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I wonder if Oscar feels like he is in an undertow and can't get out. Though I do agree with Jean they weren't much of a group of friends if they could turn that fast without even an explanation.

Wow so the breaking rules, having sex with a male and not being allowed back to school til Monday was nothing he got bent out of shape because his son was gullible. Somebody is very twisted. I feel bad for Oscar to have those people for parents ts

Vindictive...was high school really like this....oh well he should beware of the old adage " you will reap what you sow". He thinks he has everything...but if he isn't careful he well end up with nothing.

What a beautiful chapter. It had so many emotions thoughts and feelings know it. And hearing from the different points of view just made kt extra special. Each POV gave us just that different perspective of those two days. What they seen and what made that time special for them. From John and Drew's conversation and night activities which showed the acceptance of both brothers view of their own sexuality. The love and sensitivity of Mr. Hundser as he dealt with issues in his sons lives. The fact that he dealt with his sons separately and in a unique way for each boys shows just how much he did love them. We got a small peek into Derrick and saw how the love and companionship of this special family and friends can save and protect him. How Mrs.Hundser gave Prez that last final piece of his mum with the animal shaped gifts. Something that could have been overlooked but gave Prez that final soft touch of his mother. And lastly Rush, how many adopted families would give a puppy for a gift. this chapter was a beautiful culmination of love, laughter and acceptance and brought tears to my eyes.

Awwwww did you have to stop the chapter right there??? another hot chapter, sauna hot. You described Zupan's first time so eloquently . The descriptions of what he was doing to Zander as well as his internal dialogue to himself at what he was doing, was done so well. It gave us a peak into the confident, often brash Zu, showing a vulnerability that enhanced rather than detracted from the experience. And don't forget Zander's his vulnerability to being unclothed in front of zu and the emotional response to Zu's lovemaking. This chapter was beautiful in that you have the vulnerability of the first time, the bliss and complete satisfaction of giving and receiving a mind blowing orgasm. Then the chapter closes on a hint timidity and reassurance. A very beautiful but to short chapter.

I like the beginning. Both men have troubled backgrounds. Though I did think it odd that in the descriptions of both men Jo never noticed the swelling and bruising on Jeremy's face. I like the fact that you gave enough background to catch my interest but not enough to fulfill it and not wanting to to read on. Looks to be an interesting story looking forward to reading more.

Actually to be serious what you eat or do during porn is a response to pornography. Think about he's we were joking about the popcorn and Popsicles but it was still a response. When your watching porn do you use sex toys, does it put you in the mood for them? Me know but others maybe, same with the food.. Bit of a stretch but same idea. You never really clarified the response or if you did I missed it. Just a thought. Actually to be serious what you eat or do during porn is a response to pornography. Think about he's we were joking about the popcorn and Popsicles but it was still a response. When your watching porn do you use sex toys, does it put you in the mood for them? Me know but others maybe, same with the food.. Bit of a stretch but same idea. You never really clarified the response or if you did I missed it. Just a thought.

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Personally I think a popsicle is more apt for reading porn. Popcorn has to many crunchy bits. Popsicle or an ice cream corn can get you in the mood...rofl

I think Bill Was is right there will always be something. Think back to just in America. You had the controversy between Native Americans and the people who came to America. Now move ahead to the Yankees and the southerners, then the black and white issue. Now you have the Gay verses the straight. There will always be something , when the computer age came how many people were up in arms about that. Irregardless of the ticket it comes down to a lot of people have their own comfort zone and don't like leaving it. Some literally are dragged out of it kicking and screaming but eventually once people realize it really isn't that bad the majority do accept it. Now there will always be naysayers and even violent protesters but for the most part people move on to the next new thing and get up in your face about that. think of it like a stone dropped in a pool of water, it causes ripples that disturb the surface of the water. But eventually regardless of the size of the stone, the ripples die down and the surface calms until the next stone is dropped. The gay stone just created a few more waves but eventually they will die down as well.

What a beautiful chapter. Then love from Keith and his family has helped Prez so much. He was even able to get his drivers license. Which I'm not sure if I would have been able to in those circumstances. It's hard to believe that it was the two boys talking with Drew about his sexuality and not the father. Which I'm quite sure Mr.Hundser greatly appreciated. I hope soln that there is a solution to Derricks predicament. That is no way for a teenager to live. I really hope that the love and comfort that Mike, Derrick and the Hundser family can get Prez through the Christmas season as well as they did the thanksgiving holiday. That will be a hard day I think.

I'm sure there is good stuff out there but for the most part it scripted nonsense. Put tab A in slot B moan. Rub C moan turn this way get my drift. At least with written stuff your imagination can smooth out the blanks and personalize it.....and no butt-pimples. Sorry Cia that just struck my funny bone to much to leave out.

Yes finally a break through Jason and Travis are talking. And I was right something did happen between Travis and his father hmmm want to know more there. Breakthrough in tbe case to. I'm not sure what the father has to do with it, something still isn't right there. I think Travis is right though Mike is covering for someone, just not sure quite yet if ig is a tually his father or not. The are still missing one piece of the puzzle. I love this story and I need more please!! There just something about the vulnerability in Travis that catches my heart. That and really the group is growing from Jason's boss, his own son now one of his detectives all want to see them together. Gotta have more please .

Hmm Vincent is trying his hardest to keep Haje safe. I sorta understand Haje thinking Vincent hasn't exactly been forthcoming with his plans. Something tells me that getting in touch with Kevin may not be a good idea. Is Jaxton a bad guy, what about Vivian, Shin was arguing with her just before he was murdered. Right now the foundation is looking bad but is it the who,etc foundation or just key people.. This is getting curiouser and curiouser. Please don't make us what so long for next chapter.

