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I still remember that day (night) when I posted my very first unedited chapter of my very first story as I had no editor or beta reader. I couldn't sleep well as I was so worried about what would readers think about it? Would anyone bother to review? Hell if anyone is gonna read my stuff. In the morning when I logged in I had three positive reviews and my very first reviewer was none other than Lisa. She not only praised me but boosted my morale and offered me to be my editor. I was on cloud nine. And since then I'm working with her. I have learned so much from her that I can't even express them in words. The most important thing that I have learned from her is K.I.S.S...Keep it simple stupid. Whatever readable stuff I'm able to write today is because of Lisa. You rock, Girl, you really do. Not only on professional front on personal level too I am very close to her. Whenever anything happens good or bad I go to her smiling or crying. She's a great friend. I don't think I could thank her enough whatever she did for me. She's such a sweetheart definitely not-a-pain-in-ass, LOL. You are just amazing Girl, Keep Shining, keep reading and obviously keep reviewing. This was an amazing interview. I would like to THANK Percy for interviewing Lisa. Percy, you really did an awesome job. Lisa, love you Girl, take care and keep smiling.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!

You just made me cry like a baby. *deep sigh* you know the way you presented this specific chapter made me envy your amazing writing style. You were just amazing in this chapter. I loved the story progressed day by day. I liked Allegra's hardcore honest words. I enjoyed Alexi's visit to Josh's family. I respect Alexi's decision to return every memory of Adrian back to him. The love making scene on the last night was just beyond my expectations. Finally you tore my boys apart and honestly a part of me is hating you right now for doing so. Oh Gosh! I am still crying pathetically. You better bring them together girl. They surely deserve to be together. They are so in love. It's awful to not to see them together. It's heart wrenching. The way you described both boys'feelings, that was just incredible. You proved once again, Sui and that's why you are one of my favorite authors. Believe me Sui, after reading this chapter I have no doubt that you are one of the finest writer here. It doesn't mean I don't hate you now for doing this to my guys. okay I don't have enough words to praise you. You just outdid yourself in this chapter. This was by far the bestest chapter among all of your stories. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Please update soon and reunite my boys. Will wait for the next chapter crossing my fingers.

Another simple, sweet and romantic story from you like a refreshing breeze which warmed my heart. Amazing characters, great dialogues and a beautiful story. You did full justice with the story in limited words. Another gem in your crown girl. Great work. Keep going:)

I didn't expect to see the drunk side of Silver and ready-for-committment side of Knox. Loved it. Finally they would be together. I am so excited. Great work, Sui. Moving on to the next chapter:)

I loved the beginning with the theme of opposites attract. Silver is cute and adorable. Knox(I have no idea how you everytime come up with such amazing names, lol) is a typical playboy. I am moving to the next chapter to see some great romance. Very nice chapter, Sui. Loved it:)

So slowly and steadily a friendship is brewing up between Haje and Vincent. I really like that. My only complain is that chapter was too short. You should try to make them a bit longer. And of course my review can't be complete without showing my lack of trust towards the cooper guy, lol. I still doubt his intentions. Loved this light-hearted chapter. Waiting for more:)

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Have Loads of fun

Happy Birthday, Ieshwar. I hope you are having fun. Take care

Chapter 14: Swan Zune Kev was right in front of my eyes, sitting on the porch of his house. His shoulders were slumped down. His elbows were resting on his knees. He was tapping his right foot on the ground rapidly in agitation while his eyes were glued to the road ahead. There was a twinkling hope in his extreme blue orbs. Probably he was waiting for someone, for me. I was right before him but he was not looking at me. I screamed his name again and again but he didn’t spare me a glance. He

Thanks a lot for the review, Rajat and it's okay about that PM. Take Care.

Well, Daryl will redeem but not in the near future. Zune has to go through a lot of things to get back to his old life.Thanks a lot for your review, GJ. Take care:)

I hope Haje would be in peace for a while in Florida. I liked the way you ended the chapter, Vincent kissing Haje's forehead...romance is in the air. Great Chapter. Will wait for the next chapter.

In my last review I said what the hell the two of them will talk about but now I really want them to talk about there relationship, their future. It won't be easy but well neither is love. They both have something to lose and something to gain, let's see what's in the store for the guys. I don't know what would happen now but as strong as their relationship is, I have full faith they will definitely make a way out of it. When Alexi talked about breakup, I was scared but Joshua handled the situation in the best way possible. The best part of the chapter was that kitchen scene. That whole scene has been created amazingly. I really loved it. I also liked Alexi's family. With each passing chapter we are getting to know the depth of their relationship, how much they need each other. I hope they remain with each other forever. Can't wait for the next chapter, Sui. Please update soon. Take Care.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JO ANN!!!! Have loads of fun and keep smiling. Take care.

First of all, thanks a lot for your honest review. You are right about the thesaurus thing. My first four chapters would seem like that as it was my very first story, but then my proof-reader Lisa make me understand a simple mantra, K.I.S.S. i.e. keep it simple stupid, and I started to improve. I won't say my writing has been immensely great since then but I hope it had been slightly improved from fifth chapter, all thanks to Lisa. Sorry to disappoint you but thanks once again for reading these first two chapters and letting me know your views on it. Take Care.

Thank you Lisa for the review. I'm glad you liked this chapter. I know there are a lot of questions remained unanswered in the end of this chapter but I'll try to answer them in the next chapter. And Daryl have to pay for what he did to Zune. Thanks a lot for your encouragement and support. Take Care:)

Happy Birthday!!

Happy Belated Birthday, Cia! I hope you had loads of fun.

Chapter 13: Way to Heaven Zune In the next few weeks many things changed. I never said a word to either Edward or Kevin, neither had they tried to talk to me but I was not complaining. Honestly, I was happy with my situation; at least I was away from any drama and stress right now. Our friends were still trying to get Kev and I together but their efforts went futile. I didn’t think we could ever be together again. It was not like I didn’t love him. It was like whatever we would do, I was

I'm glad Haje finally started to trust Vincent. I really like them together.And I still don't trust the cooper guy (as i have already mentioned it million times). That guy is bad news. So now Haje would find this Zavier who could be the master mind behind all this and Vincent could be unintentionally working for him. It's getting better and better. I can't wait to know what happens next when Haje begins his search at those four places. I'm sure it would be damn exciting. Well, I'm missing some romance here, hope to get a dose of it soon. Loved this chapter and waiting for mooooooreeeee:)

Your amazing reviews always warm my heart girl. Love you so much. Yeah I liked Jake too but Carol, I love her. She is just out of this world as you said kickass! Three of the guys made mistakes and now it's time to learn from them. Thanks a lot for review and your support. Take Care.

Thanks Miles, thanks a lot for your review. It always feels good to have new reviewers.Well no one is perfect and neither is Kev. He is no saint. Next chapter will be up soon. Thanks once again.

Thanks a lot Rajat for your review. Yeah I loved Carol in that scene too. She's just amazing just like Jake who stood for Zune. Well next chapter will be up soon! Take Care.