Carrie76

Wow. I love this story so much. I don't think Ace can stay mad for long. I know TJ is a lot to take but he can be fixed with these guys. I love the way the boys fit together so nicely. Andrew I think you have a nice flair for drama in this story without it turning into General Hospital. I can't wait to read more. I sure hope you are able to post weekly again. See ya next week!

I really like this story. I love the contrast between Sam and Caleb. They complement the story so well together. I love the strength of the two men. I can see the hero worship too. They are two very cool men. I can't wait to see where this goes in the future.

I have read a couple of your stories. I do think I shall stick around. Very nice start. Looks like it will be fun. I enjoyed the others.

Oh wow. This looks pretty interesting. I really love your writing. I drove through Ocala last weekend on the way home from a big music festival. I thought it was really funny that it made me think of you and this story. It was such pretty scenery I could just imagine your boys there. Anywho. I can't wait to see more of this. Glad to see you back. I missed my Friday night update.

Nicely done with this chapter. I love the drama of it all. I still want to know what has Uzzy. Mr.Sexy Wings should be the one who has, not the one who has been had. ( God that is an awful sentence, I am leaving it that way though for funny factor.) Anywho. I love my angels. I just had to leave you smiles before I went to bed. I have no voice and my neck hurts from banging my head. That was one of the better shows I have seen lately except Alice in Chains. Good night sweet Pasha, all will be well,

This chapter was amazing. I adored the way you combined the bits of muggle history and the history of magic. This is a really well done story. After the first one I had to go check out your other work. Your mind is simply amazing.

Oh man. These damn briefs are so teaseful. Yes, teaseful is now a word. Ambien brain makes new words all the time. I feel bad for sweet Pasha that he feels useless. Hopefully next week Uzzy will put him to good use. Ahem. hehehehehe. I sure hope Pasha and Uzzy can get it all together. I really enjoy the way you write this story. Sometimes people need to believe in Angels. Even if some of them are cunty. Speaking of good use, I went to a concert on Sunday with these really hot guys. They were wearing latex pants and then this other guy was on stage all bound. The band was Vampires Everywhere. THey put on a good show because it was a fun show. THey had a neat sound too. We also saw Davey Suicide and Orgy. It was a fantastic show. KTHNXBYE!

EEEP! Poof goes the Angel. He deserved it though. I thought that the crime fit the punishment though, it was obivous that he felt really bad for the mess that he caused but he still did it. I love this story. Its one of my very favorites. I will miss it when its all said and done but I look forward to buying it in a book form on Amazon. Ahem, Ahem...

Oh man, this was a good chapter. I like the fact that Corbin has the balls to say what he feels. Part of me says he should not have called out the girl who had... ahem, relations shall we say, on the dance floor. Its rather a case of don't start none,won't be done. She is 95% at fault. Corbin had the best response though, He said he would not own up to the event and I wouldn't either. Then again, I never play Never have I because I probably have. Anywho. I loved the chapter. Pete and Corbin need to get their heads out of their ass and I have no idea what to say about Lee except for vir-what-now? That V-card was cashed a long time ago. Oh well. He will figure himself out. I still love Corbs and I was glad to see Mister. See ya next week!

You know, We need to have a conversation about cliff hangers!!!!!! RAWR! Damn I love your style. Please keep Zak safe. Anywho. Great chapter. You have really set up quite the lovely universe here. I can't wait to see more. Any thoughts on publishing this together as a book?

Ok so I finally broke down and read the chapter. It was very good. I am glad you didn't off anyone today. Notice I said today and left you some wiggle room because I am just not always sure where your mind will fly. I am quite sure that is why I love your stories. I am very impressed with how Luke is turning out. These guys are a happy little family. I can't wait for another egg to come along. I have to admit though. I am very glad that I read this.

See! See what I mean! Tourturer! I love this story though even if you did most likely just off one of the guys. Maybe they can become an angel with Mr. Sexy Wings. I can't wait to see who caused all the chaos and why. Yay for you! Tootles. Carrie

You know, You say up a few reviews that Corbs has a come-to-Jesus moment... Make sure he understands that it doesn't mean on his knees sheesh. I can see why he did it though. I mean really, I couldn't have a cake next to me and not nibble on it too. The whole oh let me spend the night I have no where else to be never works out. I am sure if you look it up in Urban dictionary that phrase translates into I am trying to keep my dignity whilst being a hoe. For some reason, I just don't trust Lee. I mean I don't trust Sargent Narnia either but he doesn't give me the creeps. I just know there is an angle to Lee that we are not seeing yet. At least with Mike, we just know( Sorta) that the poor guy is confused. All that said, I loved this chapter. Scared my poor Ripley though gasping outloud at the virgin slut. I can't wait untill next week.

You know, for about 3 paragraphs or so I liked Mike. I am still not sure how I feel about him. One hand says to be nice to him because he keeps smacking his head on the closet door but then the other says that he is a selfish punk who just wants to have his cake and eat it too. Poor Corbin's little brain and heart are being spun around like a merry-go-round. I understand that Mike has issues too but damn it, I really don't like sweet Corbin being the victim here. ( Yes, I know his halo is held up by horns, thats what makes him sweet) Anyways, I love this story and the way it is going. It is truly a fun story.

