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Lol I was figuring 10-20 years didn't think of 200 years hehe. his immunity must have something to do with the DNA restructuring and the 200 years of sleep. Cause afterall isn't sleep usually required after a sickness lol. I like how Konstantin just accepted Shay and Mira closeness funny that Shay was so worried about his reaction when just a day or so ago he was essentially telling shay to go for it lol. Interesting ending with Mira and the Sharpling.

I think the emotions between Mira and Shay is a good thing. Soft, sweet its fits in with the way both of them connection to to each other. I don't think explicit or raunchy sex would fit with this story or with either of the boys. So yeah some sex more as a link for the closeness of the boys but not to overpower the story. Something tells me that we are going to find out the Shay is older than what he thought he was in don't think it's 2104 anymore is it.. You know that saying " there not in Kansas anymore" just might fit here lol.

Wow I like Nephy's comment about Mira being a killing machine it does seem true but really is a killing machine really a killing machine when he does it without thought other than to protect one person. I get the idea Mira is killing people as we see it but to him he is protecting, the actual kill is just a by-product of protecting Shay. for each step on the path Shay and Mira seems to uncover two new paths. but all in all whether he is aware of killing persay or whether to higher is just protecting I'm really glad Mira is on Shays side lol.

I never fully trusted sofia she just seemed to sweet to be real. If you live off the land wouldn't someone want something different like say a restaurant meal definitely not a picnic in a cave. om the bits and peices he remembers I don't think he is going to want to remember fully what happened. I'm glad Mira found him and that Shay feels safe with him. Nowmy question is was Carlos trying to save Shah or get Mira there to trap him as well.

With all the examples given on why people are gay the example the cop gave to his son was so simple and poignant. His sons anguish at his dad treating him like that probably brought it home to him in a way that few examples would have done and so simply. This was a beautiful chapter and I think in just a small way eases Hugh pain or rather will start to ease it. It must be so hard on Hugh to be back in that town and now back in that house with so many memories. You have a way of writing that with just a few words can twist you emotionally to tears, sadness but you always leave us with just that little something at the end of the chapter that gives us a silver lining on a dark stormcloud. Ty and can't wait for next chapter

Wow what a chapter. So many points of stress for Alex. Worry about his parents if they are alright, worry about Marie stuck in the middle of nowhere relying on a stranger for a lift. We won't even talk about the two who call themselves Kei's parents. God what morons!!. But in the end Alex got to see and talk to Kei, yes he is a bit confused but he is aware of what's going on and he recognized Alex and Rose right away. The rest can be dealt with in its time. Alex might question Kei putting him in control but Alex proved without a doubt that he can handle it and he will put Kei first. Looking forward go next installment, which means we will hear more from the morons once the shock of being put in their place is over lol.

Great story. I like the way shay is getting info and slotting it in with what he knows ie:the sunlight scenario his father's speech on landing clicking in with what Konstantines mate was saying. I seen the date with year on the compiles but since he has no idea with what the actual date/year is now it doesn't really help much but I am thinking years more than months has passed since he was first put to sleep. Hopefully Mira doesn't catch anything after biting that hand lol.

Great story, kinda surprised at the fact that Shay really hasn't caught on to the fact that it's been more than a few days since he was put in the stabilizer. You would think that he would realize that something isn't right and his parents won't be found easily or at all. At least he has Mira at lest for now.

Great story short and sweet. I like the confidence Rueben showed in Jase rather than jumping at the chance of keeping Jason close to him he agreed that in the long run University would be a more viable course to go. Wish the story was a bit longer but still enjoyed it very much.

Is it just me or are they moving really fast. They make a cute couple but Rueben really needs to get over the lack of confidence in Jason. Good story though.

