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LadyDe

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  1. First: Great chapter. Loved the introduction of the friends. Second: I was really hoping that Becca fell overboard on a cruise ship or did something not to come back, even though I don't want Shas unhappy. But really, that girl needs a tranquilizer or something. She takes the role of big sister - bigger bitch to seriously. LOL. So glad Shas and Robin put her in her place. Yay. And I laughed at the 'cold shoulder' line. Third, I didn't read the stories with Zan and his hubby. Looks like I'm going to be reading two stories of yours at once....again!
  2. I loved this story. I had started reading it when you first posted it. Two days ago I saw that you had updated it, I went back to the beginning and I'm so glad I did. Excellent story and I can't wait for the sequel. I want to know what's going to happen with the issue at the mine. Looking forward to reading it.
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    Chapter 27

    Ok, can I put a muzzle on Marjorie? Please?? I dislike her immensely and that's an understatement. So glad Tony told her about herself. Yay. Other than HER...I loved this chapter. Tony being a godfather to T & B was the perfect way to cement his position in the family. Well other than the wedding, that is . Thanks for the update.
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    Revelations

    I like this story. I'm glad you've finally given us a little insight into Joe's life. Not liking Brandon at all, but I guess somebody has to be the a**hole in the story, right? One criticism though, the pacing feels a little rushed. You went from them having a great time on Sunday to Wednesday in a few words and I felt like I was missing something, like what did Rex think about. Was he worried that Joe wasn't serious? Rex seems to be a little too accepting. He thinks a question but doesn't follow through. He commented mentally on Joe's 'you and me' phrasing but didn't ask for clarification, he just noted it. Shouldn't he have asked Joe what he meant? or angst-ed over it for a while? But this is your first story and I do like it and I've got a faith that you'll get much better. Keep writing cause I want to know if Rex really is psychic and is Brandon going to try to hurt them. Will we meet more of Joe's family or Rex's friends and co-workers?
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    Once Upon A Time

    Loved Loved LOVED this last chapter of a wonderful story. Thank you Sasha. Even though we never found that voodoo magic. It worked and showed the Power of Love. They found a way to make their relationship work, flourish and turn into a career!! Bravo, Sasha, Bravo!! So what wonderful journey are you taking your readers on next?? I ready to go!!
  6. Awwww so sweet! Kier falling in love and Sparrow knows him so well and before they made love. Oh to have a relationship such as theirs. (deep fluttery sigh) Shadow being told to stay was funny. And can I be Madam Secretary for GUOR???
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting start. I think Joe's bipolar or just really, really confused!! So, let's see where this goes, hummm? And why didn't Brandon's wife take the kids with her instead of leaving them with a drunk who ends up in jail every time he pulls the tab on a beer? Just saying....
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    Chapter 2

    Thanks for the update. But I'm a little confused. Does Robert know David? He's a little, ok, a lot pushy. Who asks such personal information on a first meeting? Or maybe it's just me? Anyway, can't wait to see how this is going to turn out. The ex's getting together.....
  9. So Alexander didn't always think Oli's drawing skills were worthless. Will we find out what made him change into the person he is now? So glad Oli told someone about his feelings for Boris. Great chapter!!!
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    Chapter 36

    Great ending to a wonderful story!! Thanks, Rob.
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    Chapter 26

    First just let me say....I'm freakin' HUNGRY!!! Okay, now Marjorie redeemed herself to me. So I'll put away the pitchfork I had sharpened. LOL. Wonderful chapter. And brief history between Amy, Marcus and Danni was sweet. The solution for caterers was perfect. It just fit. Yay.
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    Chapter 40

    I agree with everyone else!!! (that way I don't have to write a lot ). Glad Yuri is getting his memories back. Could the doctor's find a cure or treatment for Peten's mate? Wednesday is so far away. LOL. Will there be another Cathera story after this one ends (in two years, smile)?
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    Chapter 1

    Promising start. Looking forward to what comes next. But I do see what's coming. Hummmm???
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    Chapter 11

    Clap Clap Bravo I absolutely adored how you wrapped this all up. Great plot, ending with everything neatly tied up and a wonderful happy wedding. Toshi deserved his 'rescued life". for giving sharing these unforgettable characters!!!
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    Awkward Coupling

    Oh WOW!! Lovely chapter but ....poor Oli. I'm getting an idea for a career that will involve both of them and possibly bring fame. Hummmmm. ideas, ideas.
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    Chapter 25

    Loved the chapter until the Mother in Law from Hell showed up. Do we really need her? Anyway, will Tony ever find out how much the settlement was? If he doesn't want to know, tell me. lol
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    Shaking Hips

    What Headstall said so beautifully
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    Chapter 10

    Revenge?? for falling in love with another woman, you kidnap his son and raise him? Really?? Wow. Twisted Sister for real. Very intense chapter. Loved it. Mom's not some fragile lotus blossom is she?
  19. Sweet and sad. Oli needs to find a werewolf with ancient knowledge. There has got to be a solution to this puzzle you've created. Loved seeing Kier and Robin. Kind of a glimpse of the very near future for them??
  20. Bittersweet chapter!! Very emotional and a year can seem so long but actually it flys by. Will Mark's Dad be a douchebag or will time and grief soften him? Hummmmmm....
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    Chapter 24

    Sweet chapter. Poor Keith. Can we find him somebody wonderful .... soon? Like for Valentines Day? Sarah and Jen??? Didn't see that one coming.
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    Chapter 37

    Great chapter!! Now lets get everybody home. Is Benny getting a headache because he's away from Yuri?
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    Chapter 15

    That was rough to read. Like really rough. Creepy and awful but ended on a hopeful and determined note. Great writing!!
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    Chapter 35

    Yes, Yes YES!! Derek finally got the message. Sweet! The door has closed. Yay Noah.
  25. You know I've figured out that in each of your stories that I've read, there is a person I wanna just bitch slap!!! Becca pushed all my buttons and then she had the nerve to touch Suk. and tell Kieran to move out!!! Has she lost her mind? ok ok trying to calm down. Loving the maturation of a player as he falls in love. Kieran's starting to want to be vulnerable with Robin. The ending was really really sweet. Go Robin Go!!
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