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Chapter 1 Michael and Me
sacredlove commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 1 Michael and Me
I'm glad Mike and you found each other. Your love story gives hope that there's definitely someone special for everyone. I couldn't stop the tears of joy while I read the vows. I hope and prey you guys always stay happy and together. -
Happy Birthday!!
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Happy Birthday!!
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Happy Birthday!!
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Happy Birthday!!
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First of all, I loved the names Josephine and Keijo, and sadly both of them are dead. Kazuma blames himself for Jospehine's death and Hyde thinks the same about Keijo. I hope both of them better stop blaming themselves and try to spot the one who wants Hyde. Their third friend, Jin is till out of few chapters and that raises my suspicions about him. Probably his reappearance make things more clear. And I hope Haru don't do something stupid out of his jealousy. So far this story is as entertaining, thrilling and romantic as I expected so post next chapter soon, Sui. You are doing an amazing job with this story:)
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There's definitely something more which is not yet revealed between Riku and his ex-wife. I think even Hideki is unaware of some facts about his parents. I'm glad Kazu and Hyde were back home, safe and sound. The romantic end of this chapter was endearing. And does Jin knows about strange relationship between Hideki and Haru as he's that close to both of them then he must have his suspicions. As usual, you did a great job with this chapter, Sui; the intrigue, the romance, the tension were all in perfect proportions in here:)
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I hate that cliffhanger at the end but then I have two more chapters left so I'm glad it didn't get me. The fun moments between Kazuma and Hideki at the beach were cute. They do have a burning chemistry between them and I liked that intensity. Hideki's mother looked someone I can't trust at the moment. And where is her husband? Right now, I'm hopping onto the next chapter immediately!!
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If there is a mole in Hideki closed ones then it maybe his mother or Haru or Jin so Kazuma is right with clearing his base with everyone around Hideki but as far as I think Haru would never do anything to hurt Hideki but you never know. Things are getting interesting. I really liked this chapter. Thanks Sui:)
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What can be the better way to end a chapter other than a beautiful kiss scene. The think I liked the most about the chapter was how Hideki and Kazuma took a peek in each other's life. There was sure some spark and a hell of a chemistry between them throughout this chapter. let's find out what happens next!!
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I'm already liking Kazuma. Jin seemed suspicious while Haru looked cursed with unrequited feelings towards Hideki and Hideki, to me he seemed lost. Well I liked the way Kazuma and Hideki met for the first time, kind of romantic. Can't wait for another romantic journey. Moving onto next chapter:)
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There's so much going around here: Raphael and Talin are to see Vlad with God knows what plan in the hopes to get that antidote, Lucian and Dimitri along with Sean and Thomas are about to get to that warehouse with Sasha in the hopes to end Vlad and somehow save the girls while Llia and Himura are about to reach warehouse to help them. I don't know how are you planning to tie all the loose ends; I'm so looking forward to read the next and last chapter of this masterpiece. The romantic beginning and the little talks between Talin and Dimitri was touching. I'll say this once again, I hope you have a happy ending for Dimitri and Talin because they really deserve it. Update soon and don't make us wait long. Awesome work, Sui:)
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When this story started I thought Dimitri is the one who's aggressive or I should say the guy who plans and plots but now Talin is controlling this whole situation as Katrina said, Talin is running the show. Talin's character is complex yet simple at the same time. He's definitely different what I assumed about him in the beginning. As you mentioned there are only two chapters left, you better have a happy ending for Talin and Dimitri. Nice work, Sui. Moving onto the next chapter:)
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"What the fuck did you see in him?" This last line cracked me up. Talin do have a strange sense of humor. I just hope Talin and Dimitri along with Raphael, Lucian and Llia (all the guys I thought were villains in the beginning) destroy Vlad but not before I could see more of her, lol. I guess her grey character is growing on me. Another very good chapter. Moving onto the next one:)
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The sense of rage and emotions Talin is going through is totally rash but understandable. He had lost someone he loved, Gabriel who did nothing wrong to no one died, Talin's pain is not for nothing. His outbreak at the end of the chapter was heartbreaking. I just hope he just try to look over his rage and make an effort to know what's at the stake which won't be easy or maybe Dimitri will make it easy for him. You did an amazing job with this chapter, it was exceptionally good. Moving onto the next Chapter:)
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This Raphael is so confusing; one moment he makes me think that he's with Vlad and then very next moment do something to convince me that he cares about Talin. What the hell is he hiding? I hope we'll find out soon. And what can I say about Vlad; she's an amazing villain. I just like her in an odd way. Another amazing chapter, Sui. Moving onto the next one:)
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Okay, what the hell just happened???? I was sure the dinner was going to be intense but I had no clue that Raphael was with the bad guys. I was surprised to know that Vlad was Petrov and then this Raphael's entry at the end of the chapter was too good. Now I can't wait to know what happens next so moving onto the next chapter. Awesome chapter girl:)
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There was Vlad, then Lucian, then llia and now this Petrov guy; it's like a web and I hope the guys come out of it unscathed. I think not only Vlad but Talin is also planning something big. I loved Vlad's personality in previous chapters and happy that she will make an appearance in the next one; her meeting with Talin will be interesting. One more thing that is irking my mind is the guy got killed was really Gabriel or was he Raphael? I mean the guy we think is Raphael could be Gabriel as they are twins; you never know or probably I'm thinking too much. Anyways, amazing chapter Sui, moving onto the next one:)
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So Llia Pajari is the connection between Dimitri and Talin. His brother Lucian, he seems shady to me like a cunning fox. I have a feeling he do have a big part on what had happened to Gabriel and Dimitri's father. And then there's Vlad too. Suspense is getting dense and it's clear now that both of them are in this together. I'm curious to know how these guys are going to cope up with the situation. Very intriguing chapter, Sui. Hopping onto the next one:)
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Happy Birthday:)
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Happy Birthday:)
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Boys are in more serious trouble than I thought. I'm more worried about Sam and I must say David is very impulsive...I hope things work out for them in court.
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Okay, first of all congratulations on posting your very first chapter if very first story on GA. I'm glad you begin writing and decided to post your work here. Andrew is really likeable and easy to relate character for me becoz I was and honestly, I still am that shy guy who dreads attention. I'm curious to know Andrew better in is school years. I hope you'll post next chapter soon as I'll wait for it. Very nice job with the chapter, Drew. Keep writing!!
