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I picture Shay as similar to Daniel Radcliffe in Goblet of Fire. Dark hair and eyes, shadows of a strong jaw. In Hidden Sunlight you did say that the chamber he was in for 200 years had changed his body to it's optimum condition. Hummm, must go back and find that part. But I have been waiting on your description. And I understand your reasoning. 5'9? Ok I can see that. Fifteen is usually when teenage boys start growing overnight. Myiege, You nailed that explanation on the relationship between the Arbiters and Sharpelings. That's exactly how I view them, followers or pets. And the Big Bad seems to be very possessive. That was him who said "Betrayers" when the two new changelings stretched theirs powers and touched him.
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So much information, new characters and still no boys!!! awwww come on!!!! Politics..the bane of human existence. If only we could find a way to get rid of it. Such an evil institution. and if you think corporate greed isn't political well I've got the Hope diamond to sell for $1.00 I think that Yugan is seeing through Mira's eyes. Or Shay's. Or.... who knows..you'll tell us...eventually. right?? haha. So Konstantin is going with the new guy? Who's going to find the boys? Australia?.... ok. Mira's 6 ft. Shay's shorter. Why'd you want us to guess? You told us in Hidden Sunlight that he was hung like a porn star. Didn't you? So I figure he needs to of be a proportional height. Just saying. On to Chapter 4.....
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Like the chapter. could have been a little longer though. Good beginning introduction of Tate's family dynamics. The point of view of the "bear" on that first meeting was good. Good set up to Gavin's story. Curious as to why he said 'not willingly'. next chapter please.
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Good Lawd!! lots of drama and tension. I figured the two "girls" were the ones Shay's last blast of power touched. Did you give us a description of Yugan and his people? I'm getting that they aren't human?? hummm. anyway... Somebody nuked an entire city to kill K? WoW? Who saved his life? So the premier wasn't on the up and up? more more more. And where are the boys?????
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Whoo hooo!!! Go Noah, Go Noah Go Noah. Please please please let that be Derek. Yay, Eli!! Throw out the lists, Noah. This ones a keeper. Yum. can't wait for chapter 15.
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Oh, oh wow!!! I didn't see that ending coming. That was just the most perfect chapter. Amusing..Gay Godfathers League. lol. Well developed characters and a lot of information and depth in one chapter. Great job. Loved it immensely. Thanks. and I can't wait to meet "Buttons". cat, dog, gerbil, mouse?
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Well Halle-damn-lujah!! Been waiting and waiting! And it was so o o worth it! Three scenes, three stories and you're going to take your time telling us what the link is!!! hahaha What a way to start. Russia and Konstantin..didn't even think of his story. The emotion you conveyed...well lets just say you got me. sniff sniff. Ok Mr Storyteller, I'm along for the ride!
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Interesting story. So if the building magical? Who's the red haired guy? Yeah I'd like to read Jeb's story.
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Maybe I missed it but why do you have a 1000 word limit? Just asking. Great chapter, I like that Noah's re-writing the Perfect Man list. I'll be so glad when he moves. Moving out of an unhappy house does a lot for the spirit. voice of experience speaking. Eli as a Spartan? Yeah, that works for me as the best Halloween costume ever!!
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Bravo!!! Great job! I loved the ending. So glad Ari passed the exam. Would have sucked eggs if God couldn't pass a test!!! LOL. So glad the birds found them, I missed them. So the Holy Trinity is really in charge now. Let the fun begin..... Anyway...Thanks for this wonderful story. Will there be anymore Wednesday Briefs? Let us know if you expand and publish. Good luck with that. Next story??? Soon????
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Fitz!!!! How could you?? WTF?? I'm so upset. again....WTF???? Who is Mike? Where is Scott? I know you'll tell us in your own wonderful way and in your own sweet time but seriously... no Scott??? after everything we (yes, we) went through. Oh the pain, the pain.I wanna cry, but it's late and I have to go to sleep. Oh yeah, I live in Atlanta...are you here too?? I don't have a sniper rifle ... but.... LOL. ok you can live, cause you've got to make this right.
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Ok, I was reading this on your website...now it's here!! Actually I'm finding your stories everywhere. Yay!! I love your imagination. You never disappoint. Why hadn't anyone else thought about where the Darkness is coming from? I like Birch and Sawyer and I just know there's going to be serious drama later, right? No other questions ... well not right now. haha. Looking forward to next Wednesday.
