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As usual, excellent chapter. Moved the story along. Can't wait for Parker to have the Talk with his parents. I bet they **it bricks!!! Hahahaha!! Bad bad idea to have Colton working under Forrest. Bad bad idea. and who is the 'rogue' wolf? I have an idea but I'll let you prove me right. I foresee drama soon. Bring it on!!!!
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Tony does NOT need to get involved with Jared!! I want him with Marcus!! Marcus understands and is so supportive of Tony. Hook them up. Maybe Tony can introduce Jared to Brian. LOL. Glad Jen came to her senses. More, please.
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Love Tate's POV. His family is so close and they're going to love Gavin. This is such a great story.
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The only reason I think of for Shell saying what she did is maybe Curtis is her mate? and she wants to make him happy. Still sucks though. And yeah Pup, it's gonna be a long six months. I just love this story!!!
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Yay, Yum, Yay!!!! Love has come in to play...
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Woooo!!! Now that was a roller coaster of a chapter Tense, sexy, excited, and sweet. Damn I love this story.
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Better. I like this story. Hopefully, the dreams will prepare Gavin for the big reveal!!!. Love their interaction. Now on to family hour!!!
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Awwwww, you're tugging on the heartstrings. Mom and the questions and Noah slicing his finger. so funny. Any who hasn't worn a Winnie the Pooh band aid to work?? I had to wear Tweety Bird. Lol. Eli and Noah are such a sweet couple. I love them and want them to be so very happy. Mummmm... first sleepover at Eli's ...that's gonna be hot hot hot!!!!!! Now I've got to go read my other favorite couple in TPC.
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Good chapter. I like Mom's introduction. I agree with the other reviewers about Dad's comment. I think it's a thank you not a criticism. Guess we'll see the real deal in the next chapters.
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Finally! I just KNEW you hadn't forgotten this story. Thank You. Now....BRAVO!!!!! Perfect wrap up. These last two chapters were well worth waiting for. (4 w's in a row, hahaha). The solution was a gem. and Yep, Joshua is a perfect match for Mom. This is one of my favorite stories and I'll read it again. Pat yourself on the back.
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Ok. so in the next chapter, the boys kill Derek and Mom tells Noah that Eli loves him? Right? I can think of so many things that could happen to the rat bastard. (evil snicker). Love Eli's Mom...Noah won't know what hit him. Excellent story.
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To quote the Fresh Prince "Parents just don't Understand". Parker's dad means well. But good Lawd, these two are clueless and so dis-engaged from their son. And when something happens, they're be the ones standing around wondering what went wrong. Parker likes the wolf, which bodes well for his reaction when he finds out the wolf is Colton. Well, after he has the requisite Freak OUT. haha.
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Oh. Wow. sniff sniff. Nanna knew Chuck had found his One!! I finally decided to finish reading this and I loved it. All though the story I kept wondering how the porcupines were going to fit in! hee hee. Ron was an grade A Bastard. And Dewayne, grrrrrrr (my bear growl). For a first attempt this was excellent. The emotions you conveyed and the well developed characters were on point. I put off reading the last 3 chapters because I didn't want it to end. I can't wait for the sequel. Will the guys from the bar be in it, Skinny, Muffin et. al and TWINS??!!! hahaha. Bravo, Cole!!
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Yay Noah!! (doing the happy happy joy joy dance) Derek has an ego the size of the Pacific, doesn't he? He has a "I don't want you and I don't want anyone else to have you and You should be pining away for me" attitude. Bastard!!
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Final5 did you mean Trey? Cause Jed was taking pictures of his package. That counts as "i want sex" right? Anyway...I loved the chapter. Trey got Colton to as he said think with the other head. haha. First kiss in the car...awwww so high school. and hot. Shell is gonna kick somebodys butt in the morning, isn't she? hahaha
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I was actually on the other website and had bookmarked this story. LOL!! I love the start of this and I love your stories. I know I'm about to be taken on a memorable journey. Let's Go!!.
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Been following this on your website and saw today that you updated. so I'm leaving the review here. I really hope that Mark doesn't move in to his sisters home, even if it will help him save money. He needs his privacy. But not to invite other men!! ok? No cheating of Trey. hint hint. Trey and Mark are perfect for each other. I like this story and anxiously await the next chapter. Will we get a chapter on Xmas day?
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No no no no NO!!!! Sayer's a darkling?? and Birch's boss knows about the Fae realm? How? oh wait, you'll tell us. haha. So religious artifacts and words can destroy the Fae? WOW religion destroys magic. Hummmm. Interesting slant and makes sense. I've been following this on your website and was happy to find it here. So I can bounce from one place to the other. Write more. and Happy Holidays.
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This is the easiest review ever......DITTO on what everyone else said!!!! You really know what to write to get an extremely violent reaction out of us, don't cha? hee hee
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I picture Shay as similar to Daniel Radcliffe in Goblet of Fire. Dark hair and eyes, shadows of a strong jaw. In Hidden Sunlight you did say that the chamber he was in for 200 years had changed his body to it's optimum condition. Hummm, must go back and find that part. But I have been waiting on your description. And I understand your reasoning. 5'9? Ok I can see that. Fifteen is usually when teenage boys start growing overnight. Myiege, You nailed that explanation on the relationship between the Arbiters and Sharpelings. That's exactly how I view them, followers or pets. And the Big Bad seems to be very possessive. That was him who said "Betrayers" when the two new changelings stretched theirs powers and touched him.
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So much information, new characters and still no boys!!! awwww come on!!!! Politics..the bane of human existence. If only we could find a way to get rid of it. Such an evil institution. and if you think corporate greed isn't political well I've got the Hope diamond to sell for $1.00 I think that Yugan is seeing through Mira's eyes. Or Shay's. Or.... who knows..you'll tell us...eventually. right?? haha. So Konstantin is going with the new guy? Who's going to find the boys? Australia?.... ok. Mira's 6 ft. Shay's shorter. Why'd you want us to guess? You told us in Hidden Sunlight that he was hung like a porn star. Didn't you? So I figure he needs to of be a proportional height. Just saying. On to Chapter 4.....
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Like the chapter. could have been a little longer though. Good beginning introduction of Tate's family dynamics. The point of view of the "bear" on that first meeting was good. Good set up to Gavin's story. Curious as to why he said 'not willingly'. next chapter please.
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Good Lawd!! lots of drama and tension. I figured the two "girls" were the ones Shay's last blast of power touched. Did you give us a description of Yugan and his people? I'm getting that they aren't human?? hummm. anyway... Somebody nuked an entire city to kill K? WoW? Who saved his life? So the premier wasn't on the up and up? more more more. And where are the boys?????
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Whoo hooo!!! Go Noah, Go Noah Go Noah. Please please please let that be Derek. Yay, Eli!! Throw out the lists, Noah. This ones a keeper. Yum. can't wait for chapter 15.
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Oh, oh wow!!! I didn't see that ending coming. That was just the most perfect chapter. Amusing..Gay Godfathers League. lol. Well developed characters and a lot of information and depth in one chapter. Great job. Loved it immensely. Thanks. and I can't wait to meet "Buttons". cat, dog, gerbil, mouse?
