lilansui
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What a cliff hanger! I'm going to be hounding your profile until you put up the next chapter so do it soon, really, for the sake of my sanity. I'm enjoying this story, I like the pace of it, you know how to grab attention and really sustain it to madness, I want more soon. Cheers.
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Chapter 11 “The show was a success,” Antonio said with a wide smile, two mornings after the fashion show. Cole flipped through a bunch of drawings sent to him by the junior designers. “We have received ninety percent response from the various companies we invited last night. I’m still waiting for two more companies.” “Why do you think they are delaying?” Cole asked, looking at his older brother. “We can’t allow them to back out after the stress it took to get where we were last night.” An
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I think it's about exploring the individual, sometimes we can't fit in a perfect little box, and to fit in one little box, we are ignoring the other little box that also defines us, strange description but I hope its making sense. Anyway, it's pretty hard to find the right fit out there in terms of love and that person who best fits us, being bisexual could be part of that search for the right fit. Atleast that is how I view it, not really the cool thing or not, could be a discovering yourself thing?...
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Writing Tip Writing Tip: Getting In The Mood - Part Deuce
lilansui commented on Trebs's blog entry in Writing World
Looks like music wins out here, it plays such a huge role with everyone. Once again i find someone I identify with, SidLove. That whole spending the day procrastinating online while the blank page mocks me thing is a killer. Great post. -
This was such a bittersweet reunion, I like how you wrote it. I wanted to jump up and down in happiness I'm glad they are together, but obviously, they might be facing actual death when people find out, I'm worried a little. I hope they have just a little more happiness. Can't wait for the next chapter, cheers.
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OMG, thank you, Cia, i feel like a crazed fan girl right now, so i'll keep it to a minimum. Thank you for your review, i'm glad you liked it
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I feel for Dylan in this story, the crush that has lasted since middle school, and Tanis still hasn't a clue, I would be going nuts by now. To make matters worse, Tanis refuses to answer texts, (that's my biggest pet peeve by the way, i can turn into a child when someone ignores my texts) I think Dylan needs to walk over to Tanis and demand an answer. But that's just me, meanwhile, I await your next chapter eagerly, I had a good time reading this. Awesome!
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Hiro wakes up after a memorable night with his lover to find money on the bedside table. The insult is more than he can bear.
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Pushing the sheets away, Hiro Kazamu sat up and stared at the money on the bedside table and felt nausea rise up. Running for the bathroom, he barely made it to the toilet before retching everything he’d managed to eat in the past eight hours. He heaved until there was nothing left. Pressing a hand to his stomach, he reached up to flush the toilet. Closing the lid, he leaned on it for a moment. How could that man treat him this way? Refusing to think about it, he got up slowly and turned on the
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What a good start to a story! Zach is so full of energy, I like how he isn't sorry for what he feels for Jeremy. My favorite was the crayons story, that was cute as ever. I can't wait to find out what the mystery is, till next time.
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Hi Rob, First 'fangal squeal' I'm so excited to see you post, and I hope you stay here at GA, It really is an inspiring place to post stories, I find it challenging. I read other stories from really amazing writers, and it just makes me want to write better. What more can you look for in a writing site. I can't wait to read more of your work!!
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Every time I watch the 'notebook' i need a box of tissues, coz it just gets me. Used to be when I was down, I'd turn off all the lights in the house, close the curtains and just watch some really long epic movies until I can't think anymore. Now, I watch 'the lakehouse'. I don't know why, it just makes me feel better. I can put it on repeat and watch until i fall asleep. The 'GreenMile' scares me a bit, literally. I'm with Anya on that one.
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Chapter 10 Cole read the sign on the front of the red brick building, comparing it to the black card Yui had given him. A black sign that resembled the card hang haphazardly with the words, ‘Club Hitoiro’ printed in red. Cole slipped the card back into his pocket and glanced across the street to the three-story building with a Bovian Image sign on the ground floor. How convenient, he thought. He turned toward the club entrance, but his gaze paused on the black Ducati parked in the club lo
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Chapter 9 Cole stood at the white board in one corner of the backstage hall staring at the lineup of the fifteen designs that were going to be on the runway in an hour and a half. Fifteen designs, and the design he’d thought would make the finale design was without a model. He moved the runner up to the last spot and took a step back. “Her hair shouldn’t be a problem if the head hairstylist fixes it,” his mother said coming to stand beside him. “That dress can’t be cut out of the show.” “I
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Five Years later Japan Chapter Eight Off peak hours at Streamers were always the best time to visit the coffee shop for a quiet conversation with a friend. Sipping his ristretto, Savan Bovian closed his eyes in silent appreciation of a cup of quality coffee, before he set the branded glass mug back on the wooden table. He lifted his head to smile at the twenty-two year old singer seated across him, sipping her own coffee. She was dressed casually, and had a pink Niad cap pulled low over he
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Tibal's struggles continue, like Daddydavek said, this last chapter had a really sad ending. There is so much going on for Tibal, the baby, Mia, and a love he can't have, I can't help pitying him a bit. Looking forward to more.
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I just finished reading this, I loved it from beginning to end, I can't wait for you to write for Fieo I'm already imagining it, really, waiting already. Hahaha. You've done it again, great story, I had a really good time reading it.
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Writing Tip Writing Tip: Getting In The Mood - Part 1
lilansui commented on Trebs's blog entry in Writing World
I love the plot bunnies. Makes me a bit envious to always have them hopping around like that. I identify most with carringtonrj, since I love music so much. Can't wait to read more.
