Carrie76

I loved the start of your story. I think your characters show a lot of promise. I was going to recommend a beta but you already had that under control. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Best of luck with your writing.

Oh my smurfiness. This is a really good story. I thought it was my birthday with this popping up all at the same time. YAY! I sure hope you have something in your pocket for after all this is done. Perhaps Spin shall get his own story. Not to repeat myself but dang, this is a good story.

Man you are doing a really great job with this story. I love the flow of it. The boys are so adorable. As I have said before this story really makes my horsy heart happy. I hope there is more to come and I can't wait to find out what happened to Dusty. You also have a very good feeling for where to end a chapter. Very good job.

I am always excited to have your writing pop up. This chapter truly hit home with me. I have had horrible panic attacks to the point that I just didn't want to go out. I know how to deal with them now. I am not wild about it but I can do elevators. I always have my earbuds playing music on. It helps a lot. As for the story, Joshua is going to be so good for Alexi. Sometimes all you need is someone to believe you can do it. This was a great chapter and even though Alexi was so scared, it gave me warm fuzzies. I can't wait to see what happens next with these two darlings.

OMG. I was crying sparkly tears over this one... Could be because I am going to see Breaking Dawn tomorrow... Don't judge, there is some hot werewolf,shape shifter, tasty men in that movie. We are going tomorrow because we don't want spoilers. ( damn that part about spoilers was hard to get out with a straight face.) I was actually sad though. I don't trust Gabe as far as I can throw him but I don't like anybody to hurt. Its just not in my nature. I was even sad that Justin who-shall-not-be-named broke up with that Disney twit. However, I was really glad that Pasha and Uzzy figured out they are stronger if they link up. I can't wait to see what happens next. I get the feeling its all about to go splody! In other sorta somewhat related news. I am off to download(LEGALLY) the new How To Destroy Angels E.P. Yay for Trent Reznor and company.

Oh! I want to know who caught him! Silly boy. Such a good story and nice job with the stopping point. Yay for you.

YAY! I loved the way you tied all this up. I think your pacing of the story was wonderful. I think I will really miss these guys. Very nice job getting us all hooked into your story. Write more please.

Very well done. I love watching these two boys find each other.

I have really enjoyed this story. Great character development and the story is interesting. You have me hooked. Very nice job.

Wait what? Mr. Sexy Wings has a Mr. Sexy Wings? Oh noes! I am thinking that Gabriel is going to be bad bad news. I am still very interested to see exactly who comes along with this whole rebelion thing. I want to know what they are all fighting about. All these Angels running around though make me think of a Victoria's Secret ad done correctly. I keep seeing hot dudes in go-go shorts running around with wings on. No more Queer as Folk for me! I really do like this story. I wish that there was a higher word count but I am trying to learn portion control anyways. Might as well start with my reading habits since it is clearly not working with the brownies. As I said last night in a somewhat garbled Tweet ( advice, wait until your eyes are open to tweet. It works better) I had a sandwich for dinner. It was made of ice cream! See you next Wednesday! Which sounds so much better than See You Next Tuesday!( you'll figure it out, tee hee hee!)

OMG! Write faster! I am loving the start of this story. So sweet! When I was younger I rode all the time and pretty much spent my life at the barn. We too had an idiot that thought he was part fish. If we went anywhere near the lake his dumb butt was going swimming. So much fun! Add a little romance and you have the perfect story. I am really excited to see where this goes and what trails it takes to get there. I think these boys are going to have a great summer. YAYS!

Excellent job with this chapter! You ended it at the perfect place. I am very proud of you for this work. The story is moving along so nicely. Yay for Min telling Young Jae that he loves him. Now they can figure out together how to fix his family problems. They are really making a good foundation for a relationship. Min is growing into a fine man. I was also glad to see Lara show herself a little bit and now we know that she is more than what she seemed. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully those two get it together.

WOOHOO for LM finally going batshit on those two dudes. Yes he is beat up but he will bounce back. I like the drama in this story. I am also very glad that Eric admited his feelings and that story has closed itself. I really want Ogre and LM to be happy. I think the three of them will create a new bond but I really, really want more. If not of this story than create something new for us. You are doing a great job. Keep it up.

