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Thank you so much! I don't where the idea for this story came from. I was actually outlining a different story that had NOTHING in common with this one when the idea blew through me. As drama ridden as this story is, I have never been so proud of the final result. I'm so glad that others are appreciating the effort.
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Eric's role in the story becomes more prominent in the final act. Keep reading!!!
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Are We In Love Now?
Mann Ramblings commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Are We In Love Now?
You know that since you wrote this I haven't been able to think of Little Red Riding Hood the same way? -
Unexpected Bedfellows
Mann Ramblings commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Unexpected Bedfellows
I worked crazy hard to make this chapter work. I made myself really crazy trying to get the emotion to pour through. As strange as it sounds, I'm really touched that it upset my readers. -
Thanks, Comic! I put a lot into this story and I'm glad it's coming through. I tried hard to make the character convincing and it looks I've succeeded to some extent given the responses I'm getting from everyone!
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Well I know which sites we've both been on. LOL. Ogre was actually the nickname of a Navy ROTC I went to college with that I based this character on. Not at huge as my version, but definitely larger than life and worth having a HUGE crush on.
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Thanks, Lisa! Can you believe I almost didn't write this chapter? Ultimately, I'm glad I did. It was a lot of fun.
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I would love to do this in a movie form!! But Hollywood would prolly make LM a girl and that would make me have to kill people.
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Drama drama drama. How will it turn out? I'm not telling...
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The story is complete and I'm feeding you a dose every week. No spoilers!!! You'll have to wait to see how it all plays out. Thanks for being so faithful with your support. It is greatly appreciated
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That's a lot of history and emotion to pack into a small package without feeling rushed. Well done. It's nice that it can be accomplished without having to resort to endless chapters. Nice and concise and still powerful. That's good storytelling.
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“Bigger. I must have you bigger. It will please me.” Steve was surreptitiously whispering into my ear with the tone of a cartoon mad scientist between sets at the gym. Eric was getting a drink of water out of the weight pit. As Ogre pulled away from me he casually brushed against me leaving trails of fire along my skin. God, I had it bad. Within days of our mall adventure, Ogre had started taking a more active role in my workout schedule. He worked with Eric to step up my routines and put me in
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Matthew has lost the most important person in his world. Why is this the moment when his estranged mother decides to walk back into his life? Why can't this be a happy moment?
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I heard the sirens and saw the flashing lights before I could understand what they meant. My body held itself absolutely still. I was terrified to move and I didn't know why. Voices and rushed footsteps became louder. Someone was approaching. My sense of time was drifting in and out as if I was dancing on the fringes of sleep. I awoke to a stranger's touch and light shining back and forth in my eyes. “Can you hear me? Does it hurt anywhere?” he said. Rubber laced fingers examined my face and n
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I was elated and terrified to have Ogre back. I couldn't risk him breaking my spirit, but I couldn't bear the thought of life without him. I needed him to convince me that I would be the only one his attentions would be given too. He would have to prove to me how much he wanted and needed me. His first tactic was simple enough but quite effective. Eric and I were relaxing the Tuesday evening after Ogre and I reconciled. Eric had ordered a pizza and we were kicking back with the Playstation to
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Heights - I don't get the sensation of falling, I get the urge to jump. (I stay away from the edge.) Yet strangely, I'm good strapped into a roller coaster. Go figure. Success - I can get really anxious and be the master of self-sabotage. But I'm getter better, LOL
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All your chapters are over a thousand words. You're cheating. LOL Another great chapter. I'm reading this at work. Don't tell anyone.
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My phone had been off the past week. I tired of ignoring his calls and reading his texts that said, “I'm sorry. I can explain.” in one form or another. I neglected his email messages. They sat in my mailbox unopened. I didn't want to speak to him. I didn't want to see his face. I didn't want to admit how perilously in love with Ogre I was and how his betrayal was killing me. I spent my time on automatic. I woke up, got dressed and went to class. I sat in my courses, took my notes, participated
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Unexpected Bedfellows
Mann Ramblings commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Unexpected Bedfellows
I am so flattered that so many people are reacting so strongly to this chapter. It really makes me feel that I've managed to convey the story the way I envisioned it. I was a little concerned about how this batch of drama would be received. Just think: we're barely halfway through. Where can we go from here? -
I woke up and climbed out of bed admiring my morning wood. That lasted until my feet hit the floor. Every muscle in my legs were on fire all the way up to my tender asshole. I forgot how much our leg workout would hurt. And that wasn't including the sex. My erection quickly disappeared. I cautiously reached behind me expecting to find something horribly wrong. My rectum was slightly raw but didn't feel any different. My experience with being a bottom was limited and none of it was as vigorous as
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I awoke the next morning alone. That was all right. I hadn't expected him to stay the night no matter how much I thought he wanted to. No matter how much I had wanted him to. Ogre's need for secrecy trumped everything else. It was too soon for that kind of self awareness on his part. Too soon to upheave his life any more than our connection had no doubt done already. I would merely have to sit back and be patient and hope it all played out to our benefit. I was asking a lot, wasn't I? I could s
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Thanks for the comment about the dialog. I tend to recite it out loud so it sounds as natural as possible. Glad to hear my efforts aren't wasted.
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Tuesday and Thursday were my back to back studio art class days. With an hour between, it took over seven hours to get through two classes. It was usually my favorite time of the week, but today I was looking forward to our Monty Python night. Ogre's coming over. All day I had been so excited I could barely sit still. I climbed out of the car dragging my supplies and portfolio case and nearly ran to the front door. My energy was hard to contain. I bounded into the room and secured my gear. I fo
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Don't worry. There's still another 9 chapters to go. Plenty of time for some drama. Muahaha!!!!
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Hi everyone! "Little Man" was the first story I'd written since my early college years and the first that actually had a plot/situations that featured gay men. As anxioius as I was about posting this online, I was really pleased with the feedback and interest in chapter one. Chapter two is in queue so I thought I'd add this topic in case anyone had questions/comments. Discuss. LOL
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