This chapter was amazing. I am so proud of the way you did this. I thought the twist was well done and didn't look like you were wimping out. In fact, you kicked it up a notch by having the family meeting go the way it did. So now, can you pretty please tell us what those pictures were? OMG! I will be waiting here not so patiently.

That was a really great chapter. I need a love bunny like that( Its kind of like Almond joy... Sometimes you need a lovebunny, sometimes you need a fuckrabbit) . It rather gives me hope though. I have so enjoyed this story and I look forward to Wednesday ( ahem, and Monday too but we already know that.) Besides all that mushy mushy stuff. HAHA MIKEY! Two Mr. Sexy Wings is better than one! I am glad these two scared the mean angel. I can't wait to see what happens. I still thing they should have angelettes. Off to clean the house now, blah. I need one of those sexy naked men maids to come do it for me. TOOTLELOO!

I am so excited to see this story posted over here. I have read it on your homepage and enjoyed every bit of it. I am going to rate each of these stories as they come on. These stories are intellegent, fun, loving with enough drama to make it believable. I also won't give away any spoilers. This story deserves to be read and enjoyed while it unfolds. If people skip ahead they would miss some of the magic. Thank you so much for posting this over here too.

Oh my stars. These two are racing a glacier and I think it is winning. What the hell did Mr. Military think his display was going to prove? The best thing to come out of that ( or not come out) was Corbin telling him he is not gay in the same way. That was a great line. This chapter gave the fools a little shove forward that they needed. I don't know what its going to take though for Pete. That dude's closet is like Narnia or something. Or maybe like in Monster's Inc, when Boo's door goes away. Maybe he can't find his door. As for Corbin. I just don't know. I still think he is going about all this the very right way but I think he needs to push a little more. Mister is right. Pete is the better choice of him or the Vmee. Oh, and I thought you should know... I have Ninja turtle PJs, they are flannelly soft stuff, but they don't have feets. See you next week!

WOHOO!!!! Get 'em Pasha! Er, I mean, that was quite lovely. This chapter was like the warm fuzzy parts in an 80s movie when they play the really good song. Like the Breakfast Club. "Don't you forget about me"~ Simple Minds. Maybe even a slow clap is needed here. HAHA Mr. Powerful Angel pants. He thought he was going to get away with being sucktacular but Pasha showed him. Now, Pasha and Mr. Sexy Wings need to join to become Super Angel and kick some winged booty. You are scaring me though. The end is near I fear. ( sorry, too much Dr. Suess) You know, I really like H.E.As though. Maybe they could get together and have Angelettes together or something. Ok, that one was bad, I am taking myself to bed now and off the social media types of things before I say something really silly. In all seriousness though. I love this story and I love watching the Angels evolve. Angels have always been something I am really interested in. I can't wait for next week.

Are the horses in your story based on actual horses in life or are they just fiction horses. I was just curious about if any of this story had any basis in actual life. If they are, could you post photos of them? I would love to see them. Thanks, Carrie. Oh and always, I liked the chapter. This story seems to really be growing at this point. You have added a lot of details. very nice job.

I am still really proud of Corbin. He is doing exactly what needs to be done, even if I don't agree with it. I just want him to get with Pete. He is being smart about it. If he forces the issue Pete will shut down and run away. At least this way, Pete thinks its his idea. Mike... Hmmm don't really know what to think of him. Part of me likes him because I think he is a good guy but then part of me does not like what he does to Corbin. The ONLY saving grace he has at this point is that he has always identified himself as straight. He is not comfortable in his own skin. What is it about poor Corbin that attract these types to him. Goodness. You know what makes me think that Mike is going to be a pain in the ass later? Mister didn't like him. Cats are a good judge of character. Anywho. Wonderful chapter. I still think they should make a show out of this story. It would be funny as hell. It would be the hell out of that Honey Boo-Boo idiot crap. UGH.

This was a good chapter and I am glad you included the help lines at the end. The chapter made me sad but it helps me to understand Dylan. Riding Lessons is one of my favorite stories. Good job here!

WOOHOO! Pasha got his groove back. I have said from the very begining that Pasha was going to take on a strength all his own and I was right. I think he is finally coming into his own and it makes me very proud. I truly hope that Mr. Sexy Wings comes and beats that damn Micheal senseless. Rawr. But see what Mr. Mikey was thinking was that he would only have to defeat Uzzy. He didnt know that Pasha was going to go all Terminangel on him. HAHAHA! on him for not knowing that love is the strongest weapon( Ugh that is so smushy) Anywho. I am really excited to watch Pasha's wings unfold. I can't wait for next week. Oh and in completely unrelated other news,well except that it has hot guys in it... We saw Black Veil Brides on Monday. It was very hot in the venue and Andy took his shirt off. So did Ashley. I have decided to start a petition that they never put them back on ever. The music was really great and lots of fun. Poor Andy didn't seem like he was feeling too well though. That was sad. They still totally rocked though. I will post more perhaps on my blog that never use. I have lots of photos too. MMMM. They are nice photos.

Ok, Great twist there. I loved the other story but I think I like this one more. I really like the boys you have created here and I love the horses involved. I can't wait for more.

Oh noes! What happened to poor Kyle. I like all the drama and intrigue. This is a good story. Waiting here for the next chapter. p.s. I went and liked your video on the link. )