So let's see kids write graffiti slurs on school property, the cafeteria no less, paints more traditional on the students truck, and add to that the teacher himself yells slurs to all who hears. Yet the student that it was against is the one that is expelled from school. What part of that is screwed nine ways to Sundays. Yeah he prolly shouldn't have hit the teacher but what about the rest of it. He should have went to the press, I'm sorry but whether he was learning anything new or not it was the principal of the thing. You don't go punishing the person who was wronged in the first place Gay or not it's just not right. But other than that I enjoyed the last part of the chapter hehe

Haha the joys and trials of 14year Olds. Though I have to admit Gina does have a pretty good head on her shoulders,Andy is still you typical 14old male. Nice chapter.

And so the firestorm starts, this is not going to turn out good is it?

Oh boy isee mega fireworks in the near future. It's not going to go over well when Micah and William find out that "Hunter" is actually Jovan. Wonder when Hunter clues into the big pay out in his account lol.

I'm not sure about what to think about the whole privacy thing. Weird can't lock doors before your either a prostitute or sixteen. Wearing colours seem to be in that same catagory. It's actually a sad story if you take into effect the loss of innocence and everything

Haha priceless that ending was perfect....but only 20years huh?

So devious but hopefully still legal. Too bad this was just a one chapter story would have been interesting to see the fathers reaction and the young women's lol

I can see where Brad is coming from he is just getting over a bad relationship that hurt him as well as his son. Now he so badly wants to get to know his new man but what if it doesn't work it won't just be him getting her hurt. It's his sons teacher, what will happen to his son. All good questions but look at it this way Brad hurt both father and son, he left its over now it's time to continue on with their life. Jaime is correct there are ways to minimize a bad outcome but which is worse not feeling anything and hiding out just in case something might happen that will hurt or grabbing cautiously with both hands and finding out there is life after Brad. I say go for it it won't be easy and there will be ups and downs but I think the outcome will make three people exceptionally happy.

What a beautiful chapter, but so very sad. I like the way that you brought the past to life and summer up Davids life so eloquently. I find it amazing how you could turn a simple description of a guitar into a seeming postscript of Jeremy's eulogy by describing what we know to what they now had it fit in so well. I know I said it before but I love the way that you so seemingly interwoven names and aspects of reality of what has actually happened now into this story from the future and did it so well that it's believable that we accept that it really did happen. I hope there is more to this story, a way to see that the ideals that David started will be company, completed and continued thru Jeremy and his huge circle of friends.

Haje is in a world of confusion right now. His beloved brother who shared everything with him but for this last project is dead. He finds out the bodyguard who was supposed to protect him is now protecting him since someone has already tried to kill him. I like Vincent but he is going to have to deal with Shins death as well lol. Can't wait for next installment.

Cole learns to swim fast after being thrown in at the deep end. I'm glad Jared didnt let temper scare him away. He needs to give Cole a break though I seriously doubt that Cole would flee if Jared went ahead and tried to talk with his voice as well as his hands think you would find the opposite in that Cole would back him every word of the way. But bad experiences are hard to overcome sometimes.

Haha Reuben must be in heaven. Going from being a spectator to a full participant. Dee did good hehe

Interesting this chapter didn't have the same intense vibe if the first chapter. This was more a teen learning a new place he mentions a couple times loose threats of him being a bad guy but mostly it was a watch and see thing. Linda nice but prolly won't last long lol. Looking forward to next chapters....maybe more Chance huh?

Wonder how Jesse's chest feels. Surprisingly that was relatively calm meeting. Guess the loud upheaval will be when the mothers get home huh?. It caused a lot of heartache the delayed help for Jesse, but truthfully I don't think it could have come any sooner. Jesse spent so much time ignoring his past that it wasn't til Maxie that he started to accept and deal with it. But at leather is on the road to "being fixed" just hope the two of them will be able go handle the fallout between friends, family and school.

Trips down memory lane aren't always pleasant but hopefully Hugh's will be a good thing. Something tells me that the trip hinges a on Jonathan plight. Hopefully the next chapter is soon. Hopefully Hugh is able to continue to let the light in, I think maybe now us the time.