Athens it is.

Too true, I've seen some tough days in the past couple of years, things happening so fast, i kept whipping back my head and going like 'did that just happen to me' and when it really hits me, I'd be down for almost months before I can get on my feet again and hit back. It's tough, it's never easy to face life and what it gives you, but never giving up is the best. Surprisingly, I have had a fresh salad lately..ah huh, visiting the farmer's market is an awesome thing, you find all these delish veggies. I think you need to go grocery shopping Yettie, in a supa with some greens.

Jiro and SarEr, hmmm...it's a thought. Hard choices ahead, thanks for reading up, Yettie, you always make my day.

The situation at home is such stress, I can imagine what it must be like to have a dad like that. Dylan's mum is forced to work twice as much to keep them afloat, I admire the way she remains loving to her son. Obviously there is more to the family situation than you've put down, it can't be easy for mom to have such a husband. On the part of Dylan's confession, i'm guessing his mom will be pretty understanding about this. Very lovely chapter.

Haha, love the double vortex comment. That's awesome. I'm glad you love it, I hope to keep you on your toes. Cheers.

I love Zun, we should all have a Zun in our lives.

Thanks Stephen, you're awesome, I appreciate the review. Keep reading more to come.

There is so much promise in this I really hope to read more. I loved the way you laid out Jordan's life story, the lonely forty-six year old man who still wonders what happened to the bully he fought with when he was in six grade. Wow. That's a lonely man. Very good description, i felt like I was standing right outside that hotel watching him stay away from the rain. Please put up more

Chapter 13 They had dinner at an exclusive restaurant in Daiba. Seated across Cole, sipping Merlot, Savan suddenly realized why he was afraid of Cole. Cole was everything he didn’t have in his life. Savan watched him complimenting the house chef on a fabulous meal. Cole was a self-assured gentleman, comfortable with who he was, his work, his family. Savan envied him that. Cole glanced at him with an intimate smile meant to share secrets. Savan returned it as the chef offered to bring out

moans and groans, and when it's really good, gibberish and needy demands, Though the instructions should be strictly thrown out the door. Really. I guess am a B.

Chapter 12 His first instinct was to fight Cole off as the man held him pinned against the wall. The kiss was hard, unrelenting, and before it could go further, Savan pushed against Cole’s chest. Cole wouldn’t have it. He shackled Savan’s wrists and pinned them above Savan’s head so that he was now Cole’s unwilling prisoner. Savan could barely breathe. He felt like he was drowning. Everything inside him focused on Cole’s tongue sliding against his, playing with every nerve ending in his b