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I don't think the murder case ks the only thing heating up lol. Would love to be a fly on the other side of that mirrored wall. I know Travis opened up a new lead but I don't think that's what set him off afterwards. It was something to do with the father's reaction. I'm guessing Travis and his father have issues. Between Travis's lack of filter between mouth and day brain, and the reaction with the father's and to Mallory's comment leads me to believe everything that Travis doesn't have enough a year close friends or family. Too many hints and comments leads me to think there is a lot going on with the new officer than he is letting on. Let's home Jason and his son can. Change that. Great chapter. Oh I know Mallory's still think Mike killed tiffany, but I don't think so specially after that interview. But we will see.

Ugh!! The suspense why are you drawing it out, so many paths to follow. Jason and the guys, the father in control, Antoine rethinking and possible suicidal, the daughter eager to kill then the countdown to the end. Will the program finish in time, will they escape the killers on there way to kill then? This story has totally not what I have been. Expecting, which,etc it has but hasn't. I've really enjoyed so many twists and turns. But now we are getting down to the nitty gritty, I can't wait. Great chapter Dolores.

Somehow after reading that chapter is don't think Zu has a problem with two cocks know tbe room, but I think only if it was his and Zander. I'm pretty sure the effect on Zu wouldn't be the same with anyone else. Now as to the chapter omg hot,steamy, oo la la. There is humour there though with the first seven million bites, then the small print boring words. The descriptive words and feelings you gave as Zu did his research made this chapter very intimate, warm and very very personal. Yes kt was research but it wasn't the cold clinical research that some attribute to porn. Zu only saw him and Zander, he a,IED what he saw and learned to the two of them. You excel at making something that can be cold and emotionless become something warm with feeling. Can't wait for the date.

I'm surprised at Matt, I understand the comforting of Keith but I didn't expect that far. Andy I'm not in his mind sex is the only thing real, if he can get sex than he can forget about everything else. He is going to have a very hard down to hoe for a long time to come. I hope he is strong enough to handle it.

Stages of grief are he'll on a grownup I can only imagine what they must be like while dealing with teenagers hormones on top of that. It's so frustrating to have good days where you think it's getting better then boom a word, a song on the radio or as in Prestons case passing a place in town will send you back to start all over again. Thankfully he has an Awesome support system in place, granted none of its family or rather biological family anyway. Sometimes I'm amazed at just how mature these guys are, how many teenagers would know the difference between fucking a day making love. Enjoying this story so much, great chapter so many emotions and feelings in it.

Poor Travis doesn't know what to think, so confused. The more you write the more I want of this story. I love the push/pull interaction between these two men. When you first meet Travis he's portrayed as a flirty hot little guy, but this chapter you find out that he spends more time alone than with a companion. His comment of him being use to sitting alone tells you that. With Travis what you see isn't what you get, think Jason caught the first inkling of that tonight. Okay as pushy as it may seem you need longer chapters or more of them , can't get enough of this story.

Wow security and love really matured Bay. I think Bay took a few lessons from Zu hehe. Rather than telling him stuff he asked so Zu had to think. I love the "don't tell Isaac. I said this, but watch porn" so very Bay. I like the way Bay gets Zu to focus not on whether he wants Zander but on whether he will be able to handle a guy. I wonder how many friends would think to look at the root of the problem rather than the superficial layer.as much as he likes Zander if he can't handle Zander being a guy all the way thru it won't do any good. Bay may be young but he is smart. Love this chapter, the total reversal in the guys. Now Bay is the go to guy for answers, and Zu is meddling around lost in what abouts and what if questions.

Antoine woke up to smell the roses but did he wake up in time. Interesting that they weren't all that worried about Jason, but now they are scurrying to kill him. Why don't they have faith in there virus, they keep saying that he can't hurt them its to late. But they are off to kill them, guess they aren't as confident as they thought eh?. Great chapter.

Hmmm a 12 year old matchmaker for his gay father, priceless. I think it's even better that the father is falling for it. He doesn't seem as adverse to Travis as he was guess absence does make the heart grow fonder. This story just gets better and better

President is sitting lucky to have a family that loves him so much. I can't believer his aunt and uncle, how could you leave a teenager to do all that alone. Both boys grew up so fast in those weeks, I don't know how many teenagers would have the strength and maturity they showed. I like the changes they made to the bedroom, just subtle ones but huge in there relationship. Reminder don't me never to get in the wrong side of those boys, I'm not sure which trick was worse lol. I'm so happy that Preston made it thru those weeks and came out the other side the same sweet boy, just a little more mature a day a little tougher. Great chapter looking forward to the next

Man teenagers can be snarky lol. Interesting chapter quite different from a lot over read. It's showing me a side of high school I never really saw. Very narcissistic, selfish, but then there is the sorta normal everyday things that just kinda sneak in. Good chapter.

