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Hmm I figured it the right time frame but never guessed that the killer was the link. Will be interesting to see how the karaoke works out. Juneau???? Someone has a good imagination.

Oooh don't know who I feel worse for the women on the other end of the phone or David. This first chapter has peaked my interest, gives enough to bait the hook but lots of wiggle room to play before it reels you in. Looking forward to the next chapter.

haha great start to the story. I like how he cant figure out how him adn his sister are alike..oookay..

i love the delusional comment that was so Michael hehe. I think the next little while it is not only Ash that will be doing a lot of healing, granted with Ash it is mostly physical but Michael I think has some mental healing to do as well. Great chapter and i really look forward to the next few. Im glad your home adn recuperating KC hugs

i have a feeling i know where this is going and its going to hurt a lot isnt it. But in the long run what will happen will happen the outcome will be better for it.. right ...Right ???????

You know I'm not really sure what to say about his parents...is there sometime of new application for college or universities that has questions that say if gay check here no knowledge of courses required? No doubt about it he definitely got the raw end of the deal. Yes he did have some handing itbut he was really screwed over and shit on. But to be totally honest in my opinion between being a bit spoiled, childish, over thinks stuff, he has been screwed scared and so many others things that no one person should have to deal with in a lifetime. But in the long run over one summer, a few good friends a boyfriend and an understanding godfather, but most of all time I have to say he has turned out and grown up to be a man that I would be proud to call a friend. A work in progress but I would definitely want him as my best friend.....granted knowing what kinds of friends I have that may not be a recommendation lmao.....

The leg tattoo was perfect. I liked this chapter but it did open a few questions for me. A couple of days ago if he went near the the restaurant to talk he was steered away with kindness and actually a bit of sympathy. Day after he get two tattoos he walks in seated and gives an order for food. Now Isaac will talk to him, hold him, check out his ink and take him home. Don't get wrong very beautiful chapter, but what is the difference of two days. Was Bays point made by ordering food rather than just trying to see Isaac.

You know Zach didn't turn on Bay, Bay turned on Zach. Lena was a Godsend not that Bay appreciated her. His family treated him relatively well, they didn't abuse him, they didn't kick him out of the house. Lol they took him shopping, lol and expected him to have good taste. At school there was no fights, no bias except Alex and even then one word and then he walked around Bay in the hallway. How many others boys being putted at school would have wished for that.

Hmmm so basically Bay pretty much wanted criticism and pain. But met with surprise and acceptance. Going to bed drunk getting woke a few hours later by your best friend would tend to throw you for a loop. He actually handled it well. Other than the outing threat, but I think it was just a threat to get Bay totally about. But Bay went overboard. Really bad chain of events especially if you add in all the previous years events. .

Yes Bay rocks one for sorting everything out or almost and doing it in only a week and two for getting all that ink done on a first go and only taking gen hours to recover lost, but Zupan also rocks by pushing buttons when it was needed then being there to pull Bay up by the shoelaces when he needed the helping hand. I'm pretty sure I'm wrong but I think he had written "Running to Love" or the equivalent. Positive saying lol. This chapter showed to me showed the power and depth of love. All three types...friendship, romantic,love of self. Awesome chapter!!

Okay laugh at. Even all you want but I think I frigging love Zupan right now. A lot more things make sense between the four guys. Now let's hope that Bay can keep up the research therapy and Isaac makes the right choice. I love this story am really going to miss it when it's done.

Bay us getting closer to figuring it out. I have to agree with seanthomas about one thing two brothers have been giving Bay a hard time about making sure Isaac doesn't get hurt which is fine. But why isn't anyone trying to figure out if there is a reason why Bay thinks and says what he did. Obviously he loves Isaac even with the bionic leg and he willingly does everything but receive, so why don't guys so much older than Bay start putting two and two together. It would accomplish alot more than making every one miserable. Just an idea.

Such a sad chapter. So if the letter was archived where would it be now. This story is getting more interesting by the chapter.

LOL so the agnostic believes the story but there others don't, plus being nasty to the guy. Granted it took two sun's to prove his point but at least they believe him now

Ya know Jon really needs to lose that sulky pout when things don't go his way. He knew they were going to meet Kents parents so why the pissiness cause he was asleep when the actual time was set.

Very sneaky very braniac dolphin behe

One question with all the extra work. For the three boys, why do they still have schooling tl complete the levels. Lol some of the work they are doing is outclassing most adults and AIs now.

I love the let's go. Let's go. Let's go. Even Sonic had a say. They should gave moved that AI before this when they started closing off ways and adding firewalls. They new that guy was dangerous :-(

Iarwain I love your sense of humour in this story.

This will be the first time the trio will be separated for any length of time let alone a week. Wonder how that will work for them.

Sharks eh? With all the scientific doodads in the story its nice to see an actual predator that we know from this time. At least it was a tiger shark not a great white though I'm sure Sonic or Wirren would have expounded on Jaws for everyone. Btw love the super dolphin nickname...wonder what the watery equivalent of krytonite would be lol.

Persistent little buggers are the they lol

I think that dolphin has a very applicable name. Cause everything seems to be happening a super sonic speed. Love this story so much.

What a beautiful program so very memorable with the dolphins and sonic but also the audience itself.

It's really hard to believe Sonic is a dolphin he is treated like a person that has special travel needs. things are really heating up with Wirren, wonder if Thom us feeling good left out cause so far nothing really special is happening with him.