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I loved this chapter. I was so proud of Corbin for realizing that he has liked him for too long without rewards. I also think now that Pete will end up removing his head from his behind and getting it together. I can see how people would think Pete is being an ass but really I think he is just scared. Something that SecretSides said had me thinking though. Pete really does have an advantage. I think he is reading Corbins articles and has a little insite into the man. I know if it was me, not only would I read his articles, I would take lots of notes! Anyways, I can't wait for homecoming with darling Corbin.

Tentacles sounds like testicles. Just thought I should point that out. I have apparently reverted to my 12-year-old self. Sorry. Anyways. Oh wow. That was something else. I like what you have done so far. It is a very interesting take. You were certainly honnest in the discription. I also wonder though how Sys got preggers. I am sure if I just sit here and wait you will tell us eventually right? I sure hope so! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Silly question. Are you posting on the 11s on purpose? Its cracking me up. 3:11,5:11,7:11 etc. Plus this story is amazing. I have been waiting for it as it pops up like my cats wait for me in the morning to feed their fat tummies. I had to go back and read the rest of your stories too. That was a nice Sunday.

Hello. You are most wonderful. I agree with what Sw said. This is certainly top shelf.

Oh noes! Gabe is a bad man! Heartless too. How dare he call Uzzy a puppy. Does he forget that Uzzy has friends that make fire? Dummy angel is going to get his feathers toasted! That being said, I am so proud of Uzzy. Mr. Sexy wings is back in his right mind and how he is going to be sexy AND dangerous. Which is even more sexy. I am so glad your computer is all better now so that we can see what happens next. I was really starting to miss these guys. In completely unrelated news. Today is Andy Biersack's birthday. He is a whopping 22. It looks like I will have to start exploring my inner cougar. Being 36 sucks sometimes.

OMG. Drama everywhere! I love these little goobers.

I was just thinking about this story the other day. There was a dude buying two cases of Natural Light at Walmart. It was only 8:30 a.m. For some reason it made me think about this story. I liked this chapter. Yes Corbin seems to be having a rough go of things right now but he seemed more together here than the last few chapters. I guess that means its time for him to fall apart again. I do hope that Pete gets it together soon and realizes that Corbin is the right one. I guess we have the better part of a year to go now huh. I'm glad to see you post again. Don't run away so long this time.

What the holy hell! I loved this chapter. It is amazing the way you wind the story around. Good job. Now get your tush in gear for the next chapter! It is going to be hard to wait. Then again, for your stories it always is.

Sui, This was wonderful! I am glad Josh and Alexi finally let there love be physical. For some reason I have started picturing Josh as Simon Baker. Don't know why I am seeing him that way but I am rather enjoying it. I was really excited to see this chapter post. I enjoy this story. I can't wait to see what happens next... Pops over to next chapter. YAY!!!!

I like what you have started here. The flow is good and the characters are interesting. I am excited to see more. Best of luck with your adventure.

These two are adorable. I am really enjoying this. Also wanted to mention, Pay it Forward was a movie several years ago before Haley Joel Osment outgrew his cuteness. It was a really good movie and I recommened it but it made me cry. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Lisa, I agree. I feel like this will make me cry at some point. I hope they are like Pay it Forward happy tears. Oh my. Now I have to read the next chapter to see what happens. Hopefully there will be many more. I really like the style you have going so far. Good job.

Yay, Seems like the boys are doing pretty well. They seem to be stronger. I was glad to see this chapter up. It was worth all your hard work. Good Job!

Your story has improved so much. I love being able to watch it grow. You have really improved the flow of your story and you picked a great place to end this chapter. Well done. I can't wait to read more when you post it. Keep up the good work!

Oh My God. What did Gabri'el do? If he hurt Pasha I am going to beat him. If he hurt Mr. Sexy Wings then it is on like Donkey Kong. I just think about how in True Blood stupid Sookie found a way to break her bond with Eric. I hope dummy Gabe didn't use some sort of angel magic to break the soul mate bond with Pasha and Mr. Sexy Wings. I honnestly don't think he could. He may be all badass angel dude but love is stronger ( and that is MUSHY) I am loving watching this all unfold. Now, its back to Vampire Diaries and people who should never be allowed to wear shirts again. MMMM. Ian Somerhalder. Tasty delights. Oh and just FYI. Black Veil Brides is on the cover of Kerrang ( sp?) magazine. Sir Andy is looking totally incredible. Because you know he has so many other looks.

oh my stars. Yay! More Riley and Kyle. I love watching people doe-si-doe around each other before realizing that they love each other to bits. Its so funny. One of my friends had a Facebook status the other day that said everyone knows they are in love except them. It made me giggle tons. I like Riley's little smart ass attitude too. It seems that he is going to have to take the reins because Kyle is going to be standoffish. I like strong men. Anywho. So nice to see you again. I miss you too. I don't like it when you run away. Post more often dang it!