OOOOOH. Gabriel commeth! I really love Phoenixes and I do believe if I ever get to meet one he will have a total attitude like this little guy. I really wanted a tattoo of one somewhere on my person but then everyone and their twin brother started to get one. I like stuff only I have. Plus there is a person I know that I call CFB( C. dirty word, faced bitch. Yes I know thats hateful, she deserves it though.) that has one. As for the story, I think leaders of rebellions are always a little bad and a little good ( except for in Star Wars, Emperor Palpatine is always a bad man. Bad,bad man) I really think Angel will be good. Such a cutie could not be bad. I can't wait for next week to see what Mr. Tude and Mr. Sexy Wings get it up too.

I liked this story. I am glad you made the story longer. Its a good story. I am also looking forward to what is new. Fun!

I think it will turn out ok. A tasty recipe today! Yay. That always adds to the story. I am now wondering if we misjudged his mom or if she is up to no good. Hmmm. I can't wait to see now. Oh boy.

No one will ever understand what goes on in a writer's mind. Sometimes it feels as though the writer is just a vessel for a story to show itself to the world. I thought you did a wonderful job with this story. It was hard to read because I have come to care about the guys but I thought the chapter was very good. I can't imagine it was easy to write either. As for Eric, I hurt for him because he is being torn in two. It will all work out in the end. I can't wait to see more for this story and hopefully figure out if Eric has feelings for LM or if it just seems that way. Good job.

That was fun! I love the idea of options. I am trying to teach my family this and especially my 16-year-old sister. She is thankfully not too mean to others but she is mean to herself. I know she will get there but she needs the chance. I really enjoyed this story. In completely un-related news. I went to my first comic-con this past weekend. (it was after a very loud concert that left me and Jess answering most questions with huh and what because we couldn't hear anymore. LOL!) What a magical adventure it was. I think I shall go to as many more as I can find. Spent way too much money though. Classic comics and toys are just too temping for me.

Yay! He has a name now! Hmmm. So now we know( think) he is a good guy maybe. I feel like Scooby Doo! Well unless I was my sister. Then I would be Scooty Boo. She couldn't say the other for a long time. It was cute. She is 16 now. The cute wears off. I really enjoy this story though. I wish Wednesday wasn't so far away. Plus, there are buckets of music coming out next week. It will be a wonderful day.

hmm. This is getting even better. Its building rather nicely towards something bigger. I am curious to see what mom turns out to be. Is she being led by another or acting on her own. Also, it seems that up until this point, everyone underestimated MIn. maybe when people start to see that there is more to him some of this silly stuff will stop. I am also glad that Young Jae decided to tell the truth about wanting Min. I think that will go a long way with Min's confidence and help him to be stronger as a business man. I think they are going to make a wonderful team.

HOLY FRICKEN HELL! You and your damn cliffhangers. At some point I feel like I am going to have to yell Red to get you to end the tourture. Tis starting out very well though. If my heart resumes to beating normally I will stick around for the rest of the story of course. Just lovely Sid dearest, just lovely.

Oh this was so good! Poor Thomas and Rodney. I am enjoying your story and it is well worth the time you have spent writing it. I am rather sad that its coming to an end. I hope you have more stored up for us. Good work!

Oh my goodness! This chapter was so good. I believe Eric acted the way he did because there is such a strong history between these two. Part of me wonders if he may not have feelings for Clay and that is why he never likes any of his boyfriends. I think he will get over it though. He has had a double shock. The fact that Clay was keeping secrets and Ogre was the secret was just too much to handle in one bite. I think they will all be ok. Mainly because I like HEAs. Great chapter though. I was really,really glad to see it come up.

Oh dear me this was good. I believe that Thomas is gay and his dad is beating up on him. It hurts my heart that people think they can change who they fall in the love with. I'm sure it was rough writing about Thomas' strife but I assure you it was worth it. I love these little munchkins and I do hope everything turns out well for them. I think that they will become allies. I can't wait to see!

ERMAHGOD! Its a phoenix. Or maybe its Elmo. Who knows. This was quite a tasty little snackling. I enjoyed it. I did have a moment of hilarity over the whole crystal tears thing. That was very romantic. It made me feel like the Angel would be beautiful when he cried. The other part of that made me think of why Edward could not have possibliy gotten Bella pregnant. HE SHOOTS STONES! Plus. He is supposed to have stone skin and she says its like cuddling up to the statue David. Wouldnt that be horrible to try to "get friendly" with? Oh are you happy to see me? Nope, dick made of stone sorry. Anywho, in all seriousness, I adore this story. I think the Angel is such a good character. He is probably one of my favorites to date because there is so much mystery and possiblity around him. So much good can come from this. I love it. I can't wait for more to find out who came to visit! And yes, if you are wondering, I know I am completely nutters. Its happy in my little world.