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One “Sign here.” His agent, Peter Wilson, indicated with a finger. “Breathe, Alexi, it’s just six months.” Alexi wondered if the devil told his subordinates the same words in hell. Don’t worry it’s only forever. He signed his name on the appropriate lines and sat back in his chair to look at Peter. “Are you sure this is the right thing? I can’t tell anymore.” Peter gathered the documents on the desk, checking the signatures before he returned them to his briefcase. He leaned on the des
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Happy Birthday Cia!!! You're Awesome!!
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Chapter 20 After endless hours of being in the dark, the hood came off and his captors dragged him out of the van. His legs were stiff; the two mercenaries getting him out had to support him. Once he could stand on his own, they pushed him forward and he blinked looking around. It was morning again, Savan didn’t know what day it was but the sky was lighting up. He was standing in a parking lot of a high-rise building. Looking around, he frowned when he saw the sign on the door. It read As
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This was beautifully written, I have to say the fact that the word Driver, or Car is not in there is extremely awesome. You are skilled, Yettie. I loved the story, mixing his love for the race and his love for the racer, I had a good time reading this.
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Oh My God, Cassie, you can't do that! No threats to stop. I might get stuck on your profile waiting for an update. Seriously, I'll make you a cyber cupcake so that you continue. Seriously....Part 3 should be mandatory here. I'll hold the pen for you, and the light, so you can see in the dark...I'm dedicated...
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Chad is beyond a beating. He's a coward for running without talking to Tib. I mean,Tib actually made the choice, and here it was for nothing, I can't believe this. I don't care what Mia says, no one can heal wounds from true love. I doubt Tib will be able to give her any kind of love. Can't wait for the next part.
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I second, Traveling Home, that's really good. I enjoyed reading that. You can also check out Cia's stories, like Pricolicci, Hypnotic (this is part of a series) , and The experiment. They are complete and the stories are very interesting and engaging. I just finished reading, Hello, My name is..., by Naptowngirl, I loved it. read it in one evening, it's about twenty chapters and complete.
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Chapter 19 Ahmon drove to the Metropolitan police building fast. Ahmon looked unhinged, his concerns spilling into his driving. Cole couldn’t help wincing each time his car braked hard only to set off into a faster speed. On his lap were the documents they had pulled out from the locked box in Savan’s office. He was getting over the fact that his boyfriend was hiding weapons in the floor. Weapons that were now in Ahmon’s car back at the Bovian Image parking lot. “What did you mean when yo
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I want to hate Mia, but I can't. She's justified. I want to beat Chad. Tib is in a bad way here, these two are just going to make things worse for him. Wonder what will happen next.
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Not a spanking, maybe a flogging how could he!!<insert angry face here> So, Chad is being a bit of a douche, I suppose stress is riding him hard, and Mia's demands don't make that easy. How sad for all, I just hate that Tib had to be pushed to the corner, like the unwanted one. How unfair. More soon, i'm like the demanding child, more,more,
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Chapter 18 His ribs were killing him. Sitting on the cold stone floor, bare feet braced against the wall, Savan wrapped his arms around the metal chain lodged into the wall and pulled with all his strength. Fighting through the pain coursing through his chest, he closed his eyes, his teeth gritted and pulled harder. Jerking the chain, trying to force it out of the wall. The exercise was futile yet, he kept trying. He lay back on the floor, his muscles aching. Staring at ceiling of his ten
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This was so much fun to read, I like how Mathew got mad after he was punched. Mistletoe became the evil thing on the door that he has to avoid, that was so cute. I'm glad that Brax finally gave him that kiss. He'd been wanting it for so long. I love your story.
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So, I love where this is going, atleast now I feel there is hope for the two, even with Mia along it's much better than feeling useless behind a jail cell, expecting death. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you're awesome CassieQ
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Chapter 17 Ahmon woke up to chaos at the Hitoiro club. Security had found an unconscious man in the dumpster. Scratching his unshaven jaw, he walked into the security room in a bad mood having not had any coffee. “What do we have on the security footage that you need to wake me? It better be good, this is six o’clock in the morning people.” Ahmon frowned when the screen filled with Liang hitting an unknown man on the head with a metal rod and then dragging the man to the dumpster behind th
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very exciting, I was hoping for a jail break, i'm so happy! I can't wait for the next chapter, wonder how Mia is going to deal with this now. Two daddies and a mummy, on the run, fun.
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Deliciously pleased that you loved it, thanks for another review, and wait for more.
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Oh Podga, you know you love me I'll go back and take it slowly, fix those typos and issues. Promise.
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Sid, I live for reactions like yours really I won't torture you and will put up the next part really soon, thanks for the review!!!
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Cia, I do a dance every time i read a review from you. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
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“So, you’re telling me some guy picked you up from the gallery, took you to the Peak Lounge, introduced you to your mother and then took you to some hotel where you had dinner. Kyo, this is why I worry about you,” Kaori said the next morning sitting across him in their favorite coffee shop. “What, I was hungry, he offered meat, what do you expect,” Kyo said with a shrug. Sipping his hot coffee, he sighed. “Don’t worry, nothing happened, I left and headed straight home to my cold empty bed.” “Y
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He couldn’t let it go, Savan thought a few weeks later. This raging desire that burned between him and Cole, it was intoxicating and he couldn’t let it go. Each week that passed, he promised himself it would be the last. He needed to break it off, he needed to walk away before they got too intense. Three weeks later, and he was still sinking deeper. After Takayumi’s show ended, Savan figured his trysts with Cole would dwindle to an end, after all, they weren’t working together anymore. How
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Ok, KC Grim and I are in the same boat, if I ask any more questions it would be a repeat again. Although I will comment on Tibial's courage.He fought for what he believes in and that is right, I like his reaction to Chad's moment of madness. Even though I'm not sure it will save Chad. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter as always, Anticipating...now, now, Another awesome chapter. Cheers.
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You're so poetic, the ending was amazing. Like Marzipan, couldn't help but notice the addition of the goddess to the awesome encounter. Great story.