Looking good. You made a very good choice working with Lisa. She is very brilliant. I can't wait to see more. I am hoping you smack Edward something fierce though. I bet he is hiding feelings. I am interested to see what happens with him. Mr. Arrogant... I love it.

Oh noes! Its the dreded end. The story turned out so wonderful. I can't wait to see the sequel. So much more fun to be had. Yay.

What sweet boys. I love how they adopted Max into the fold. Little ones need big brothers like these dudes. You have created quite the little community. Very nice work.

Thank you for updating before the holiday. This is really turning into something special. It also happens to have a nice lead in for a second story with boys taking over the ranch. Hint Hint.HINT! I want to follow these boys and see how far they get. Its so nice to read happy normal boy stories. I am sure though that somewhere onlong they way they will find drama but such is life. It also appears at some point you shall have to find a a boy for these two to adopt and then you can start another branch to the story. If I had to pick one thing about the story that you have done the best it was pairing the horses with the boys. These horses were considered bad horses and no one could work with them until the right person came along and spoke their language. Horses are very spiritual animals. I think like knows like. There has been a lot of magic in that part of the story. So you get two gold stars. Have a great holiday!

Hello Nephy my old friend, I've come to read with you again. Sorry, Simon and Garfunkle got stuck in my head. So at least we know there is something in my head. I am not as Zombieproof as we thought. We just have to find hippy Zombies that want to eat Simon and Garfunkle. I think one of them has gone bald. Is that like already peeled shrimp for Zombies? Ok, I am going to be serious now and write a review. This is what I was thinking last night. I had to agree with Stephen who said Pasha was a pawn. It seems that he is. Now that all these heavy hitters are literally dropping out of the skies, what is going to happen to the poor supposedly weak human? I say supposedly because I think at the last minute we are going to have a ta-da moment bigger than "You are NOT the father." on the Maury show. I think Pasha is going to turn out to have bigger wings( haha, thinly veiled balls joke) than the Angels. People forget that will is often stronger than skills. The little guy does sometimes get to overcome. I don't know though. I still want to know what all the fighting is about. Are we having a fight like the Rolling Stones? " Hey, You, get off of my cloud" teritorial fight or are we fighting because one realm wants to take over the other and be boss of everyone else. Hmmm. In time, all shall be revealed~ Obi Wan. Cripes. I am going to go somewhere with all the cheese I left in here and make some damn nachos or something. Anyways, I loved it. You know that. And the book was fricken AWESOME. I reviewed it on Amazon so that everyone will know that you guys rocked it. Tootles.

Oh Hai Sid! Nice to see you again! I am so looking forward to reading more of this. You are so very good at this. I really enjoy your style. I just wish I new what happened???? I am glad to see Dylan back too. I was curious to see how his new career turned out. YAY!

Oh it looks like a good one to start. I like the style and content of your writing. Today, Joe Hahn, the DJ for Linkin Park was posting pictures of his family on Twitter after they won an award. It was him, his Oppa and Mrs. Hahn. I knew exactly what he was talking about and it was because of your stories. I felt really cool And also, I wouldn't argue with anyone trying to give me Miso soup.. Yummy. so this was a great start. I can't wait to see how these boys get their little bums in gear.

Oh my. Looky who came out from under the bed. Glad to see you back. I missed silly Corbin and his confused little brit. "Scotty Doesn't Know" about killed me. That was funny stuff. I liked this chapter and I think that Dakota turned out pretty cool. I want to see what happens with all that there. I just want to see a little tiny kiss out of them. Silly,Silly boys. Adorable, but silly. I hope the next chapter is ready soon and I truly hope that all is well on your end. Yay for Corbin and Pete!

Very nice job! I like the way you have paired up the boys and the horses and what not. Great story you have going. I think I am going to be sad when the trail ends.