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Chapter 51 Three in a Bed II
LadyDe commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 51 Three in a Bed II
Now that was just too sweet!! They are so perfect together...oh wait...They're God, supposed to be perfect. So was this the end??? By the way, I love your stories. -
Sniff....sniff...bawwwwwwwwwwwww! This chapter darn near broke me. But I have faith that they will handle the tough months ahead. But damn...this chapter...tearjerker. I love this story and the characters are all so interesting and real. Good job!!!
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Chapter 50 - Three in a Bed Pt 1
LadyDe commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 50 - Three in a Bed Pt 1
Oooooooo. Mmmmmm. Yeah..bring it on!! Go, guys,Go!! on to pt.2. Wednesday Briefs rock. You and the other Wednesday Briefs authors are AWESOME!! -
Sniff, Bravo,Sniff,Sniff! This has been the most emotional story I've read in a long long time. Forget the tissue, I used a towel. haha. These characters are so real, that I cheered when good things happened and cried when it all went downhill. Zach was just too precious for words. The chin tapping....priceless!!! Noah at 30? This is gonna be. Can't wait to read and review Moving Forward. And I'll keep my towel ready!! Thank you for sharing.
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Whew, I finally caught up with you!! I absolutely adore this story! Plus, I'm a native Atlantan and still live here. This story grabbed me a few months ago and won't let me go. I love Noah and Scott. And Zach and Beso are so sweet. You know, you could give us a short about Zach...the college years.hint hint. So happy that you've got the second story outlined. but just 15 chapters, yeah right. hahaha. Now, is it gonna be about Scott and Steve or Scott and Noah? Any way, thank you for gifting us with this tale. You're a wonderful storyteller. (ok, sheepishly slinks away after gushing)
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LOL!!!! Ari is a klutz! There was an old episode of the Twilight Zone that had a plot line similar to this .... Earth was a playhouse for a little alien. "I think I accidentally created the Trinity". Oops! So he's really going to leave them in charge, right? This story keeps getting twistier and twistier. Love it.
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Oh WOW!!! Boy-GOD-Alien Scientist-bringer of Life to Earth-Oops, sorry T-Rex! LOL hilarious. I kinda figured the white haired boy was God, but the alien scientist experiment part, I didn't see coming. And he wants them to take over his job???? Whoa!! We've come a long long way from hitting a man on a dark road, haven't we? I love it!
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Chapter 43 - Through the Looking Glass
LadyDe commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 43 - Through the Looking Glass
Well, unlike the other two reviewers, I saw this coming!!! It's not either or... but both Right?? I loved this chapter...of course. Keep 'em coming. and Thank You. -
I don't know whether to fan myself or bawl my eyes out! Awwww Michael. What a way to tell someone you love 'em and want them. Awesome chapter, freaking awesome
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Bravo!!! This is one of the best stories I've ever read. And I've been reading for a long long time. I love scifi and this had the most amazing plot!! I don't know where to start. You were able to have me emotionally invested in the characters as soon as they appeared. And really upset when they died. And Mira?!! (big sigh) If you've got the plots now for part two, go ahead and start writing. I want, no, need to know when they get to Earth. You made it sound like Earth was expecting them or something. And the two who woke up?? Don't make us wait too long!!!! Oh and thanks for the trivia. I love extras. You write 'em, I'll read 'em.
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Just found this story and now I'm hooked.I like it so far. What an interesting chapter. Now why didn't the professor stop the cousin when she started talking? And who was Camille talking to? Is December more than he appears? Please update. It's been a month......sooooooooooo
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Chapter 41 - Nothing Is As It Seems
LadyDe commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 41 - Nothing Is As It Seems
Nothing is as it seems.....the boy kept repeating it. So I'm thinking that Pasha and Gabriel need to look at everything with a metaphorical grain of salt. Whew. tension. Thanks for the new chapters. Much appreciated. -
Great chapter!! Asher may need some counseling in the future. Watching daytime tv with his Mom was a nice touch. Been there. lol. Yeah, don't download porn...no matter how interesting it looks. Hee-Hee!! STD....too too funny.