Caleb is getting antsy. Rhyder seems so innocent, Sam is ignoring it and Caleb is getting jealous. It seems like a no win situation now we add Jase into the mix and things are going to go hyper. Caleb says Jase is a player which means heartache for either Rhyder or Jase or possibly both. I really like Rhyder he reminds me of a cute little puppy that just wants attention, I just hope he doesn't get hurt and grow up to fast..only time and Sasha will tell.

Whoa another hot chapter. Frothy pink drinks and ribs who would of thought sexuality foreplay. Hmmmmm but ive caught onto you sasha you love to string us along with hot steamy come hither chapters...them boom stop us cold with a trouble ahead. And something tells. Even the trouble comes from Zu and probably something to do with his disability. But I'm really hoping I'm wrong...hopefully they have dessert first....

Ooooh I like the sound of this.. You are just vague enough with descriptions to get me intrigued. Dice sounds otherworldly with the speed, the skin glowing thru the rips in his clothes. That and he dropped just enough hints to tell me that he is probable supernatural origin. Interesting how Trent is described by both boys as a troll, specially since neither boy said it out loud till after Trent was immobilized and on the floor. Should. Even interesting mess left with trends vomit on the floor him out cold and the majority of the locker spilled all over the floor. You have me intrigues with this I'm caught hook, line and sinker. Can't wait for the next chapter

Omg "butt-pimples". Well inever was one for watching porn before, that pretty much finished it for me there.

Well when I was a teenager they were just starting to bring out computers, hardly any had home computers and the Internet if it even existed then was nothing like it is now. So it was quite a while before I seen porn but mostly I thought it was hilarious. Yeah not your usual response eh?. But it was just so obvious it was pretend, there wasn't anything real about it. Maybe it had something to do with the generation I grew up in, the fact that I was married I don't know but visual porn just made me laugh, never really got into it. But erotic stories and other written pornography was totally different. And I don't mean the magazines like Playgirl/boy that's to me ks the same as videos and stuff. I've always loved to read I'm basically a loner somewhat of a thinker. It's hard to explain but what I read I see as pictures so when I read the stories here and on other sites I can just picture what's happening but it's so much more natural, using the writers descriptions and what I see,or get from the story. Not only that but after reading what Zu went thru trying to research that would just put a wet towel on anything. I think I will stick with the written word and let my brain put the story into pictures, corny as it sounds. My problem is keeping the reviews clean lol, cause I have to admit you writers can make my brain steam up like crazy....so that is my take on porn

HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Wow Prez is not the only one who has done a lot of growing up in the last month. How many hormonal teenagers would be able to talk with a younger brother like Keith did. This whole chapter showed just how much these two sixteen year Olds had grown up. Yes the sex was there but the love, tenderness and compassion they had for each other was front and center. The fact that tbru the chapter Keiths thoughts were on the changes in his life the Prez had wrought. The future plans, university, all the things he never thought or even wanted but now was planning. His talk with Drew, how many other brothers would show then the need for keeping his best friend over the need to make himself comfortable, how many teenagers understand the concept of middle ground instead of all for me. Look at Keith himself a couple of weeks ago you could take get him to even think about singing now with a bit of persuasion he is singing and moving to the songs. Love is the best miracle worker in the world for all ages. Beautiful chapter, the peak into the pysche of the guys, ,eating us see how a chance meeting and the promised of love can change so many lives. looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm actually sorry to see this end, but it is time. The ending was perfect I like the way you broke it up. The father admitting that the dark order was defeated, but they still managed to get away. They kept saying they weren't worried about Jason that there was no way they could be defeated, yet they still,let had a elaborate get away plan. With minutes to spare what we're the odds than the one drug that Jason was given to counteract the dreams was the one drug out of thousands that they used for password.. Excellent story from start to finish. Sad thing is that Antoine will most likely get the credit for saving the world when all he did was get a conscience, Jason and his team did the work and stopped it. But probably just as well who would actually believe what really happened. Looking forward to your next story.

Great chapter, the description of the emotions a day feeling some of them were going thru really brought the words to life. The flash, the excitement, the movement was all there. I did think it was funny though the derogatory comments about the jv team because they tried to do the same thing that the varsity team did to them. Then to turn around and step in their food without a thought. Which was inconsiderate considering the fact that not a few minutes ago he was worried about not being good able to get something to eat himself. Wonder if these guys have heard the adage "pride before a fall". Great chapter looking forward to the next one.

I love the title "Straight-ish Guys". Is that anything like "somewhat pregnant". I can see Zu's point, if I had ever to sit all day I would not want to wear zippers and buttons on heavy jeans. But I also understand Isaac's point of him getting lazy only wearing elastic waisted sweat pants and hoodies. a happy medium between the two points of view os good. Lol and his choice lf restaurant and reasoning behind it is funny. The mobility option is common sense but it's pretty bad when you have to really narrow your options because of past dates. I'm actually not sure which is taking Zu out of his comfortable zone more, the fact that Zander iis a guy or whether Zu is going past his usual wham vampire thank you ma'am in sweat suig style apparel. Now he has to think of what he wants to look like and he's thinking of what his choices will reflect like on Zander. I don't think Zu has done that before, that I think is screwing with Zu's head more than the gender of his date. I also think Zu could take some of those lessons Bay had to learn about being Gay and applying it to himself and being disabled. His comment about his height gave it away, sure he may be a giant of over six feet, but sitting in a chair in front of a high counter he isn't as noticeable. Zu and Bay are a lot more alike than they realize. Good chapter can't wait for the date!!

Don't know about about the lightening but the rest of the chapter was hot and steamy, but to short.