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Carrie76

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  1. Carrie76

    Chapter 6

    Hm... At this point, I really like Josh. He seems more down to earth. Adrian could be ok but I need proof. I also think that Lilly is a formidable force and she will help keep Alexi safe. She seems to have his best interest at heart. For some reason I keep picturing her as Debi Mazar. No idea why but that how she comes across to me. I like this story. I can't wait for more.
  2. I am so glad to have found this site. I feel like I am allowed to be who or whatever I want here. I read the work of so many talented people that I would have never gotten to read before. I have to say I am mostly straight but have experimented and been curious. Being here lets me decide for myself. It makes it acceptable to just be me. I am not defined by anything or expected to be anything. Comsie, you are one of my favorite authors on here and Cia too. I have read so much of your work and loved it. I just wanted to say thank you for all of the hard work you guys do. One day, we might see my work up here too. I write often but it is afraid to come out of its Macbook Pro home. One day it will. Until then, I wil just support everyone else the best I can. Thank you again for this wonderful site. Congratulations on your anniversary and lets hope for many, many more.
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    Chapter 7

    Hmmm. I like this. I want to know what happened to Luke and Noah though. This is rather like an appetizer. Need more please. It seems like I have seen book II for this story. Did you take it down to re-edit it as well or have I lost my marbles?
  4. Carrie76

    Cock Block

    UGH! ::shakes head:: Those two are a hot mess. I just had a thought though. I think Pete is afraid of himself. I also think that if Corbin wants to get anywhere he is going to have to lead. I like this story. It is a lot of fun and you are a great writer. The cat cracks me up. Mister is a good name for her. Rather funny. A good friend of mine had a boy cat named Tinkerbell. When they took him to the vet for the first time they realized that those were not Tinker's bells if you know what I mean. Now, his name is Tink. Anyways. More please. KTHNXBYE!
  5. Good Story! I was just thinking the other day that I had not seen anything from you in a little while. I am glad you posted more of the story and I hope more is to follow. I wish everyone had a Bill to fall back on and for the love of Star Trek, I hope Sarah pulls it together. It just doesn't seem like she will.
  6. Woohoo! I was so excited to see this pop up tonight. I love your stories. It is starting nicely. Can't wait to see more hot guys come out of the shower... er I mean, more of this story.
  7. I just found your wonderful story yesterday and read through the whole thing like it was a pint of chocolate ice cream. The compassion used in writing Kaleb was so amazing. So many of my friends have children with disabilities and it drives us crazy to hear that they are different. They are who they are meant to be. Chase and Kaleb were really neat characters and I loved watching their story develope. Very good job. I enjoyed your style and now I shall go find some more to read. oh and yay for toasty hot love scenes. hehehe. Carrie
  8. I read this story and I liked it so much I had to go back and read The List. This is a fun story. The bad part is I work nights and I am supposed to be sleeping now. These storys were way much more fun than sleeping. I have to agree with Method, the way you look at the sweet little freshmen is so very funny. I remember looking at them the same way. As a 36 year old student who finally graduated in May, I always wondered if one of the highschools were taking a tour. The freshmen were just so young. I can't wait for the next chapter.
  9. This was a great post. As a begining author, I am terrified that my stories will only read well in my own freaky little head. I believe that having a good editor is rather like a good safety blanket. I feel better knowing that someone will tell me when my little thought choo choo has gone of the track. It also drives me bonkers to post something and then find a mistake in what I wrote. Cia, I read your work all the time and I love it. I am really thankful for your information about how to become a better writer. Thank you, Carrie
  10. Carrie76

    Chapter 11

    I really enjoy this series and its offshoots. It is so cute to see the guys fall in love and learn how to be a couple. I love Randy and Ryan but Tyler and Ariel are so close to my heart because they both are so special and clearly need to be loved. I think if Ariel was a real person I would adopt him as a little brother type friend. Please keep up the good work. Thank you, Carrie
  11. Rob, I knew you were a he. The other author's site I was on is a she. No worries though. I had another thought about this story. Someone had mentioned in one of the earlier reviews about the names of the characters and how they weren't spacey enough for lack of a not made up word. How do you name your characters? I write myself and I find that the characters sort of name themselves and usually will not change no matter how hard I argue with them. Again, I love your work. Thanks bunches!
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