Daithi
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Really u sure this is the same kid from the start of the story. He seems so different a lot of the vindictiveness is gone....wonder how long it will last though.
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Chapter 10 Varsity Letters
Daithi commented on flawlesss's story chapter in Chapter 10 Varsity Letters
LOL he doesn't know if he is coming or going with Kenyon -
Your chapters are way to short. You also have this niggling little bad habit of just getting to the meat of the issue then adding those dreaded three words.....to be continued...and the doesn't always soothe away that fact lmao
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Liked the little lighthearted chapter to kinda get the focus off of the court case. The boys needed a laugh to take their minds off of the legal crap lol. I would love to hear about some of those escapades, the broiling in butter sounds particularly painful but very funny. Nice light chapter.
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Haha Keith is not the one I expected to get jealous and then to finally figured out why that was too funny. Great chapter very funny chapter.
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY MANN
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Confused, Bothered And Bewildered
Daithi commented on TheEggman's story chapter in Confused, Bothered And Bewildered
Wow I can't believe they got Prez to wear a speedo lol. I can just imagine a half hour of hiccups poor Keith. Great chapter. -
I'm glad John's birthday party went so well. Wonder what was upper with those same five boys staring at Keith and Prez all the time. Wonder if they want to start a band too lol. Great chapter had a lot of interesting things going on all the time. The notes from the girls were interesting guess they didnt like having four boys all at once taken off the high school market huh?
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Wow guess they don't have to worry about getting outed. I love the fact they get suspect dedicated for a week for defending themselves against a knife attack. At least they weren't charged for the damage they did to the other side. And way to go Keith!! Theoretically cause you know your not supposed to fight lol.
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She might be a bit stubborn but at least Jackie has good manners . Though I do feel sorry for the interrogation he will have to go through later. And he still didn't get his apple fritter.
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Wow I can't believe that Bay was so well behaved with those guys. But I guess beating them up badly would be overkill since they are now going to have to travel to a different city to go to a bar. Lol superficial bruises and messed up hair....the horror. Wine doesn't have a taste... That a good one Sasha. Hahaha
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K74 is getting trickier and trickier each time. So far Wirrin has been able to beat them at their own tricks. But how long is he going to be able to do this. Hopefully this final one isn't a trick he missed and the leaders are the actual people who want to talk to them and not another trap
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Wonder if it's another section of the company like maybe Levin...he would have had time to cut brake lines while Haje was in the drs. So many what ifs but thankfully Vincent is on the ball
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LOL there is never a calm time know the life of a teenager. I'm glad that they can flow thru all the minor problems they have. This really is a great story, the love and the support system that this family has is phenomenal. It's amazing what can come of an out of the blue decision to give directions to a lost boy.
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This was a fantastic story and i am so happy to see that you plan on revisiting it again. I want to see what happens to Shay, Mira and Konstantin. I also want to see what happens to Lucerne and how it will recover. This is an amazing story and I'm sorry to see it finished, but hopefully we will be able to come back and read obout upcoming adventures of this trio.. Shay is coming home and Konstantin finally gets to see earth. The perfect ending.
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I understand Shay's outburst he has lost everybody he has cared about but Mira. He may be a superhero in some ways but he is still a teenager at heart. I'm not surprised atbthen going to earth, that's where the story started that's where it should finish.
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Chapter 42 Down The Rabbit Hole
Daithi commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 42 Down The Rabbit Hole
Eventually they will have to run out of doors and find the one with Uzzy behind it the question is will always, three survive them? At least hopefully that is the bond that Pasha is picking up meaning that Uzzy is still alive and close by. I guess all we can do is wait and see -
Amazing chapter. I loved his answer to Hartley's plea. But they still have enough to finish this and deal with Tigresse because her ego won't allow her to flee for long I don't imagine.
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Mmmmmmmm Internet does have its uses. And I'm sure when Zander comes back into his body and can string more than two or three intelligible words together he will agree. Btw you might want to get some ice on your fingers cause if your keyboard is sizzling like that chapter did then you have scorched fingertips. Really hot and sexy chapter and I never really appreciated the colour pink before..think it has all new connotations now. love the interaction between all the guys, gay, straight, jocks and twinks might be the labels but now the group is just friends no labels needed.
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It's a given you can only hide for so long, and when you have a love as deep as theirs that cuts the time in half. Doug and Brian seen that, that's why their talk that afternoon. Stepping up and facing it takes alot of the "oh god, what now?" out of it also puts the people trying to hurt you on the defensive. Better to be playing on a full footing with confidence then trying to catch up from behind the eightball at a disadvantage. Works whether your 55,25,17 . Has nothing to do with age but confidence, security, and net of love and protection backing you up. I love this story and this chapter was great.
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I hope Zander doesn't change to much. That he didn't take Zoltan's. "pretty boy" comment to much to heart. The new hairstyles brings out the masculine. Rather than the fluff in him. Too bad he didn't add some ice into that water lol. Noticed how close Bay got to the situation, be isn't gay its just Zander. Zander must have some powerful mojo!!!! Great chapter more please and the kitten thanks hours for making it a bit longer lol
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Hard to believe these boys are as young as they are they are more mature than some twenty years Olds. Not sure I'm enamoured of the four way or that Prez will handle it all that well but we will see.
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You have got to do something about these short chapters. You just get things going good and Bam the chapters done. This was a good one. I think Zander has the best seats in the house.
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Damn KC you just aren't going to give the guy a break are you. He's in the wrong spot at the wrong time gets blown away cause he the guy with the gun shot the wrong person. Now he is going to have his life paraded before the courts for no reason other than the its the politics of the game. Add to that the guy he loves is straight and drooling over a women. Sheesh are you sure there isn't anything else you can do to Asher?..though I gave to admit the telling of dirty laundry on Ash cause the guy could shoot straight is a good one. If nothing else KC you like to make things interesting.