I remember my review from last chapter, I said there would be a bump in the road. This wasn't a bump, not really a mountain but something in between. Preston was always strong but he is stronger than I even gave him credit for. That nightmare would have broke most people. To lose your mother, you lover and his family. Then find yourself back with person that made your life a monotone of no feeling and no life. at least when he woke up he still had Keith and his family. I'm not sure if it's the chapter itself that is so chilling or the fact that it came so out of the blue. Last chapter they were together, they were working out school, work and home life. Preston lost him mum but the three months that he had with her by himself will stay with him for ever. He still has Keith and his family, Derrick andMike. I can't say I liked this chapter as much help as the others, but I can say this chapter made me think and feel more than the others. Will there be more I hope so not sure I'm ready to give everyone up Keith and Preston, but if it is the end then it was a good story.

Caleb started off mean to teach a lesson, I think Caleb was the one to learn. Amazing how much Rhyder learned in two days. Caleb might seem harsh and moody but he's a really good guy. I also didn't miss that the few words of praise from Sam boosted Rhyder more than anything in the last two days had done. I think Rhyder is lonely, I think Sam was the first person in a long time to actually see Rhyder as a individual rather than more than shadow of his sister or family. It's going to take a bit to break that bond, hero worship however you want to describe it. Great chapter, I actually learned a few things myself....next chapter please hehe.

Down to the last bit of time, the suspended is ramping up. Even I have to admit thst it is a bit weird that all this up to date, computer hacking, car chases, intrigue started just days ago with bad dreams. That desperation from lack of drs help got Jason and Leonard together and things have flown from this. From a rolled up scroll, to escape by horseback and death in a cell to computers, expensive cars and possible world annihilation by virus. It's been a thousand years now we are down to the last few hours. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.

I thought it would similiar to creamed of wheat.

He might look like a hot twink but he has quite a brain to go with the looks. I think once everyone else sees beyond the looks and the unfiltered mouth I think his esteem in the ranks will rise. Would love to have everything been a fly ln the wall during that phonecall with his sister lmao. Love the story specially the interaction between the detectives, quite different than the usual cast of cops. Waiting on tenterhooks for next installment hehe

Good start to the story, love the mom not to enamored of the father. Lol

I loved twinkies when I was a kid, nice treat for the lunch box. Now they sorta taste like oil byproduct with a latex foam shell. Growing up sucks sometimes lol.

Oo I like Corey. How many twelve years older dare tease their father because another man likes his dad and it's shaking his dad up. Poor, poor dad he doesn't stand a chance with his son and his boss against. Yep I am definitely liking this story a lot

Well it's nice to see that vindictiveness isn't only a female cheerleading trait. I have to admit the throwing the ball to the woods was so much better than attempting to damage a player. Chapters like remind me of why high school was not one of my favourite eras lol. So I like Ambers thinking, perfectly acceptable to blindside a spectator with a football, possibly doing damage, blinding or even killing a person if that ball had hit the right spot on his temple. But it was the alright to show that same person up as a jerk and throwing the ball safely outside of play. Definitely mature and her reaction at practice proves it. LOL kids

I really really like karaoke therapy. I'm glad Will and Jason hit it off. I didn't like what Will did bjt he doesn't deserve someone as well. But keep think the hero of the night was Suze and Tom giving Sarah her comeuppance. I'm not really into public humiliation but for some special people I agree wholeheartedly. I'm not sure who had the best performance. Noah's love song that brought tears to his eyes or the erotica dance that almost created a fire. The night was special for everyone. Really really enjoyed this chapter.

I read so much andretty much anything. I start off with the blurb if it catches my interest in read the story. Kf I liked the story I read everything I can by that author. I told a friend I'm like a literary locust I devour everything by that author then move onto the next. When I'm all caught up on the stories here I will open the longest series tab and scroll thru those stories. Lol have ever read so many of them already I'm down to short stories and unfinished ones. I love romance, love story, drama supernatural. Not enamored of historical or horror, but if I'm bored and have nothing else I will read that too. If the author did something I didn't like I will flick to another story, but eventually always come back and finish. Something to do with curiosity and the cat I suppose. So to make a long story short basically I go by author, length, genre or just boredom. To a person that can read about a hundred books a month plus ebooks there really isn't a thing I won't try once. Yeah I know (head down in shame) I need a life. Lmao

That chapter explains a little bit about michael. The homophobic boss, the competitive almost bully attitude. He never got to be much if a kid at 13 he ended up being the man of the house taking as much responsibilities on as he could. That gruff exterior hides a very wounded little boy. Something else has happened in his past to make him shy so badly from accepting himself as gay. His growing up years, his extra responsibilities and his boss has done a number on him. Asher is up to the task just hope they kill each other before they get kt straightened out. Such a sad chapter but hopefully clears the way a bit for Michael.

And little bit of heartache on the way for Rhyder. Just bits and pieces I've picked up but I wonder rather than lust/love, if it isnt more hero worship because someone is actually paying attention to him . I don't doubt that that his family,your loves him but I don't think he really,ly gets a lot of attention from them just more by product or attention aftermath from what they were doing. Nothing just for him...look at the reason he's there was for his sister but when his sister wanted something different he came so money wouldn't be wasted. So Sam has been paying attention to him....hence hero worship, he needs someone his age just for him.

The boys are handling school, work and everything else really well. The birthday party was hilarious. it's hard to believe they are only 16. Everything seems to be coming up roses but why do I get the feeling there is a bump in the road ahead. Great chapter.