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Moving along....?? Inching along, you mean, surely! Last chapter was in october, for Gods sake! That said: Yes, it's a story well above average. I love it too much to skip it, even if the long pauses are sooooo frustrating!
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Chapter 6 - Just Saying Thanks
Leo C commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Just Saying Thanks
O.M.G. - that was HOT! I didn't expect this to happen so soon. Looking very much forward to the next chapter. Oh, and I think you're a great writer. I like it when I'm allowed inside the main characters' minds so I get to know and understand what's going on in there. You are especially good at that. Thank you! -
Chapter 1 - First Day of School
Leo C commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 1 - First Day of School
Very promising start of the story - And I'm thrilled to know you've got a lot of chapters for us. I like the flow of your writing and the dialogue, which seems very natural and real. Looking forward to the next chapter. -
OK, so this old romantic fool got his fill of romance with this one. For those of us with a "could have been" or two in our baggage, this was a reminder that there is no such thing as too late, when it comes to love. Thank you so much, Gary. I hope we get another go at the Larkspur tale sometime. I guess you already have some ideas, and if not: Just ask. I have a few...... Take care and stay safe.😘
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Owwww - that was sweet, yes, it was! All that misleading us into thinking, that Mitch might really be dieing...... well, pal, I don't think any of us really believed, you would have the heart to do him in just like that! This ole romantic fool is so happy you didn't, that's for sure. Even if you probably have some bumps planned for the next chapters..... 😉 Thanks again for your immense effort to keep us all so well entertained!
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Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
Leo C commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
Lovely. Fially things are going the right way. Now we just need to get Mitch to the doctor to find out, that his tuberculosis has gone away! But maybe that would be just too much happines to expect..... Thanks for yet anothr good read, Gary! -
Chapter 7 A Bark with No Bite
Leo C commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 A Bark with No Bite
'Stubborn' is an understatement! Hard to tell if Old Blue or Mitch is the most stubborn one. I seriously hope he will reconsider after a good nights sleep! Great work on this one too, Gary. Thanks!- 66 comments
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Chapter 4 The Lord Ain't No Fool
Leo C commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 The Lord Ain't No Fool
Oh my, that Coy surely can be quite devious, when he sets his mind to it. I like the idea of returning the favour of a well meant butt kicking, but I sure hope, that Mitch will see it that way, when Will shows up at the farm....... 🤞😏 Great work with the language, by the way, Gary! Seems really authentic. -
Awww - this was like finding a long lost friend. You don't have to make this a short visit to Larkspur on my account. You can even leave a cliffie or two if you want to. I need those boys in my life. Thank you ever so much for bringing them back!
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Absolutely fabulous idea with this story - and a great basis for more PROM-stories, as others have mentioned. As usual your characters are easy to picture in the readers mind. Loved it! As usual.... 😄 Did I sense a hint of Ray Bradbury's style in this one? Thank you for yeat another great read, Brian!
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Damn!! Don't you think Ed has suffered enough already?? This story was very dark from the start. Now it's pitch black!
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In a couple of years probably...... 😏
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It seems this chapter builds up to the grand blow up, that I suspect is inevitable here - and which I'm very much looking forward to.....😈 The detalis could go so many ways, and that's just the thrill of it! I have a feeling, that we are in for a few surprises concerning Rita, and about the plumbing business I can think of a few options, that will let Rick come out (ha-ha) on top of the situation. Great story, Parker, so many layers - and I love it!
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Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Leo C commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Epilogue: The Promised Land
Lovely ending - without getting too sappy. Hope to see our boys again sometime. Thank you so much for yet another great story, Gary. -
Awww, that was a sweet end. Now we just need a "happily ever after" in the epilogue. Thank you so much for this very vivid period piece. Looking forward to seeing some more like this - or whatever you feel like writing..... I guess it can't really go wrong. Thank you for your fabulous work, Gary!
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Oh, heavenly bliss!! You made me a very happy man today, Gary. I'm a sucker for romance and it doesn't get better than this. Thank you!!
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if anything, this chapter showed what a good team our boys are. I just love the way they function together end complement each other. So of course they really could not and should not be without each other. Right now I think it's time for them to get a little physical to seal the deal. I think Coy is ready, and Boone just needs to give in and stop worrying. Thank you so much for this wonderful story, Gary.
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I get the feeling, that Jake may have a not so healthy possesive or jealous streak - and the means to make things very difficult for Liam. Can't wait to see, where this goes. Great Story. Thank you for sharing it.
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Yup, sure as hell very different - bot none the less brilliant. The way you manage to take a basically VERY sad story and turn it into something resembling a fairy tale is simply mind blowing. Really! Standing ovations from somewhere in Europe.
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Hey - nothing wrong with good old Abba! But I would think "Take a Chance on Me" would be more appropriate for where things are going!.....😁
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Yeah, it would seem that way! About time, too! And maybe he's not quite as good at hiding, what he wants, as he might think. I think Jerry and Cheryl - and Mrs. Lee - has him figured out already...😄. Very nice chapter indeed!
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Chapter 12 Confessions and Commandments
Leo C commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 12 Confessions and Commandments
Awww, finally things start to happen, and what a sweet ending to this chapter. Coy may be getting there, I think. Well written as always. Thanks Gary! -
Very much on she spot, Paladin. And very nice with a bit of fanfic for a change. If you're into HP fanfic - which I am - this looks very promising!
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Chapter 11 River of Dreams
Leo C commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 River of Dreams
Ohhh, how my heart aches for Boone. Been there myself until I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away. It hurt for years after that. Hope there's a happy ending somewhere for these two. Thanks again for your great work, Gary! -
Me too! Rick is starting to frustrate me, though! When is that guy gonna blow up?? But anyway, that is what a good story should do - make you feel something. This one surely does! Thank you, Parker!
